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Mask of Blades

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on Sun Jun 19, 2016 3:48 am
Name: Mask of Blades
Rank: S
Type: Mask
Materials: Graphene & Steel
Visual Description: The mask itself is a painted white, with mystic swirls on the mask, highlighting the mystic nature of its owner, as well as hiding his eyes due to the Auritcal Enhancement ability. No matter what, when the mask is on, the user's eyes appear a bright orange color, often being mistaken for Jinchuuriki eyes. Naturally the mask covers the entirety of the user's face, specifically design for Kuro. The mask is shaped in a sort of oval, fitting the curvature of Kuro's own face, reaching Eight inches from top to bottom, while the width reaches five and a half inches, leaving a bit of overhang on the chin and cheeks, for comfort. The mask was designed with the idea of hiding literally all of Kuro's facial features, even disguising his eyes to be the orange color

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Power:
Endurance: 1000
Ability:
Auritcal Reinforcement - The mask itself is not special, the physical structure at least. In terms of what keeps the mask worthwhile, it is the mechanics behind the mask. A simple storage seal resides within the mask, constantly absorbing Natural Energy and converting it into chakra that is then given to the user to replenish their reserves, or storing it into the seal itself. While the storage seal itself is what allows the mask to store the chakra, the actual absorption and conversion happens due to the special material found in the middle of the mask, which does the process naturally, so even destroying the seal itself will not destroy the ability to constantly replenish chakra at a rate of 15 chakra per post. However, this also denies any chance of stealth while active, due to the constant usage of chakra. Further, it subtracts 150 from the user's Genjutsu points when counting in both offense AND defense. Even so the distribution of chakra denies the user the ability to enhance themselves with jutsu while the mask is active. The mask can be activated or deactivated at will, but takes a post before the mask will work again. The chakra is added only at the end of the post.
Cost: 8500 (S rank weapon) + 8000 (1 Major ability)
Requirements: Kurokon Shikyo's chakra signature (Adapts to changes in chakra signature based on additions to it, such as a new element being learned or a bloodline being added)


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on Sun Jun 19, 2016 6:50 pm
Greetings and good evening. I will be the host of reviewing your mask today. Let's get started.

Rank: OK!

Type: OK!

Visual Description: Please provide a sizing by means of width and height along the face. Measurements are everything.~ Wouldn't want you taken advantage of.

Power/Endurance: OK!

Ability: Okay, now we have a problem.

See...Your mask is like a hyperactive Yin Seal. Unfortunately, we can't allow this mannerism of ability that you wish to tinker with, despite it being a really good one! What could be accepted would be alternatively changing your mask to be a form of container to hold X amount of chakra that you can convert into during your down time. The reasoning behind this is simple:

Let's say you have Ninjutsu 5. You have a 50% discount to all S rank jutsu and below.

Let's say an S rank jutsu somehow costs 50 chakra naturally. You only have to pay 25 chakra.

Therefore, you're basically recovering S-rank Jutsus every turn with your own downside being that you suck at hiding.


This is where the problem lies. Can you comply within the offered ideal or create one that would properly balance out con vs pro?

Thank you for your time!
- Omoi

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on Sun Jun 19, 2016 8:57 pm
Edited for that, though I only altered the numbers with the ability, as well as adding in two new cons to the ability. If its still unusable, then that is sad.

The mask was more designed to be a less restrictive way to regenerate chakra over time, but still be useful in combat, not simply give me S rank chakra each turn, so apologies if it seems that way. I would hope the is approvable now
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