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The Irons of Roland Otsutsuki

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on Thu Jun 09, 2016 11:53 am
Name: The Irons
Rank: S
Type: 20 knives
Materials: Ancient Otsutsuki steel
Visual Description: The blades themselves are sleek and silver in color, and always reflect light when not covered. There are twenty of them in all, and each one have the same dimensions: they are all six inches long and two inches wide, with the depth at its greatest in the middle at a quarter of an inch, tapering down to a sharp tip. The blades are sharp on both sides, making them well-suited for piercing and slicing. The handles are made from a polished, smooth ivory that has been bleached to white, slightly curved with a pointed pommel coated in more Otsutsuki steel to give the end a tapered, sharp point for piercing capability. This point extends beyond the wielder's grip by about a full inch, giving the one holding it a possible secondary attack. Each handle is a little longer than eight inches, giving plenty of room for a hand to comfortably grip the handle. There is no guard between the grip and the blade, only a smooth transition from ivory to steel that confuses the eye, as though the two halves have always been one. Just above the ivory handle is a single small notch on either side of the blade, below the cutting edge. These notches are finely rounded, though they are only 1/8 of an inch in diameter.
Power: 600
Endurance: 400
Ability:

Avalon's Revenge - Major Ability - The ability is connected directly to the ancient Otsutsuki steel. The technique used to give the steel this ability was lost more than 200 years ago, and it is extremely unlikely that it will ever be recovered. The steel, both in the blade and the pointed pommel, disrupt chakra on contact. Those who touch the steel directly find it more difficult to use jutsu, pushing the chakra cost of jutsu (that use chakra) up by a single rank for one post, or in the case of S-rank jutsu, making the jutsu cost 1.5x the normal amount of chakra, also for a single post. When cut with the steel, the one cut will feel as though they are disconnected from their chakra for a single post. Multiple strikes or touches can increase the length of these effects, but only to a maximum of three rounds. In addition, wounds made by these knives disrupt healing chakra, making chakra-based healing incapable of healing such wounds; they must be healed naturally, as even jutsu that attempt to speed up the reproduction rate of cells will not work. The cells nearest the wound will simply reject the chakra. This ability does not affect civilians or anyone that has never used or can never use chakra, though it is not known why this is the case.
Nature chakra is affected completely differently by the knives. As the power comes from nature itself, nature chakra is wholly unaffected by the blades. In addition, Nature chakra would not be affected by the knives stopping chakra healing; the Nature chakra acts as a catalyst to allow this type of healing.
Cost: S-rank weapon: 8500 ryo (Grand Opening Bonus)
Major Ability: 8000 ryo
Requirements: Rank 4 Bukijutsu to wield, Rank 5 Bukijutsu to wield without touching the steel.


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on Fri Jun 10, 2016 12:37 pm
1. Its a set of knives okay sure.
2. Max stats for S-rank weapon is 1000. You have 1200 there, so please adjust the Endurance and Power.
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Those who touch the steel directly find it more difficult to use jutsu, pushing the chakra cost of jutsu (that use chakra) up by a single rank, or in the case of S-rank jutsu, making the jutsu cost 1.5x the normal amount of chakra.
Please state how long it lasts for.

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In addition, wounds made by these knives disrupt healing chakra, making chakra-based healing incapable of healing such wounds; they must be healed naturally, as even jutsu that attempt to speed up the reproduction rate of cells will not work. The cells nearest the wound will simply reject the chakra. This ability does not affect civilians or anyone that has never used or can never use chakra, though it is not known why this is the case.

How does this affect things like Nature Chakra? That is something entirely different, so please add its limits.

5. Wielding it without touching the knives, is at least another Minor ability. So please add one.

6. Overall I like the concept on this for sure.
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on Fri Jun 10, 2016 1:01 pm
2. Made the stats 600/400.
3. Included that touching the steel lasts for one post. Also added this: "Multiple strikes or touches can increase the length of these effects, but only to a maximum of three rounds."
4. Added a paragraph at the end of the Major Ability allowing Nature chakra to be unaffected.
5. Minor misunderstanding. Saul Goodman.
6. Thanks.
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on Fri Jun 10, 2016 3:05 pm



APPROVED!

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