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on Mon Nov 21, 2016 7:54 pm

Name: Golden Benediction
Rank: S | Legendary
Type: Weapon/Lance
Materials: Ribs of an ancient sea monster
Visual Description:

The legendary twin to Crimson Prayer, this spear, born of the ribs of the same monstrosity whose skull crafted its brother, Golden Benediction is quite notably the shorter of the two spears. Just over 1.1 meters, the spear is most commonly wielded in the off hand and, due to its shorter size and increased maneuverability, serves to block and deflect attacks or to launch quicker, shorter ranged ones. Because of this, and because of Crimson Prayer's rather obvious ability, this spear generally appears as the less important of the two, an appearance furthered by the fact that it is frequently the first one tossed aside should the need arise. The blade of the weapon is similarly sized as the larger variant, measuring just over a foot, and can likewise either pierce or slash. The entire construct is a shining golden color and filled with intricate carvings, though most often the wielded will carry it in a violet cloth to shield it, and it tapers off to a small spike at the end, useful for small jabs.  
Power: 000
Unique stat: 500
Endurance: 1500
Ability:

  • Major: Mortality: While the curse of its twin bears a deep hatred for chakra, this spear carries sealed within it the concept of "mortality," making it unfit to cause notable damage of the physical sort to nearly anything. Instead, the blade, when striking a living entity, imbues within it its own mortality, signified by its unique stat, which in turn causes damage. To nearly all life, this simply translates to the blade functioning as one would expect of a weapon, striking them with the unaltered power of its unique stat and causing damage should they fail to resist or block it.

    However, to those with enhanced life energies and forces, the blade ignores their physical existence entirely. Instead, the sword siphons away their excess life, in accordance with the unique stat, and stores it within the fabric of the weapon. The weapon cannot reduce the life force of any being to less than one hundred. Life force stolen through this function is added to the stats of the weapons, half going to the unique stat and half going to the endurance. Lasts until the end of the topic.
  • Major: Golden Rose: Wounds inflicted by this weapon resist healing by unnatural methods, doubling the cost and time required of medical jutsu used to treat the wound and removing any and all cost reduction benefits the healer may have. This curse remains until the wound is healed - naturally or otherwise. Life force damaged by this recovers, though requires twice the normal time and cannot be expedited.
  • Major TBA
  • Bonus Minor: TBA

Cost: 20,000 exp
Requirements: Uzumaki DNA | Only 1


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on Thu Nov 24, 2016 6:19 am
LF Absorbing can only be for the topic, and its 10 LF a hit absorbed, ill even allow 10 per consecutive post the spear is kept in the opponent, but piercing does have to happen.

And its been asked that you Specifiy Unnatural healing Methods.

Also this is a Weapon not an Item or Armor, and as such does not get to benifit from Unique Stat.

No Natural Regneration can be Negated, which is the LF that someone is at Naturally in other words, IE doing RAQ and gaining that 150 Life force, or Even Avalon's Body as that is an Evolution of the Senju/Uzumaki Bloodline.

But I could see this Removing LF buffs from Eyes, or if a Sage mode or something like that grants LF, or even a Jin's Cloaked boost
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on Thu Nov 24, 2016 8:30 am
Thank you for the review.

Unnatural healing methods would be anything other than healing over time.

I put the power into the unique stat to signify that the spear does no physical damage at all but instead only damages life force.

If that is universally true, than immortals can never be killed. But this does not negate natural regeneration. Only unnatural regeneration.

No 100% sure what you mean by the last part. I didn't think that life force was partitioned like that. I thought it was just a pool you got, regardless of how you acquired it.

10 per hit: if that is universally true in all instances and can never be circumvented for any reason, legendary weapon or otherwise, I will simply attempt to revamp the weapon. But if that is how life force reduction works, there's hardly any point in such a reduction at all.

I can only assume Crimson Prayer is fine now.
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on Thu Nov 24, 2016 9:20 pm
Well these things are in accordance to what a B-rank Jutsu would be equivelent to (A Major ability on a Weapon) however since your weapon is Legendary I suppose we could allow up to S-rank level , which I would say is 50 at most (Which FYI 3 hits or consecutive posts takes out even the most basic of Senju)

Then your Power needs to be 500 your ability will cover the fact that it is Physically Harmless but more of a Spiritual weapon.

What do you mean by Healing over time? do you mean the LF healing?

I mean if something that boost LF like a Cloak or Eyes, then this could Easily Automatically negate that LF boost.

And I cannot speak on Crimson Prayer at this time, I must check with Kagura if it is appropiete in his eyes
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on Sun Nov 27, 2016 4:24 pm

Name: Gáe Bulg | Kamishini no Yari
Crimson Prayer (Original)
Rank: S | Legendary
Type: Spear/Lance
Materials: Curruid's Skull
Visual Description:

Acquired from Jun Uzumaki, the spear has recently been reforged and slightly altered to better accommodate its new wielder, increasing its overall length to two meters, the main blade stretching just over twelve inches while the butt end tapers off to a simple, sharp point. On the edge of each blade side are two small, two and a half inch wings which serve as a kind of guard to the actual blade. It retains the vibrant, gem-like red color of its original make and still retains the various etchings which span the whole spear, though these Uzumaki runes have now been activated, granting the pole arm newfound powers. Most commonly, Kodoku carries the weapon upon his back and conceals it beneath a simple, violet wrapping.

Recent findings have uncovered that it has, allegedly, descended from the spear wielded by an ancient god of the skies and Ko, in tampering with this, has uncovered and forged the spear's legendary nature. Imbued with twin curses, the lance heralds doom to all enemies.
Power: 800
Unique stat:
Endurance: 1200
Ability:

  • Major: Crimson Rose: A curse against the unnatural flow of chakra, the lance attacks and destroys chakra in all it strikes. Most notably, this causes any currently pierced by or in contact with the spear - aside from its wielder - to suffer a complete inability to mold their chakra until the contact is severed. Additionally, the weapon can cleave directly through chakra constructs, such as armors and cloaks. When attacking objects crafted from pure chakra or intangible elements, it is granted double its power. In the event that the spear cannot pierce the defenses, most commonly in the case of physical elemental defenses, the weapon will 'cut' the object, reducing the endurance of that section by the blade's power and wounding that object. The spearman can then seek to strike the same area again, resulting in stacking reductions until the defense breaks.

    Even in the case of non-tangible defenses, these wounds created by the blade will not heal and cannot be reformed unless the user reactivates the entire technique. In doing this, chakra discounts for the technique will no longer apply. This weapon is, thus, quite potent against those reliant on artificial defense and bijuu cloaks.

  • Major: Golden Rose: The twin curse to that of the above chakra based one, this spear carries sealed within it the concept of "mortality," imparting such mortal limitations upon whatever it attacks. The blade, when striking a living entity, seeks not only to harm them physically to but assault their spirit as well. In the face of this power, conventional endurance becomes more or less meaningless as the spear pierces the enemy's very soul.

    When used against foes with artificial boosts to their life forces, such as those with bonuses granted by doujutsu or bijuu cloaks, the spear will instantly negate these upon a successful blow.


  • Major: Barbed Spear that Pierces with Death: Wounds inflicted by this weapon resist healing by unnatural methods, tripling the cost and time required of medical jutsu used to treat the wound and removing any and all cost reduction benefits the healer may have. This curse remains until the wound is healed - naturally or otherwise. Life force damaged by this recovers, though requires thrice the normal time and cannot be expedited.

  • Bonus Minor: Regret: The sword shall inflict its curse upon apparitions and other entities spawned by someone which retain any link to that person, causing damage to go through a kind of 'feed back' loop to the original. Only abilities or creatures which have a direct connection to the enemy shall suffer this kind of feedback, meaning a fire ball would not while any sort of clone certainly would. "Crimson Rose" is not eligible for this feedback, but can still damage the entity as normal.

Cost: 20,000 exp | Only 1
Requirements: Uzumaki DNA


Redid this more or less. Matched your above requests and suggestions and decided to just roll the two lances into one. Oh and yes, life force healing would be part of healing over time, so that is not impeded by this.
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