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Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Name: Key Square
Rank: B
Cost: 30
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Blaze
Range: Susano'o
Speed: N/A
Power: +2x Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: An augmentation which Jianyu can add to his Susano'o or variants of at any point, this spontaneously transmutes the otherwise basic chakra weave of the avatar into that of the cursed flames of Amaterasu, enshrouding the user with a quasi-living projection made of black flames. This technique, rather uniquely, does not simply cover the Susano'o with the black flames but actually fuses it with the avatar, granting extra power to the summoned creature. When used by Jianyu, whose Susano'o is golden in color, the flames begin as gold before turning black, granting the infrequent and fleeting view of golden flames lurking beneath the black swathe of inferno, earning him the tile of "The Lord of Sunlight."
Combination:Susano'o and variants


You are adding x2 your chakra to your Susanoo's power? If so, this needs to be limited, cost way more, and have upkeep.
Are the flames the power of Amaterasu or this technique?

Name: The Bell Jar
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: Triggered by being in range of the genjutsu, this illusion dilates any and all victim's perceptions of time, causing everything to appear to take a near-infinite amount of time. This extends not simply to physical actions but sensations and thoughts, slowing everything to a pace beyond glacial. This does not affect the target's speed, though in the initial post after being affected and the first post after escaping syncing one's body up with one's thoughts can prove incredibly awkward.  Rather, the ability seeks to mentally exhaust the opposition as, when even the sensation of pain moving from your hand to your brain can seem to take a hundred years, complete mental collapse is almost assured. Because of this, victims quickly feel as though they are trapped within their own bodies and, in the course of a few posts, they can easily feel as if they have been trapped there for many a lifetime.
Combination:Any


Pick a different trigger that actually makes sense please.


Name: Mad Tea Party
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points + Target(s)' gen points
Handseals:
Description: An illusion which borders upon complete insanity, this genjutsu appears to simply improve the victim's attention. By sharing with the opponent the user's incredible perception and capacity for rapid thought, he forcibly heightens the perceptive powers of enemies. Superficially, this appears to simply increase the senses of those affected, sharpening their sight, hearing, and such to previously unheard of levels. However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the sum of all parties' genjutsu points.

Truthfully, this illusions alters the prey's consciousness in an extremely subtle way, removing the brain's natural filtration of "useless" information. For example, the eyes can always see the nose but, at almost all times, the brain simply chooses to look beyond this, filtering out the pointlessness of always being able to look at one's nose. This illusion inhibits this sort of filtration, turning unconscious action into purely conscious action and forcing those under its sway to, essentially, think themselves to death. Every single firing of a nerve, every bit of feedback from motion, every tiny breath of air upon the flesh become utterly demanding of attention, causing victims to have to manually evaluate each and every thought, sensation, action, and reaction. The mind, having only a certain amount of attention it can give and under the stress of an infinite amount of stimuli and movements, of actions and thoughts, eventually gives out. While people can be easily driven insane, this is not always the case. Instead, those under this illusion are driven to an utter paralysis of thought as simply observing everything around and within them dominates their every thought.
Combination:

The power of this is not allowed to be your gen points plus theirs. Or else make this a limited technique and bump up the cost.


Name: Initiative
Rank: N/A
Cost: N/A
Upkeep: N/A
Type: General Ability
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user takes the abilities of the Rinnegan to produce black chakra receivers to new heights by combining it with Jianyu's extensive knowledge in fabrication and construction. Most often he simply creates arrows for his bow, allowing him to no longer need replenishment of the more basic variety, each complete with fetching comprised of thin, flexible black receiver filaments. Of course, other constructions are also possible, so long as they are comprised of the receivers. These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment.
Combination: N/A


How are you making weapons with your chakra power and no chakra cost?



Jianyu wrote:Name: Kamui
Rank: S | Limited | Canon
Cost: Below
Upkeep: 20
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self | 100 m
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: N/A
Description: A strange technique born of the Mangekyou's kaleidoscopic vision, this allows the user to see into and transfer targets or him/herself to or from an alternative dimension. Additionally, the user can, upon viewing any gateway to a different dimension or other warping between dimensions, choose to synchronize his or her Kamui with that dimension, allowing them access to said dimension at any time. Each user of Kamui has his or her own, personal Kamui dimension, though eye pairings share a dimensions, so if two users each have one eye, they both interact, by default, with the same dimension. This technique has, historically, been likened to the legendary Flying Thunder God technique, though requiring no hand seals or sealing forumulae, it has been noted as superior to the former technique.

This ability has a wide range of uses, commonly classified into two distinct "forms." The first centers around moving one's self between the user's dimension, allowing them to move large distances instantaneously by slipping away into their dimension and exiting at another location and bringing anything they are touching with them. Alternatively, the user can draw themselves into the dimension partially, resulting in a kind of intangibility as he or she no longer exists within 'normal' dimension. When used in this way, the user becomes virtually unaffected by anything outside of their Kamui dimension, but cannot interact with anything outside of that dimension. When using this, the user's chakra becomes utterly untraceable and they can utterly circumvent barrier ninjutsu. Also, the user can suck objects or creatures into the dimensions via contact, storing these items in the dimension for later. These items can then be expelled with varying degrees of force, allowing the user to retrieve items or fire weapons from their eye at a moment's notice.

The other version of this technique is a long ranged one which focuses a time-space barrier around an object within the user's line of sight, whisking anything within that space into the Kamui dimension. The size of this barrier can change at the user's whim, allowing them to target both small and large things with extreme precision.

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  • Teleportation:

    • 0-300 meters costs 25 chakra + 10 MS points.
    • 301+ meters requires 50 chakra + 15 MS points.


  • Object Absorption:

    • Sub-human-sized objects or creatures cost 10 chakra + 10 MS points per object
    • Human-sized objects or creatures - plus intangibly - cost 10 chakra + 10 MS points per object
    • Massive objects or creatures (bijuu, buildings, ect) cost 35 chakra + 15 MS points per object
    • Expulsion of stored objects sub-human-sized objects costs 5 chakra + 5 MS points; can occur en mass




1.
Jianyu wrote:The other version of this technique is a long ranged one which focuses a time-space barrier around an object within the user's line of sight, whisking anything within that space into the Kamui dimension. The size of this barrier can change at the user's whim, allowing them to target both small and large things with extreme precision.

Make the range of this 10 meters; and the speed you absorb people is 700. Recall that your absorption with this technique is not instant, and neither is the range infinite; it can be interrupted. This is not a space-time barrier, you are simply sucking them in. The power of the "suck" can be 700.

If you want the option of making the sucking zone larger, than pitch me a cost per enhanced size of it.

2. The speed you absorb yourself in, i.e. teleport, is 600; and you cannot teleport to a place you have never been to. Recall that teleporting yourself is much slower than teleporting others with this tech.

3. Your "intangibility" should cost you 40 chakra; and you make intangible only items that are yours that you are touching; NOT PEOPLE.

4.
Jianyu wrote:Additionally, the user can, upon viewing any gateway to a different dimension or other warping between dimensions, choose to synchronize his or her Kamui with that dimension, allowing them access to said dimension at any time.

Give me a method of you syncing. Not just "you saw". Your eyes do not allow you to "see" dimensions (like my Galgan for example), you can just travel into them. So you need to explain how you can sync your kamui to other dimensions. And yes I know Obito pulled it off etc. I'm not denying this; but elaborate.

5. Double the chakra cost for your absorption of things into your dimension. And, once more, you are not allowed to "cast" intangibility.

6. The chakra you spend in teleporting, if it is to another topic etc. must be deducted from you in that topic. Meaning when you teleport somewhere, deduct 50 chakra from yourself thus; since it is instant travel.

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Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Name: Key Square
Rank: B
Cost: 30
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Blaze
Range: Susano'o
Speed: N/A
Power: +User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: An augmentation which Jianyu can add to his Susano'o or variants of at any point, this spontaneously transmutes the otherwise basic chakra weave of the avatar into that of the cursed flames of Amaterasu, enshrouding the user with a quasi-living projection made of black flames. This technique, rather uniquely, does not simply cover the Susano'o with the black flames but actually fuses it with the avatar, granting extra power to the summoned creature. When used by Jianyu, whose Susano'o is golden in color, the flames begin as gold before turning black, granting the infrequent and fleeting view of golden flames lurking beneath the black swathe of inferno, earning him the tile of "The Lord of Sunlight."
Combination:Susano'o and variants


This needs to be S rank and 60 chakra; and have upkeep. I was asking if the flames around your Susanoo, which you consider to be Amaterasu, have Amaterasu's power or do they have the power of this technique. And do they have Amaterasu' effect?

Name: The Bell Jar
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: Triggered by being in range of the genjutsu, this illusion dilates any and all victim's perceptions of time, causing everything to appear to take a near-infinite amount of time. This extends not simply to physical actions but sensations and thoughts, slowing everything to a pace beyond glacial. This does not affect the target's speed, though in the initial post after being affected and the first post after escaping syncing one's body up with one's thoughts can prove incredibly awkward.  Rather, the ability seeks to mentally exhaust the opposition as, when even the sensation of pain moving from your hand to your brain can seem to take a hundred years, complete mental collapse is almost assured. Because of this, victims quickly feel as though they are trapped within their own bodies and, in the course of a few posts, they can easily feel as if they have been trapped there for many a lifetime.
Combination:Any


Apparently Gen binding is an "area trigger" - so you may have this.

Name: Mad Tea Party
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: An illusion which borders upon complete insanity, this genjutsu appears to simply improve the victim's attention. By sharing with the opponent the user's incredible perception and capacity for rapid thought, he forcibly heightens the perceptive powers of enemies. Superficially, this appears to simply increase the senses of those affected, sharpening their sight, hearing, and such to previously unheard of levels. However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the sum of all parties' genjutsu points.

Truthfully, this illusions alters the prey's consciousness in an extremely subtle way, removing the brain's natural filtration of "useless" information. For example, the eyes can always see the nose but, at almost all times, the brain simply chooses to look beyond this, filtering out the pointlessness of always being able to look at one's nose. This illusion inhibits this sort of filtration, turning unconscious action into purely conscious action and forcing those under its sway to, essentially, think themselves to death. Every single firing of a nerve, every bit of feedback from motion, every tiny breath of air upon the flesh become utterly demanding of attention, causing victims to have to manually evaluate each and every thought, sensation, action, and reaction. The mind, having only a certain amount of attention it can give and under the stress of an infinite amount of stimuli and movements, of actions and thoughts, eventually gives out. While people can be easily driven insane, this is not always the case. Instead, those under this illusion are driven to an utter paralysis of thought as simply observing everything around and within them dominates their every thought.
Combination:


"causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the sum of all parties' genjutsu points."
^Explain that.


Name: Initiative
Rank: N/A
Cost: N/A
Upkeep: N/A
Type: General Ability
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user takes the abilities of the Rinnegan to produce black chakra receivers to new heights by combining it with Jianyu's extensive knowledge in fabrication and construction. Most often he simply creates arrows for his bow, allowing him to no longer need replenishment of the more basic variety, each complete with fetching comprised of thin, flexible black receiver filaments. Of course, other constructions are also possible, so long as they are comprised of the receivers. These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment.
Combination: N/A


Your free, chakra receiving black rods were not meant to be high level weapons or else they would not be free. They are meant to send and receive chakra. So you making them as powerful as your chakra stat is denied. Pick a more reasonable number for these considering they are supplementary as well as complementary.

Kamui

1. We do not go purely by canon on virtually any of canon techs. We make them in accordance to site scales as well as what as taking into consideration how the tech works.
Wikia can be edited by anyone and is not perfectly accurate. We use it for reference, but all canon techs have to be made according to how the site works.

2. We can flesh out kamui and make it more specifc; but you will be adding the cost and edits I already asked for.

3. A copy-paste from the wikia is not remotely helpful and is quite inefficient since it is not specific at all. And it is denied.

4. Kamui has a speed; it can be fast, but it has a speed.

5. Explain to me how you can teleport to a place you have never been on this planet; on purpose.

6. Your explanation of how you sync dimensions seems reasonable enough. You do not get to "manipulate" the dimension, however.

Whatever you want kamui to do, I need to be scaled reasonably and a more consise description. The one you had before was fine, but you did not place any limits or numbers even though every aspect of this technique is not instantaneous (regardless of what a narutofanboy might have said). So I will let you re-write it including the things ive asked for as well as how you can most simply describe how you want/it actually works.

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on Fri Dec 02, 2016 9:50 pm
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Key Square: They are blaze release flames. They are the power of this technique I suppose? I still don't get what you mean by this.

I was confused because you kept mentioning flames an Amaterasu. I thought these flames somehow were Amaterasu, but added to your Susanoo; hence why I was asking if they have the affect. I see now they are different flames, still blaze release, that have a power equal to your chakra.

The Bell Jar: Yep.

Mad Tea Party: It should say "by the user's genjutsu points." Forgot to edit that.

Initiative: Sure. What would you suggest? What power do they inherently have as they have canonically pierced through Naruto's fully powered Nine-Tails cloak?

The ones you are getting for free will not be that powerful. The ones I intended to give for free were simply chakra receivers. If you would like to make the version that can pierce through a cloak etc. than we can talk similar numbers; but there must be a cost as I'm sure you can understand.

I'll address Kamui when I have more time. But, again, the costs are based on FTG, a technique which this specifically surpasses.

It does surpass it in various ways; but the costs are far too low given the fact that you not only teleport; you suck up into your dimension and can do so with enemies.
I sincerely hope you understand why intangibility is not going to cost only ten chakra. And you will not be making HUMANS you touch intangible with this tech. That will be a whole separate situation.

Do me a favour and make kamui carefully and make it easy to check please. Don't make me hound you for explanations and numbers etc. Anything you want to do - give it numbers unless it is not applicable.


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[22:17:04] @ Noir Senju : I'm legitly loosing everything if I lose.
[12:09:51] Jianyu Uchiha : We gotta keep competitive in the arms race of which land has how many Sorikata.
[21:26:29] Rei Uchiha : If you have beef with someone, let them know & give far chance
[16:55:16] Psychosis : Maybe but people get PISSED when you take shit away from them based on a misunderstanding.
[16:55:23] Psychosis : A lot of being staff is knowing how to not piss people off.
[16:56:30] Psychosis : Have you met most RPers?
[20:12:14] Muroku Washiba : This is no WE is MEssiah
[14:26:12]Cecilia Terumi : Pretty much let the snake find the hole, and make it fit. >>
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Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Name: Key Square
Rank: B
Cost: 30
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Blaze
Range: Susano'o
Speed: N/A
Power: +User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: An augmentation which Jianyu can add to his Susano'o or variants of at any point, this spontaneously transmutes the otherwise basic chakra weave of the avatar into that of the cursed flames of Amaterasu, enshrouding the user with a quasi-living projection made of black flames. This technique, rather uniquely, does not simply cover the Susano'o with the black flames but actually fuses it with the avatar, granting extra power to the summoned creature. When used by Jianyu, whose Susano'o is golden in color, the flames begin as gold before turning black, granting the infrequent and fleeting view of golden flames lurking beneath the black swathe of inferno, earning him the tile of "The Lord of Sunlight."
Combination:Susano'o and variants


So you shroud your Susanoo in black flames that have the power of your chakra. Ok. These flames do not get the same unique affect of Susanoo.
Make this S rank like I asked and adjust the cost; and add an upkeep.


Name: The Bell Jar
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: Triggered by being in range of the genjutsu, this illusion dilates any and all victim's perceptions of time, causing everything to appear to take a near-infinite amount of time. This extends not simply to physical actions but sensations and thoughts, slowing everything to a pace beyond glacial. This does not affect the target's speed, though in the initial post after being affected and the first post after escaping syncing one's body up with one's thoughts can prove incredibly awkward.  Rather, the ability seeks to mentally exhaust the opposition as, when even the sensation of pain moving from your hand to your brain can seem to take a hundred years, complete mental collapse is almost assured. Because of this, victims quickly feel as though they are trapped within their own bodies and, in the course of a few posts, they can easily feel as if they have been trapped there for many a lifetime.
Combination:Any

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Name: Mad Tea Party
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: An illusion which borders upon complete insanity, this genjutsu appears to simply improve the victim's attention when in range. By sharing with the opponent the user's incredible perception and capacity for rapid thought, he forcibly heightens the perceptive powers of enemies. Superficially, this appears to simply increase the senses of those affected, sharpening their sight, hearing, and such to previously unheard of levels. However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the user's genjutsu points.

Truthfully, this illusions alters the prey's consciousness in an extremely subtle way, removing the brain's natural filtration of "useless" information. For example, the eyes can always see the nose but, at almost all times, the brain simply chooses to look beyond this, filtering out the pointlessness of always being able to look at one's nose. This illusion inhibits this sort of filtration, turning unconscious action into purely conscious action and forcing those under its sway to, essentially, think themselves to death. Every single firing of a nerve, every bit of feedback from motion, every tiny breath of air upon the flesh become utterly demanding of attention, causing victims to have to manually evaluate each and every thought, sensation, action, and reaction. The mind, having only a certain amount of attention it can give and under the stress of an infinite amount of stimuli and movements, of actions and thoughts, eventually gives out. While people can be easily driven insane, this is not always the case. Instead, those under this illusion are driven to an utter paralysis of thought as simply observing everything around and within them dominates their every thought.
Combination:


" However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the user's genjutsu points. "

^Still waiting for this to be removed or explained.


Name: Initiative
Rank: N/A
Cost: N/A
Upkeep: N/A
Type: General Ability
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user takes the abilities of the Rinnegan to produce black chakra receivers to new heights by combining it with Jianyu's extensive knowledge in fabrication and construction. Most often he simply creates arrows for his bow, allowing him to no longer need replenishment of the more basic variety, each complete with fetching comprised of thin, flexible black receiver filaments. Of course, other constructions are also possible, so long as they are comprised of the receivers. These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment.
Combination: N/A



  • These can be five meters in size.
  • S rank tech/60 chakra
  • 20 upkeep to keep making them
  • They can be the power of your base chakra.
  • They cannot come from every part of your body; pick some. You do not magically spawn rods from your neck as this is not an organic technique.
  • These are black poles/chakra receivers; not any other object.
  • You put these in your paths in order to control them; if they are removed, you lose control of them. You must have at least three rods in them to maintain control of them.



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[22:17:04] @ Noir Senju : I'm legitly loosing everything if I lose.
[12:09:51] Jianyu Uchiha : We gotta keep competitive in the arms race of which land has how many Sorikata.
[21:26:29] Rei Uchiha : If you have beef with someone, let them know & give far chance
[16:55:16] Psychosis : Maybe but people get PISSED when you take shit away from them based on a misunderstanding.
[16:55:23] Psychosis : A lot of being staff is knowing how to not piss people off.
[16:56:30] Psychosis : Have you met most RPers?
[20:12:14] Muroku Washiba : This is no WE is MEssiah
[14:26:12]Cecilia Terumi : Pretty much let the snake find the hole, and make it fit. >>
[19:59:06] Valentina Yuki : I am the senior director of playing with penises on this site.
19:23:14] @ Neah Senju : and i would edo tensei him but
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Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Name: Key Square
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Blaze
Range: Susano'o
Speed: N/A
Power: +User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: An augmentation which Jianyu can add to his Susano'o or variants of at any point, this spontaneously transmutes the otherwise basic chakra weave of the avatar into that of the cursed flames of Amaterasu, enshrouding the user with a quasi-living projection made of black flames. This technique, rather uniquely, does not simply cover the Susano'o with the black flames but actually fuses it with the avatar, granting extra power to the summoned creature. When used by Jianyu, whose Susano'o is golden in color, the flames begin as gold before turning black, granting the infrequent and fleeting view of golden flames lurking beneath the black swathe of inferno, earning him the tile of "The Lord of Sunlight."
Combination:Susano'o and variants


Approved.
The flames do not have the ability to stay on someone permanently like Amaterasu.


Name: The Bell Jar
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: Triggered by being in range of the genjutsu, this illusion dilates any and all victim's perceptions of time, causing everything to appear to take a near-infinite amount of time. This extends not simply to physical actions but sensations and thoughts, slowing everything to a pace beyond glacial. This does not affect the target's speed, though in the initial post after being affected and the first post after escaping syncing one's body up with one's thoughts can prove incredibly awkward.  Rather, the ability seeks to mentally exhaust the opposition as, when even the sensation of pain moving from your hand to your brain can seem to take a hundred years, complete mental collapse is almost assured. Because of this, victims quickly feel as though they are trapped within their own bodies and, in the course of a few posts, they can easily feel as if they have been trapped there for many a lifetime.
Combination:Any


Approved.

Name: Mad Tea Party
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: An illusion which borders upon complete insanity, this genjutsu appears to simply improve the victim's attention when in range. By sharing with the opponent the user's incredible perception and capacity for rapid thought, he forcibly heightens the perceptive powers of enemies. Superficially, this appears to simply increase the senses of those affected, sharpening their sight, hearing, and such to previously unheard of levels. However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the user's genjutsu points.

Truthfully, this illusions alters the prey's consciousness in an extremely subtle way, removing the brain's natural filtration of "useless" information. For example, the eyes can always see the nose but, at almost all times, the brain simply chooses to look beyond this, filtering out the pointlessness of always being able to look at one's nose. This illusion inhibits this sort of filtration, turning unconscious action into purely conscious action and forcing those under its sway to, essentially, think themselves to death. Every single firing of a nerve, every bit of feedback from motion, every tiny breath of air upon the flesh become utterly demanding of attention, causing victims to have to manually evaluate each and every thought, sensation, action, and reaction. The mind, having only a certain amount of attention it can give and under the stress of an infinite amount of stimuli and movements, of actions and thoughts, eventually gives out. While people can be easily driven insane, this is not always the case. Instead, those under this illusion are driven to an utter paralysis of thought as simply observing everything around and within them dominates their every thought.
Combination:

What does "increase by the factorial of the user's gen points" mean? That is my only question.

Name: Initiative
Rank: S
Cost: 50
Upkeep: N/A
Type: General Ability
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user takes the abilities of the Rinnegan to produce black chakra receivers to new heights by combining it with Jianyu's extensive knowledge in fabrication and construction. Most often he simply creates arrows for his bow, allowing him to no longer need replenishment of the more basic variety, each complete with fetching comprised of thin, flexible black receiver filaments. Of course, other constructions are also possible, so long as they are comprised of the receivers. These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment. Rods can be no more than ten meters in size
Combination: N/A


I thought you wanted these to be the ones you put inside of your paths. If you want it to be the free ones, no worries on that. The free ones can just be used to control your paths.

Jianyu wrote:These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment. Rods can be no more than ten meters in size

1. What I meant by saying these are not "organic" is that it does not make since for black rods to just appear from all areas of your body. Its not like wooden spikes with senju whose bodies can be altered to be "wooden" or fused with their element. These are just black rods so I'm not sure why they can be spawned anywhere and everywhere at all times. If you can explain that I'd reconsider.

2. Large complicated objects? What?

3. I asked for upkeep because you sounded like you are continually creating them...



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on Sun Dec 04, 2016 7:52 am
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Name: Key Square
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Blaze
Range: Susano'o
Speed: N/A
Power: +User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: An augmentation which Jianyu can add to his Susano'o or variants of at any point, this spontaneously transmutes the otherwise basic chakra weave of the avatar into that of the cursed flames of Amaterasu, enshrouding the user with a quasi-living projection made of black flames. This technique, rather uniquely, does not simply cover the Susano'o with the black flames but actually fuses it with the avatar, granting extra power to the summoned creature. When used by Jianyu, whose Susano'o is golden in color, the flames begin as gold before turning black, granting the infrequent and fleeting view of golden flames lurking beneath the black swathe of inferno, earning him the tile of "The Lord of Sunlight."
Combination:Susano'o and variants


Name: The Bell Jar
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: Triggered by being in range of the genjutsu, this illusion dilates any and all victim's perceptions of time, causing everything to appear to take a near-infinite amount of time. This extends not simply to physical actions but sensations and thoughts, slowing everything to a pace beyond glacial. This does not affect the target's speed, though in the initial post after being affected and the first post after escaping syncing one's body up with one's thoughts can prove incredibly awkward.  Rather, the ability seeks to mentally exhaust the opposition as, when even the sensation of pain moving from your hand to your brain can seem to take a hundred years, complete mental collapse is almost assured. Because of this, victims quickly feel as though they are trapped within their own bodies and, in the course of a few posts, they can easily feel as if they have been trapped there for many a lifetime.
Combination:Any


Name: Mad Tea Party
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: An illusion which borders upon complete insanity, this genjutsu appears to simply improve the victim's attention when in range. By sharing with the opponent the user's incredible perception and capacity for rapid thought, he forcibly heightens the perceptive powers of enemies. Superficially, this appears to simply increase the senses of those affected, sharpening their sight, hearing, and such to previously unheard of levels. However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the user's genjutsu points.

Truthfully, this illusions alters the prey's consciousness in an extremely subtle way, removing the brain's natural filtration of "useless" information. For example, the eyes can always see the nose but, at almost all times, the brain simply chooses to look beyond this, filtering out the pointlessness of always being able to look at one's nose. This illusion inhibits this sort of filtration, turning unconscious action into purely conscious action and forcing those under its sway to, essentially, think themselves to death. Every single firing of a nerve, every bit of feedback from motion, every tiny breath of air upon the flesh become utterly demanding of attention, causing victims to have to manually evaluate each and every thought, sensation, action, and reaction. The mind, having only a certain amount of attention it can give and under the stress of an infinite amount of stimuli and movements, of actions and thoughts, eventually gives out. While people can be easily driven insane, this is not always the case. Instead, those under this illusion are driven to an utter paralysis of thought as simply observing everything around and within them dominates their every thought.
Combination:


Name: Initiative
Rank: S
Cost: 50
Upkeep: 20
Type: General Ability
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user takes the abilities of the Rinnegan to produce black chakra receivers to new heights by combining it with Jianyu's extensive knowledge in fabrication and construction. Most often he simply creates arrows for his bow, allowing him to no longer need replenishment of the more basic variety, each complete with fetching comprised of thin, flexible black receiver filaments. Of course, other constructions are also possible, so long as they are comprised of the receivers. These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment. Rods can be no more than ten meters in size
Combination: N/A

Instead of factorial, please use more clear language to those who might be confused. I get what you mean; but just so I'm not pulled into an argument between you and someone else.

Everything else is approved for now.

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on Sun Dec 04, 2016 2:13 pm
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:The factorial is the most efficient way I can think to phrase it. If you understand it then it's clearly comprehensible. Anyone who wants clarification from me can, as always, simply ask.

And are they approved or approved temporarily?

Thank you.

I need you to clarify to ME. Because factorial often means 5 + 4 +3 + 2 +1. And that is denied for this tech since it is a basic S rank. I don't want any confusion with your tech.

Your other techniques are approved.

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[12:09:51] Jianyu Uchiha : We gotta keep competitive in the arms race of which land has how many Sorikata.
[21:26:29] Rei Uchiha : If you have beef with someone, let them know & give far chance
[16:55:16] Psychosis : Maybe but people get PISSED when you take shit away from them based on a misunderstanding.
[16:55:23] Psychosis : A lot of being staff is knowing how to not piss people off.
[16:56:30] Psychosis : Have you met most RPers?
[20:12:14] Muroku Washiba : This is no WE is MEssiah
[14:26:12]Cecilia Terumi : Pretty much let the snake find the hole, and make it fit. >>
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on Sun Dec 04, 2016 8:58 pm
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:
Eververse wrote:
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:The factorial is the most efficient way I can think to phrase it. If you understand it then it's clearly comprehensible. Anyone who wants clarification from me can, as always, simply ask.

And are they approved or approved temporarily?

Thank you.

I need you to clarify to ME. Because factorial often means 5 + 4 +3 + 2 +1. And that is denied for this tech since it is a basic S rank. I don't want any confusion with your tech.

Your other techniques are approved.


I get what you mean;

What - Exactly - are you unclear on? You said you understood, so I assumed you did. Do you not? That is now how a factorial works. Is that what you are asking? Do you want me to explain how to factorialize a number?

Please Explain. Rarely do we have the same definition for the same thing and I don't want a possibility of confusion.

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[12:09:51] Jianyu Uchiha : We gotta keep competitive in the arms race of which land has how many Sorikata.
[21:26:29] Rei Uchiha : If you have beef with someone, let them know & give far chance
[16:55:16] Psychosis : Maybe but people get PISSED when you take shit away from them based on a misunderstanding.
[16:55:23] Psychosis : A lot of being staff is knowing how to not piss people off.
[16:56:30] Psychosis : Have you met most RPers?
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[14:26:12]Cecilia Terumi : Pretty much let the snake find the hole, and make it fit. >>
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