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on Fri Sep 16, 2016 4:39 pm
Blaze Release: The method of manipulating the black flames generated by Amaterasu, this style of ninjutsu takes advantage of the flames' unique properties, namely the fact that it is the highest expression of the fire release. Compare to a more basic version of flames, these fires have certain advantages and disadvantages. Obviously, the user must have already cast Amaterasu, or in some way have black flames to manipulate. for as one eye casts the flames, the other adds the shape manipulation necessary to use these techniques.

The blaze release takes on the traditional advantages over the wind and wood elements but takes this to a higher level, increasing their advantage over these elements to 50%. As with the fire release, the black flames have a weakness to water abilities (25%), but cannot be put out by the basic water release and will eventually consume all water present if given enough time. In fact, the flames of Amaterasu and the blaze release are said to be able to burn through and consume anything, meaning that extinguishing them is terribly difficult, though the flames can be sealed away. Because of this notorious ability, the flames literally consume those of opposing fire techniques, using the energy of other flames to increase the power and speed of black flame. When absorbed, the blaze release gains half the applicable stats of the consumed flames. Finally, while it cannot traditionally extinguish the flames, ice release techniques prove astoundingly powerful against blaze abilities, gaining a 50% advantage over the black flames.

A lesser known property of the black flames and an integral one nonetheless is that they have a physical nature to them. They are, essentially, a physical fire and, as such, can be formed into shapes or objects which can then interact with other physical objects in the surrounding environment.

Name: Enton: Kagutsuchi | Added Tool Earth Lord
Rank: S
Cost: 50
Upkeep: 20
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: "Blaze"
Range: 5 m
Speed: User's
Power: 700
Handseals: Chakra Threads
Description: By applying shape manipulation to the flames produced by Amaterasu, the user can freely shape the flames into a variety of different forms. The user may manipulate them how he sees fit, creating weapons, cloaks, shield and the like and can further prevent them from burning themselves, allowing them to safely wield the tools they craft.
Combination: Amaterasu and offshoots
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on Sun Sep 18, 2016 12:41 am
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Blaze Release: The method of manipulating the black flames generated by Amaterasu, this style of ninjutsu takes advantage of the flames' unique properties, namely the fact that it is the highest expression of the fire release. Compare to a more basic version of flames, these fires have certain advantages and disadvantages. Obviously, the user must have already cast Amaterasu, or in some way have black flames to manipulate. for as one eye casts the flames, the other adds the shape manipulation necessary to use these techniques.

The blaze release takes on the traditional advantages over the wind and wood elements but takes this to a higher level, increasing their advantage over these elements to 50%. As with the fire release, the black flames have a weakness to water abilities (25%), but cannot be put out by the basic water release and will eventually consume all water present if given enough time. In fact, the flames of Amaterasu and the blaze release are said to be able to burn through and consume anything, meaning that extinguishing them is terribly difficult, though the flames can be sealed away. Because of this notorious ability, the flames literally consume those of opposing fire techniques, using the energy of other flames to increase the power and speed of black flame. When absorbed, the blaze release gains half the applicable stats of the consumed flames. Finally, while it cannot traditionally extinguish the flames, ice release techniques prove astoundingly powerful against blaze abilities, gaining a 50% advantage over the black flames.

A lesser known property of the black flames and an integral one nonetheless is that they have a physical nature to them. They are, essentially, a physical fire and, as such, can be formed into shapes or objects which can then interact with other physical objects in the surrounding environment.

Name: Enton: Kagutsuchi | Added Tool Earth Lord
Rank: S
Cost: 50
Upkeep: 20
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: "Blaze"
Range: 5 m
Speed: User's
Power: 700
Handseals: Chakra Threads
Description: By applying shape manipulation to the flames produced by Amaterasu, the user can freely shape the flames into a variety of different forms. The user may manipulate them how he sees fit, creating weapons, cloaks, shield and the like and can further prevent them from burning themselves, allowing them to safely wield the tools they craft.
Combination: Amaterasu and offshoots

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Name: Ulysses
Rank: S
Cost: 50
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 50 m
Speed: N/A
Power: 600
Handseals: Dog Boar Dragon
Description: While most illusions focus exclusively on pain, this jutsu instead imparts upon its unfortunate victim a pure, unrefined, utterly devastating sense of pleasure. Perpetuated by a very slightly, temporary bluring of the environment, the user will gain the ability to freely jolt the victims with a pulse of raw, unbridled pleasure. Additionally, the user can freely choose what this joy is attached to, allowing the user to essentially dictate what feels good and what feels bad, ultimately tampering with the feedback for any action.

The exact nature of this pleasure is of the thoughtless joy which bypasses purely physical sensations in many cases, causing the brain to simply experience an unimaginably intense feeling of pure euphoria which can last for a varying amount of time, depending on the user's wishes. By default, these sensations are attached to every action and thought in the targets, meaning that nothing will feel better or worse than anything else and, in the case of most people, will leave them paralyzed with pleasure, reducing most to little more than a twitching heap of chemical happiness. However, as previously stated, clever timing of particularly intense pleasure impulses can result in the user's ability to dictated which actions, sensations, and thoughts feel good and which do not.

Perhaps the most devastating effect of this, though, is the way it affects the brain of those affected by it. While the intense pleasure can induce the victims to do horrible things to themselves - the promise of euphoria strong enough to overpower even the most basic long-term survival instinct - the brain quickly builds a tolerance to the pleasure produced, though it infinitely increases. This causes what amounts to sever addiction to the euphoria caused by the illusion and this is responsible both for the ability to both trick the victims into harming themselves and a sense of critically intense depression such that many who realize they were under an illusion beg to be place back into it.
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Name: Spoken Word Genjutsu
Rank: B
Cost: Varies
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Genjutsu | Pseudo-limited
Element: N/A
Range: 50 m
Speed: N/A
Power: +100
Handseals: N/A
Description: A means of illusion transmission, this allows the user to replace the hand seals and transmission vector of another genjutsu with the user's voice by filling the sound with chakra. Thus, any who hear the sound of his voice will succumb to the genjutsu of the user's choice and, in many cases, never even realize it. Genjutsu placed via this technique are notably difficult to break out of, but sufficient pain, as always, usually does the trick. Once used, the user will simply pay the regular upkeep of whatever illusion he chose to use, but must of course pay the initial cost at the time of using this.
Combination: Any other genjutsu. 5000 ryo.


Name: Sicilian Defense: Accelerated Dragon
Rank: A
Cost: 45
Upkeep: 20
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Power: 500
Handseals: N/A
Description: Born from Jianyu having witnessed and attempted to mimic Rei Uchiha's phenomenal use of the Lightning Release Armor technique, this ability differs heavily from the original as Jianyu's familiarity with the lightning element is vastly dwarfed by Rei's. While it lacks the ability to function as an armor and does not increase his speed, it does cause a powerful coating of electricity to surround his body, extending just about a foot away from him. This pseudo-armor functions as a more offensive variant of the parent jutsu, seeking to electrocute anyone and anything in the vicinity. This can of course cause immense damage to anyone touching the coating or Jianyu's body and, additionally, serves as a protective barrier against incoming attacks, organisms, and particles which are weak to lightning or of organic nature as the electricity essentially kills them.
Combination: N/A
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First two are approved, the third is a bit much like Chidori Current mate
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Accelerated Dragon on hold for now. Thank you much.

Name: Gravity's Rainbow
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 10
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 45 m
Speed: N/A
Power: 310
Handseals: Bird Snake
Description: The user crafts a vast rainbow above himself with him as the epicenter, far up into the sky and of a stunningly vibrant coloration. Those who see the the rainbow shall then fall under the sway of this genjutsu and shall suffer until the rainbow is broken (as through kai). The rainbow exerts an intense illusionary pressure equal to its power equal to its power stat. Any who have fewer genjutsu points than this technique's power shall loose speed equal to its power, and those who exceed it shall only suffer half the reduction. Understandably, should any victim's speed fall to zero, they shall believe that the increasing gravity has pinned them to the earth, preventing any movement.
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Name: Key Square
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Blaze
Range: Susano'o
Speed: N/A
Power: +User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: An augmentation which Jianyu can add to his Susano'o or variants of at any point, this spontaneously transmutes the otherwise basic chakra weave of the avatar into that of the cursed flames of Amaterasu, enshrouding the user with a quasi-living projection made of black flames. This technique, rather uniquely, does not simply cover the Susano'o with the black flames but actually fuses it with the avatar, granting extra power to the summoned creature. When used by Jianyu, whose Susano'o is golden in color, the flames begin as gold before turning black, granting the infrequent and fleeting view of golden flames lurking beneath the black swathe of inferno, earning him the tile of "The Lord of Sunlight."
Combination:Susano'o and variants


Name: The Bell Jar
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: Triggered by being in range of the genjutsu, this illusion dilates any and all victim's perceptions of time, causing everything to appear to take a near-infinite amount of time. This extends not simply to physical actions but sensations and thoughts, slowing everything to a pace beyond glacial. This does not affect the target's speed, though in the initial post after being affected and the first post after escaping syncing one's body up with one's thoughts can prove incredibly awkward.  Rather, the ability seeks to mentally exhaust the opposition as, when even the sensation of pain moving from your hand to your brain can seem to take a hundred years, complete mental collapse is almost assured. Because of this, victims quickly feel as though they are trapped within their own bodies and, in the course of a few posts, they can easily feel as if they have been trapped there for many a lifetime.
Combination:Any


Name: Mad Tea Party
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: An illusion which borders upon complete insanity, this genjutsu appears to simply improve the victim's attention when in range. By sharing with the opponent the user's incredible perception and capacity for rapid thought, he forcibly heightens the perceptive powers of enemies. Superficially, this appears to simply increase the senses of those affected, sharpening their sight, hearing, and such to previously unheard of levels. However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the user's genjutsu points.

Truthfully, this illusions alters the prey's consciousness in an extremely subtle way, removing the brain's natural filtration of "useless" information. For example, the eyes can always see the nose but, at almost all times, the brain simply chooses to look beyond this, filtering out the pointlessness of always being able to look at one's nose. This illusion inhibits this sort of filtration, turning unconscious action into purely conscious action and forcing those under its sway to, essentially, think themselves to death. Every single firing of a nerve, every bit of feedback from motion, every tiny breath of air upon the flesh become utterly demanding of attention, causing victims to have to manually evaluate each and every thought, sensation, action, and reaction. The mind, having only a certain amount of attention it can give and under the stress of an infinite amount of stimuli and movements, of actions and thoughts, eventually gives out. While people can be easily driven insane, this is not always the case. Instead, those under this illusion are driven to an utter paralysis of thought as simply observing everything around and within them dominates their every thought.
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Name: Initiative
Rank: S
Cost: 50
Upkeep: 20
Type: General Ability
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user takes the abilities of the Rinnegan to produce black chakra receivers to new heights by combining it with Jianyu's extensive knowledge in fabrication and construction. Most often he simply creates arrows for his bow, allowing him to no longer need replenishment of the more basic variety, each complete with fetching comprised of thin, flexible black receiver filaments. Of course, other constructions are also possible, so long as they are comprised of the receivers. These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment. Rods can be no more than ten meters in size
Combination: N/A


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Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Name: Key Square
Rank: B
Cost: 30
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Blaze
Range: Susano'o
Speed: N/A
Power: +2x Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: An augmentation which Jianyu can add to his Susano'o or variants of at any point, this spontaneously transmutes the otherwise basic chakra weave of the avatar into that of the cursed flames of Amaterasu, enshrouding the user with a quasi-living projection made of black flames. This technique, rather uniquely, does not simply cover the Susano'o with the black flames but actually fuses it with the avatar, granting extra power to the summoned creature. When used by Jianyu, whose Susano'o is golden in color, the flames begin as gold before turning black, granting the infrequent and fleeting view of golden flames lurking beneath the black swathe of inferno, earning him the tile of "The Lord of Sunlight."
Combination:Susano'o and variants


You are adding x2 your chakra to your Susanoo's power? If so, this needs to be limited, cost way more, and have upkeep.
Are the flames the power of Amaterasu or this technique?

Name: The Bell Jar
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: Triggered by being in range of the genjutsu, this illusion dilates any and all victim's perceptions of time, causing everything to appear to take a near-infinite amount of time. This extends not simply to physical actions but sensations and thoughts, slowing everything to a pace beyond glacial. This does not affect the target's speed, though in the initial post after being affected and the first post after escaping syncing one's body up with one's thoughts can prove incredibly awkward.  Rather, the ability seeks to mentally exhaust the opposition as, when even the sensation of pain moving from your hand to your brain can seem to take a hundred years, complete mental collapse is almost assured. Because of this, victims quickly feel as though they are trapped within their own bodies and, in the course of a few posts, they can easily feel as if they have been trapped there for many a lifetime.
Combination:Any


Pick a different trigger that actually makes sense please.


Name: Mad Tea Party
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points + Target(s)' gen points
Handseals:
Description: An illusion which borders upon complete insanity, this genjutsu appears to simply improve the victim's attention. By sharing with the opponent the user's incredible perception and capacity for rapid thought, he forcibly heightens the perceptive powers of enemies. Superficially, this appears to simply increase the senses of those affected, sharpening their sight, hearing, and such to previously unheard of levels. However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the sum of all parties' genjutsu points.

Truthfully, this illusions alters the prey's consciousness in an extremely subtle way, removing the brain's natural filtration of "useless" information. For example, the eyes can always see the nose but, at almost all times, the brain simply chooses to look beyond this, filtering out the pointlessness of always being able to look at one's nose. This illusion inhibits this sort of filtration, turning unconscious action into purely conscious action and forcing those under its sway to, essentially, think themselves to death. Every single firing of a nerve, every bit of feedback from motion, every tiny breath of air upon the flesh become utterly demanding of attention, causing victims to have to manually evaluate each and every thought, sensation, action, and reaction. The mind, having only a certain amount of attention it can give and under the stress of an infinite amount of stimuli and movements, of actions and thoughts, eventually gives out. While people can be easily driven insane, this is not always the case. Instead, those under this illusion are driven to an utter paralysis of thought as simply observing everything around and within them dominates their every thought.
Combination:

The power of this is not allowed to be your gen points plus theirs. Or else make this a limited technique and bump up the cost.


Name: Initiative
Rank: N/A
Cost: N/A
Upkeep: N/A
Type: General Ability
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user takes the abilities of the Rinnegan to produce black chakra receivers to new heights by combining it with Jianyu's extensive knowledge in fabrication and construction. Most often he simply creates arrows for his bow, allowing him to no longer need replenishment of the more basic variety, each complete with fetching comprised of thin, flexible black receiver filaments. Of course, other constructions are also possible, so long as they are comprised of the receivers. These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment.
Combination: N/A


How are you making weapons with your chakra power and no chakra cost?



Jianyu wrote:Name: Kamui
Rank: S | Limited | Canon
Cost: Below
Upkeep: 20
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self | 100 m
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: N/A
Description: A strange technique born of the Mangekyou's kaleidoscopic vision, this allows the user to see into and transfer targets or him/herself to or from an alternative dimension. Additionally, the user can, upon viewing any gateway to a different dimension or other warping between dimensions, choose to synchronize his or her Kamui with that dimension, allowing them access to said dimension at any time. Each user of Kamui has his or her own, personal Kamui dimension, though eye pairings share a dimensions, so if two users each have one eye, they both interact, by default, with the same dimension. This technique has, historically, been likened to the legendary Flying Thunder God technique, though requiring no hand seals or sealing forumulae, it has been noted as superior to the former technique.

This ability has a wide range of uses, commonly classified into two distinct "forms." The first centers around moving one's self between the user's dimension, allowing them to move large distances instantaneously by slipping away into their dimension and exiting at another location and bringing anything they are touching with them. Alternatively, the user can draw themselves into the dimension partially, resulting in a kind of intangibility as he or she no longer exists within 'normal' dimension. When used in this way, the user becomes virtually unaffected by anything outside of their Kamui dimension, but cannot interact with anything outside of that dimension. When using this, the user's chakra becomes utterly untraceable and they can utterly circumvent barrier ninjutsu. Also, the user can suck objects or creatures into the dimensions via contact, storing these items in the dimension for later. These items can then be expelled with varying degrees of force, allowing the user to retrieve items or fire weapons from their eye at a moment's notice.

The other version of this technique is a long ranged one which focuses a time-space barrier around an object within the user's line of sight, whisking anything within that space into the Kamui dimension. The size of this barrier can change at the user's whim, allowing them to target both small and large things with extreme precision.

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  • Teleportation:

    • 0-300 meters costs 25 chakra + 10 MS points.
    • 301+ meters requires 50 chakra + 15 MS points.


  • Object Absorption:

    • Sub-human-sized objects or creatures cost 10 chakra + 10 MS points per object
    • Human-sized objects or creatures - plus intangibly - cost 10 chakra + 10 MS points per object
    • Massive objects or creatures (bijuu, buildings, ect) cost 35 chakra + 15 MS points per object
    • Expulsion of stored objects sub-human-sized objects costs 5 chakra + 5 MS points; can occur en mass




1.
Jianyu wrote:The other version of this technique is a long ranged one which focuses a time-space barrier around an object within the user's line of sight, whisking anything within that space into the Kamui dimension. The size of this barrier can change at the user's whim, allowing them to target both small and large things with extreme precision.

Make the range of this 10 meters; and the speed you absorb people is 700. Recall that your absorption with this technique is not instant, and neither is the range infinite; it can be interrupted. This is not a space-time barrier, you are simply sucking them in. The power of the "suck" can be 700.

If you want the option of making the sucking zone larger, than pitch me a cost per enhanced size of it.

2. The speed you absorb yourself in, i.e. teleport, is 600; and you cannot teleport to a place you have never been to. Recall that teleporting yourself is much slower than teleporting others with this tech.

3. Your "intangibility" should cost you 40 chakra; and you make intangible only items that are yours that you are touching; NOT PEOPLE.

4.
Jianyu wrote:Additionally, the user can, upon viewing any gateway to a different dimension or other warping between dimensions, choose to synchronize his or her Kamui with that dimension, allowing them access to said dimension at any time.

Give me a method of you syncing. Not just "you saw". Your eyes do not allow you to "see" dimensions (like my Galgan for example), you can just travel into them. So you need to explain how you can sync your kamui to other dimensions. And yes I know Obito pulled it off etc. I'm not denying this; but elaborate.

5. Double the chakra cost for your absorption of things into your dimension. And, once more, you are not allowed to "cast" intangibility.

6. The chakra you spend in teleporting, if it is to another topic etc. must be deducted from you in that topic. Meaning when you teleport somewhere, deduct 50 chakra from yourself thus; since it is instant travel.

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Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Name: Key Square
Rank: B
Cost: 30
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Blaze
Range: Susano'o
Speed: N/A
Power: +2x Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: An augmentation which Jianyu can add to his Susano'o or variants of at any point, this spontaneously transmutes the otherwise basic chakra weave of the avatar into that of the cursed flames of Amaterasu, enshrouding the user with a quasi-living projection made of black flames. This technique, rather uniquely, does not simply cover the Susano'o with the black flames but actually fuses it with the avatar, granting extra power to the summoned creature. When used by Jianyu, whose Susano'o is golden in color, the flames begin as gold before turning black, granting the infrequent and fleeting view of golden flames lurking beneath the black swathe of inferno, earning him the tile of "The Lord of Sunlight."
Combination:Susano'o and variants


You are adding x2 your chakra to your Susanoo's power? If so, this needs to be limited, cost way more, and have upkeep.
Are the flames the power of Amaterasu or this technique?

Name: The Bell Jar
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: Triggered by being in range of the genjutsu, this illusion dilates any and all victim's perceptions of time, causing everything to appear to take a near-infinite amount of time. This extends not simply to physical actions but sensations and thoughts, slowing everything to a pace beyond glacial. This does not affect the target's speed, though in the initial post after being affected and the first post after escaping syncing one's body up with one's thoughts can prove incredibly awkward.  Rather, the ability seeks to mentally exhaust the opposition as, when even the sensation of pain moving from your hand to your brain can seem to take a hundred years, complete mental collapse is almost assured. Because of this, victims quickly feel as though they are trapped within their own bodies and, in the course of a few posts, they can easily feel as if they have been trapped there for many a lifetime.
Combination:Any


Pick a different trigger that actually makes sense please.


Name: Mad Tea Party
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points + Target(s)' gen points
Handseals:
Description: An illusion which borders upon complete insanity, this genjutsu appears to simply improve the victim's attention. By sharing with the opponent the user's incredible perception and capacity for rapid thought, he forcibly heightens the perceptive powers of enemies. Superficially, this appears to simply increase the senses of those affected, sharpening their sight, hearing, and such to previously unheard of levels. However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the sum of all parties' genjutsu points.

Truthfully, this illusions alters the prey's consciousness in an extremely subtle way, removing the brain's natural filtration of "useless" information. For example, the eyes can always see the nose but, at almost all times, the brain simply chooses to look beyond this, filtering out the pointlessness of always being able to look at one's nose. This illusion inhibits this sort of filtration, turning unconscious action into purely conscious action and forcing those under its sway to, essentially, think themselves to death. Every single firing of a nerve, every bit of feedback from motion, every tiny breath of air upon the flesh become utterly demanding of attention, causing victims to have to manually evaluate each and every thought, sensation, action, and reaction. The mind, having only a certain amount of attention it can give and under the stress of an infinite amount of stimuli and movements, of actions and thoughts, eventually gives out. While people can be easily driven insane, this is not always the case. Instead, those under this illusion are driven to an utter paralysis of thought as simply observing everything around and within them dominates their every thought.
Combination:

The power of this is not allowed to be your gen points plus theirs. Or else make this a limited technique and bump up the cost.


Name: Initiative
Rank: N/A
Cost: N/A
Upkeep: N/A
Type: General Ability
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user takes the abilities of the Rinnegan to produce black chakra receivers to new heights by combining it with Jianyu's extensive knowledge in fabrication and construction. Most often he simply creates arrows for his bow, allowing him to no longer need replenishment of the more basic variety, each complete with fetching comprised of thin, flexible black receiver filaments. Of course, other constructions are also possible, so long as they are comprised of the receivers. These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment.
Combination: N/A


How are you making weapons with your chakra power and no chakra cost?



Jianyu wrote:Name: Kamui
Rank: S | Limited | Canon
Cost: Below
Upkeep: 20
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self | 100 m
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: N/A
Description: A strange technique born of the Mangekyou's kaleidoscopic vision, this allows the user to see into and transfer targets or him/herself to or from an alternative dimension. Additionally, the user can, upon viewing any gateway to a different dimension or other warping between dimensions, choose to synchronize his or her Kamui with that dimension, allowing them access to said dimension at any time. Each user of Kamui has his or her own, personal Kamui dimension, though eye pairings share a dimensions, so if two users each have one eye, they both interact, by default, with the same dimension. This technique has, historically, been likened to the legendary Flying Thunder God technique, though requiring no hand seals or sealing forumulae, it has been noted as superior to the former technique.

This ability has a wide range of uses, commonly classified into two distinct "forms." The first centers around moving one's self between the user's dimension, allowing them to move large distances instantaneously by slipping away into their dimension and exiting at another location and bringing anything they are touching with them. Alternatively, the user can draw themselves into the dimension partially, resulting in a kind of intangibility as he or she no longer exists within 'normal' dimension. When used in this way, the user becomes virtually unaffected by anything outside of their Kamui dimension, but cannot interact with anything outside of that dimension. When using this, the user's chakra becomes utterly untraceable and they can utterly circumvent barrier ninjutsu. Also, the user can suck objects or creatures into the dimensions via contact, storing these items in the dimension for later. These items can then be expelled with varying degrees of force, allowing the user to retrieve items or fire weapons from their eye at a moment's notice.

The other version of this technique is a long ranged one which focuses a time-space barrier around an object within the user's line of sight, whisking anything within that space into the Kamui dimension. The size of this barrier can change at the user's whim, allowing them to target both small and large things with extreme precision.

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  • Teleportation:

    • 0-300 meters costs 25 chakra + 10 MS points.
    • 301+ meters requires 50 chakra + 15 MS points.


  • Object Absorption:

    • Sub-human-sized objects or creatures cost 10 chakra + 10 MS points per object
    • Human-sized objects or creatures - plus intangibly - cost 10 chakra + 10 MS points per object
    • Massive objects or creatures (bijuu, buildings, ect) cost 35 chakra + 15 MS points per object
    • Expulsion of stored objects sub-human-sized objects costs 5 chakra + 5 MS points; can occur en mass




1.
Jianyu wrote:The other version of this technique is a long ranged one which focuses a time-space barrier around an object within the user's line of sight, whisking anything within that space into the Kamui dimension. The size of this barrier can change at the user's whim, allowing them to target both small and large things with extreme precision.

Make the range of this 10 meters; and the speed you absorb people is 700. Recall that your absorption with this technique is not instant, and neither is the range infinite; it can be interrupted. This is not a space-time barrier, you are simply sucking them in. The power of the "suck" can be 700.

If you want the option of making the sucking zone larger, than pitch me a cost per enhanced size of it.

2. The speed you absorb yourself in, i.e. teleport, is 600; and you cannot teleport to a place you have never been to. Recall that teleporting yourself is much slower than teleporting others with this tech.

3. Your "intangibility" should cost you 40 chakra; and you make intangible only items that are yours that you are touching; NOT PEOPLE.

4.
Jianyu wrote:Additionally, the user can, upon viewing any gateway to a different dimension or other warping between dimensions, choose to synchronize his or her Kamui with that dimension, allowing them access to said dimension at any time.

Give me a method of you syncing. Not just "you saw". Your eyes do not allow you to "see" dimensions (like my Galgan for example), you can just travel into them. So you need to explain how you can sync your kamui to other dimensions. And yes I know Obito pulled it off etc. I'm not denying this; but elaborate.

5. Double the chakra cost for your absorption of things into your dimension. And, once more, you are not allowed to "cast" intangibility.

6. The chakra you spend in teleporting, if it is to another topic etc. must be deducted from you in that topic. Meaning when you teleport somewhere, deduct 50 chakra from yourself thus; since it is instant travel.

Key Square: Altered. I do not understand what you're asking about Amaterasu. This technique is blaze release.

Bell Jar: Feel free to go deny the below quoted tech (Linked Here) and we can then return to this.

Kagura wrote:
Name: Genjutsu Binding Plus
Rank: S
Cost: 50
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: n/a
Range: 50 m
Speed:
Power: 700
Handseals:
Description: The trigger of this genjutsu is for the opponent to be within the range of this genjutsu. Just as the normal Genjutsu binding is with as the name suggests, the user binds the opponent in a genjutsu, rendering them incapable of movement. This genjutsu can be used on more than one target at the same time. Once the target is bound, the user or an ally can rush up to the enemy and deliver a devastating killing blow. It requires the trapped person to have a strength greater than the chakra value of the genjutsu caster instead of the regular 200+ strength which was required to break the physical incapacitation in the normal Genjutsu Binding.
Combination:

Mad Tea Party: Edited.

Initiative:
Uchiha Clan Page wrote:Can create black rod chakra receivers that can have chakra transmitted through them.

These abilities require not chakra cost.

I can already produce black chakra receivers. I'm defining that I can give them unique shapes. Their power and endurance are currently unstated, so I stated them.

Kamui: Before addressing almost any of this, I'll just ask that we, as with almost all other canon abilities here, simply copy and paste from the wiki. I tried to make it myself and be unique and I apologize for that. I'll make necessary tweaks to conform to stats of the forum.

Kamui:
Name: Kamui
Rank: S | Limited | Canon
Cost: Below
Upkeep: 20
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self | Eyesight
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: N/A
Description: Kamui is a powerful Mangekyō Sharingan dōjutsu that creates a unique and specialised form of space–time ninjutsu. It allows the user to achieve two very distinct, yet closely associated feats — teleportation and intangibility. Kamui allows the user to transfer targets to and from another dimension, from which they are unable to escape. Kakashi likened the characteristics of this technique to those of the Flying Thunder God Technique, but noted that it seems to be more advanced, as it requires neither seals nor a summoning tattoo to be performed.[4] Minato Namikaze admitted that this technique exceeds both his and the Second Hokage's space–time ninjutsu.[5] This technique forms a spiraling void centred on the eye used to activate it, which draws the target inwards and distorts their form until they are transported to another dimension. By absorbing their own body into this distortion, the user can teleport to virtually any location they desire. When using Kamui to teleport, anything the user is touching will be warped along with them,[6] and their chakra becomes untraceable.[4] With a single eye, this technique was fast enough to avoid an attack from Naruto Uzumaki in his Nine-Tails Chakra Mode,[7] though slower than the speed at which the Truth-Seeking Balls travel.[8]After storing a target within Kamui's dimension, the user can then eject it from their eye at any time.[9] This can be done with varying degrees of force, allowing the user to eject weapons at a moment's notice, giving opponents little opportunity to react accordingly.[10] Despite not always being present, Obito could keep targets under genjutsu while they were confined inside Kamui's dimension, thus keeping them incapacitated for extended durations.[9]

Kamui can synchronise with another space–time ninjutsu, granting the user access to the synchronised technique's dimension, as well as any other connected dimensions.[11] Once the dimension has been marked, the user can freely travel between it and Kamui's own dimension.[12]

Left Eye: Obito's left eye is able to utilise a long-range version of Kamui, which can transport targets anywhere in the user's line of sight. The target is surrounded with a barrier space, the location and size of which can be specified at will, and when the user concentrates on the target within, the space at the barrier's centre distorts and draws everything within into another dimension.[1] The size of the barrier can be expanded, as Deidara was forced to fly further away in an effort to escape its effects.[13]

Right Eye: Obito's right eye uses a short-range version of Kamui, which can only transport targets in close proximity to the user; physical contact with the target is seemingly required.[14] However, this eye can utilise a unique variation of teleportation akin to intangibility. When activated, any part of the user's body that overlaps with another object is seamlessly warped to Kamui's dimension, making it appear as though the user can phase through solid objects.[15] By overlapping their entire body, the user can completely conceal their presence and erase all traces of their chakra. This also allows the user to freely travel through the ground, enabling them to ambush opponents from below.[16] This intangibility can be extended to anything the user is touching at the moment of activation,[17] so long as they are able to maintain physical contact with at least a portion of the desired object.[18] This ability also allows the user to bypass even the strongest barrier ninjutsu.[5]

Both Eyes: When both eyes are used together on the same target, the teleportation process works twice as fast, even becoming faster than a Truth-Seeking Ball used as a projectile.[19] Through both eyes, the user can create two distortions at the same time and connect them. This was demonstrated when Obito first used the left eye's Kamui to synchronise with Yomotsu Hirasaka, then used the right eye's Kamui to teleport through the portal into another dimension.[20] The user is also able to create portals in their line of sight to connect two dimensions.[21] Using both eyes in conjunction with the Six Paths Chakra allows the user to augment their other techniques, transporting targets struck by said techniques to Kamui's dimension.[22]

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  • Teleportation:

    • 0-300 meters costs 25 chakra + 10 MS points.
    • 301+ meters requires 50 chakra + 15 MS points.


  • Object Absorption:

    • Sub-human-sized objects or creatures cost 10 chakra + 10 MS points per object
    • Human-sized objects or creatures - plus intangibly - cost 10 chakra + 10 MS points per object
    • Massive objects or creatures (bijuu, buildings, ect) cost 35 chakra + 15 MS points per object
    • Expulsion of stored objects sub-human-sized objects costs 5 chakra + 5 MS points; can occur en mass




Kamui Grab Bag:

2. The speed of teleportation is specifically faster than some of the swiftest known techniques in canon. There is virtually no basis for limiting to places the user has specifically been.

"4." Syncing is literally the abilities of the Sharingan to copy things. I see a space time ability which manipulates a dimension (like another person using Kamui) and can "copy" or otherwise mark that location, understanding and memorizing its traits and coordinates. I can thereby infiltrate said dimension or otherwise manipulate it. I've no idea what you mean in regards to your Galgan because the ability to "see" another dimension in this sense literally does not make sense. It's not an alternative reality laid over the one our characters occupy; it's completely divorced from it.

5. This applies to most other issues of cost, but cost for all things was based off of FTG. I have never claimed I can "cast" the intangibility at a range. It's specifically things I'm touching.

6. Obviously...

Fun Fact: Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu, Doujutsu, Time-Space Ninjutsu, Barrier Ninjutsu.


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on Fri Dec 02, 2016 9:37 pm
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Name: Key Square
Rank: B
Cost: 30
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Blaze
Range: Susano'o
Speed: N/A
Power: +User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: An augmentation which Jianyu can add to his Susano'o or variants of at any point, this spontaneously transmutes the otherwise basic chakra weave of the avatar into that of the cursed flames of Amaterasu, enshrouding the user with a quasi-living projection made of black flames. This technique, rather uniquely, does not simply cover the Susano'o with the black flames but actually fuses it with the avatar, granting extra power to the summoned creature. When used by Jianyu, whose Susano'o is golden in color, the flames begin as gold before turning black, granting the infrequent and fleeting view of golden flames lurking beneath the black swathe of inferno, earning him the tile of "The Lord of Sunlight."
Combination:Susano'o and variants


This needs to be S rank and 60 chakra; and have upkeep. I was asking if the flames around your Susanoo, which you consider to be Amaterasu, have Amaterasu's power or do they have the power of this technique. And do they have Amaterasu' effect?

Name: The Bell Jar
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: Triggered by being in range of the genjutsu, this illusion dilates any and all victim's perceptions of time, causing everything to appear to take a near-infinite amount of time. This extends not simply to physical actions but sensations and thoughts, slowing everything to a pace beyond glacial. This does not affect the target's speed, though in the initial post after being affected and the first post after escaping syncing one's body up with one's thoughts can prove incredibly awkward.  Rather, the ability seeks to mentally exhaust the opposition as, when even the sensation of pain moving from your hand to your brain can seem to take a hundred years, complete mental collapse is almost assured. Because of this, victims quickly feel as though they are trapped within their own bodies and, in the course of a few posts, they can easily feel as if they have been trapped there for many a lifetime.
Combination:Any


Apparently Gen binding is an "area trigger" - so you may have this.

Name: Mad Tea Party
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: An illusion which borders upon complete insanity, this genjutsu appears to simply improve the victim's attention. By sharing with the opponent the user's incredible perception and capacity for rapid thought, he forcibly heightens the perceptive powers of enemies. Superficially, this appears to simply increase the senses of those affected, sharpening their sight, hearing, and such to previously unheard of levels. However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the sum of all parties' genjutsu points.

Truthfully, this illusions alters the prey's consciousness in an extremely subtle way, removing the brain's natural filtration of "useless" information. For example, the eyes can always see the nose but, at almost all times, the brain simply chooses to look beyond this, filtering out the pointlessness of always being able to look at one's nose. This illusion inhibits this sort of filtration, turning unconscious action into purely conscious action and forcing those under its sway to, essentially, think themselves to death. Every single firing of a nerve, every bit of feedback from motion, every tiny breath of air upon the flesh become utterly demanding of attention, causing victims to have to manually evaluate each and every thought, sensation, action, and reaction. The mind, having only a certain amount of attention it can give and under the stress of an infinite amount of stimuli and movements, of actions and thoughts, eventually gives out. While people can be easily driven insane, this is not always the case. Instead, those under this illusion are driven to an utter paralysis of thought as simply observing everything around and within them dominates their every thought.
Combination:


"causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the sum of all parties' genjutsu points."
^Explain that.


Name: Initiative
Rank: N/A
Cost: N/A
Upkeep: N/A
Type: General Ability
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user takes the abilities of the Rinnegan to produce black chakra receivers to new heights by combining it with Jianyu's extensive knowledge in fabrication and construction. Most often he simply creates arrows for his bow, allowing him to no longer need replenishment of the more basic variety, each complete with fetching comprised of thin, flexible black receiver filaments. Of course, other constructions are also possible, so long as they are comprised of the receivers. These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment.
Combination: N/A


Your free, chakra receiving black rods were not meant to be high level weapons or else they would not be free. They are meant to send and receive chakra. So you making them as powerful as your chakra stat is denied. Pick a more reasonable number for these considering they are supplementary as well as complementary.

Kamui

1. We do not go purely by canon on virtually any of canon techs. We make them in accordance to site scales as well as what as taking into consideration how the tech works.
Wikia can be edited by anyone and is not perfectly accurate. We use it for reference, but all canon techs have to be made according to how the site works.

2. We can flesh out kamui and make it more specifc; but you will be adding the cost and edits I already asked for.

3. A copy-paste from the wikia is not remotely helpful and is quite inefficient since it is not specific at all. And it is denied.

4. Kamui has a speed; it can be fast, but it has a speed.

5. Explain to me how you can teleport to a place you have never been on this planet; on purpose.

6. Your explanation of how you sync dimensions seems reasonable enough. You do not get to "manipulate" the dimension, however.

Whatever you want kamui to do, I need to be scaled reasonably and a more consise description. The one you had before was fine, but you did not place any limits or numbers even though every aspect of this technique is not instantaneous (regardless of what a narutofanboy might have said). So I will let you re-write it including the things ive asked for as well as how you can most simply describe how you want/it actually works.

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Key Square: They are blaze release flames. They are the power of this technique I suppose? I still don't get what you mean by this.

The Bell Jar: Yep.

Mad Tea Party: It should say "by the user's genjutsu points." Forgot to edit that.

Initiative: Sure. What would you suggest? What power do they inherently have as they have canonically pierced through Naruto's fully powered Nine-Tails cloak?

I'll address Kamui when I have more time. But, again, the costs are based on FTG, a technique which this specifically surpasses.
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Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Key Square: They are blaze release flames. They are the power of this technique I suppose? I still don't get what you mean by this.

I was confused because you kept mentioning flames an Amaterasu. I thought these flames somehow were Amaterasu, but added to your Susanoo; hence why I was asking if they have the affect. I see now they are different flames, still blaze release, that have a power equal to your chakra.

The Bell Jar: Yep.

Mad Tea Party: It should say "by the user's genjutsu points." Forgot to edit that.

Initiative: Sure. What would you suggest? What power do they inherently have as they have canonically pierced through Naruto's fully powered Nine-Tails cloak?

The ones you are getting for free will not be that powerful. The ones I intended to give for free were simply chakra receivers. If you would like to make the version that can pierce through a cloak etc. than we can talk similar numbers; but there must be a cost as I'm sure you can understand.

I'll address Kamui when I have more time. But, again, the costs are based on FTG, a technique which this specifically surpasses.

It does surpass it in various ways; but the costs are far too low given the fact that you not only teleport; you suck up into your dimension and can do so with enemies.
I sincerely hope you understand why intangibility is not going to cost only ten chakra. And you will not be making HUMANS you touch intangible with this tech. That will be a whole separate situation.

Do me a favour and make kamui carefully and make it easy to check please. Don't make me hound you for explanations and numbers etc. Anything you want to do - give it numbers unless it is not applicable.


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Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Key Square: They are blaze release flames. They are the power of this technique I suppose? I still don't get what you mean by this.

I was confused because you kept mentioning flames an Amaterasu. I thought these flames somehow were Amaterasu, but added to your Susanoo; hence why I was asking if they have the affect. I see now they are different flames, still blaze release, that have a power equal to your chakra.

The Bell Jar: Yep.

Mad Tea Party: It should say "by the user's genjutsu points." Forgot to edit that.

Initiative: Sure. What would you suggest? What power do they inherently have as they have canonically pierced through Naruto's fully powered Nine-Tails cloak?

The ones you are getting for free will not be that powerful. The ones I intended to give for free were simply chakra receivers. If you would like to make the version that can pierce through a cloak etc. than we can talk similar numbers; but there must be a cost as I'm sure you can understand.

I'll address Kamui when I have more time. But, again, the costs are based on FTG, a technique which this specifically surpasses.

It does surpass it in various ways; but the costs are far too low given the fact that you not only teleport; you suck up into your dimension and can do so with enemies.
I sincerely hope you understand why intangibility is not going to cost only ten chakra. And you will not be making HUMANS you touch intangible with this tech. That will be a whole separate situation.

Do me a favour and make kamui carefully and make it easy to check please. Don't make me hound you for explanations and numbers etc. Anything you want to do - give it numbers unless it is not applicable.


Key Square: I trust you have found all is explained quite eloquently between this technique and blaze release.

Bell Jar: Approved.

Mad Tea Party: Approved.

Initiative: I'm still waiting for stats on the "base" form of these. What is it you intended - specifically, exactly, and located in a single post?

Kamui: Again, I will address it when I have time. I will make it, carefully, and you will yet grill me for specifics. No need to act koy here: you clearly pay more attention to my techniques than that of anyone else's. As I have already said, I will address it.
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Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Name: Key Square
Rank: B
Cost: 30
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Blaze
Range: Susano'o
Speed: N/A
Power: +User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: An augmentation which Jianyu can add to his Susano'o or variants of at any point, this spontaneously transmutes the otherwise basic chakra weave of the avatar into that of the cursed flames of Amaterasu, enshrouding the user with a quasi-living projection made of black flames. This technique, rather uniquely, does not simply cover the Susano'o with the black flames but actually fuses it with the avatar, granting extra power to the summoned creature. When used by Jianyu, whose Susano'o is golden in color, the flames begin as gold before turning black, granting the infrequent and fleeting view of golden flames lurking beneath the black swathe of inferno, earning him the tile of "The Lord of Sunlight."
Combination:Susano'o and variants


So you shroud your Susanoo in black flames that have the power of your chakra. Ok. These flames do not get the same unique affect of Susanoo.
Make this S rank like I asked and adjust the cost; and add an upkeep.


Name: The Bell Jar
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: Triggered by being in range of the genjutsu, this illusion dilates any and all victim's perceptions of time, causing everything to appear to take a near-infinite amount of time. This extends not simply to physical actions but sensations and thoughts, slowing everything to a pace beyond glacial. This does not affect the target's speed, though in the initial post after being affected and the first post after escaping syncing one's body up with one's thoughts can prove incredibly awkward.  Rather, the ability seeks to mentally exhaust the opposition as, when even the sensation of pain moving from your hand to your brain can seem to take a hundred years, complete mental collapse is almost assured. Because of this, victims quickly feel as though they are trapped within their own bodies and, in the course of a few posts, they can easily feel as if they have been trapped there for many a lifetime.
Combination:Any

Approved.

Name: Mad Tea Party
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: An illusion which borders upon complete insanity, this genjutsu appears to simply improve the victim's attention when in range. By sharing with the opponent the user's incredible perception and capacity for rapid thought, he forcibly heightens the perceptive powers of enemies. Superficially, this appears to simply increase the senses of those affected, sharpening their sight, hearing, and such to previously unheard of levels. However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the user's genjutsu points.

Truthfully, this illusions alters the prey's consciousness in an extremely subtle way, removing the brain's natural filtration of "useless" information. For example, the eyes can always see the nose but, at almost all times, the brain simply chooses to look beyond this, filtering out the pointlessness of always being able to look at one's nose. This illusion inhibits this sort of filtration, turning unconscious action into purely conscious action and forcing those under its sway to, essentially, think themselves to death. Every single firing of a nerve, every bit of feedback from motion, every tiny breath of air upon the flesh become utterly demanding of attention, causing victims to have to manually evaluate each and every thought, sensation, action, and reaction. The mind, having only a certain amount of attention it can give and under the stress of an infinite amount of stimuli and movements, of actions and thoughts, eventually gives out. While people can be easily driven insane, this is not always the case. Instead, those under this illusion are driven to an utter paralysis of thought as simply observing everything around and within them dominates their every thought.
Combination:


" However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the user's genjutsu points. "

^Still waiting for this to be removed or explained.


Name: Initiative
Rank: N/A
Cost: N/A
Upkeep: N/A
Type: General Ability
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user takes the abilities of the Rinnegan to produce black chakra receivers to new heights by combining it with Jianyu's extensive knowledge in fabrication and construction. Most often he simply creates arrows for his bow, allowing him to no longer need replenishment of the more basic variety, each complete with fetching comprised of thin, flexible black receiver filaments. Of course, other constructions are also possible, so long as they are comprised of the receivers. These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment.
Combination: N/A



  • These can be five meters in size.
  • S rank tech/60 chakra
  • 20 upkeep to keep making them
  • They can be the power of your base chakra.
  • They cannot come from every part of your body; pick some. You do not magically spawn rods from your neck as this is not an organic technique.
  • These are black poles/chakra receivers; not any other object.
  • You put these in your paths in order to control them; if they are removed, you lose control of them. You must have at least three rods in them to maintain control of them.



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[21:26:29] Rei Uchiha : If you have beef with someone, let them know & give far chance
[16:55:16] Psychosis : Maybe but people get PISSED when you take shit away from them based on a misunderstanding.
[16:55:23] Psychosis : A lot of being staff is knowing how to not piss people off.
[16:56:30] Psychosis : Have you met most RPers?
[20:12:14] Muroku Washiba : This is no WE is MEssiah
[14:26:12]Cecilia Terumi : Pretty much let the snake find the hole, and make it fit. >>
[19:59:06] Valentina Yuki : I am the senior director of playing with penises on this site.
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Eververse wrote:a
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Name: Key Square
Rank: B
Cost: 30
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Blaze
Range: Susano'o
Speed: N/A
Power: +User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: An augmentation which Jianyu can add to his Susano'o or variants of at any point, this spontaneously transmutes the otherwise basic chakra weave of the avatar into that of the cursed flames of Amaterasu, enshrouding the user with a quasi-living projection made of black flames. This technique, rather uniquely, does not simply cover the Susano'o with the black flames but actually fuses it with the avatar, granting extra power to the summoned creature. When used by Jianyu, whose Susano'o is golden in color, the flames begin as gold before turning black, granting the infrequent and fleeting view of golden flames lurking beneath the black swathe of inferno, earning him the tile of "The Lord of Sunlight."
Combination:Susano'o and variants


So you shroud your Susanoo in black flames that have the power of your chakra. Ok. These flames do not get the same unique affect of Susanoo.
Make this S rank like I asked and adjust the cost; and add an upkeep.


Name: The Bell Jar
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: Triggered by being in range of the genjutsu, this illusion dilates any and all victim's perceptions of time, causing everything to appear to take a near-infinite amount of time. This extends not simply to physical actions but sensations and thoughts, slowing everything to a pace beyond glacial. This does not affect the target's speed, though in the initial post after being affected and the first post after escaping syncing one's body up with one's thoughts can prove incredibly awkward.  Rather, the ability seeks to mentally exhaust the opposition as, when even the sensation of pain moving from your hand to your brain can seem to take a hundred years, complete mental collapse is almost assured. Because of this, victims quickly feel as though they are trapped within their own bodies and, in the course of a few posts, they can easily feel as if they have been trapped there for many a lifetime.
Combination:Any

Approved.

Name: Mad Tea Party
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: An illusion which borders upon complete insanity, this genjutsu appears to simply improve the victim's attention when in range. By sharing with the opponent the user's incredible perception and capacity for rapid thought, he forcibly heightens the perceptive powers of enemies. Superficially, this appears to simply increase the senses of those affected, sharpening their sight, hearing, and such to previously unheard of levels. However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the user's genjutsu points.

Truthfully, this illusions alters the prey's consciousness in an extremely subtle way, removing the brain's natural filtration of "useless" information. For example, the eyes can always see the nose but, at almost all times, the brain simply chooses to look beyond this, filtering out the pointlessness of always being able to look at one's nose. This illusion inhibits this sort of filtration, turning unconscious action into purely conscious action and forcing those under its sway to, essentially, think themselves to death. Every single firing of a nerve, every bit of feedback from motion, every tiny breath of air upon the flesh become utterly demanding of attention, causing victims to have to manually evaluate each and every thought, sensation, action, and reaction. The mind, having only a certain amount of attention it can give and under the stress of an infinite amount of stimuli and movements, of actions and thoughts, eventually gives out. While people can be easily driven insane, this is not always the case. Instead, those under this illusion are driven to an utter paralysis of thought as simply observing everything around and within them dominates their every thought.
Combination:


" However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the user's genjutsu points. "

^Still waiting for this to be removed or explained.


Name: Initiative
Rank: N/A
Cost: N/A
Upkeep: N/A
Type: General Ability
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user takes the abilities of the Rinnegan to produce black chakra receivers to new heights by combining it with Jianyu's extensive knowledge in fabrication and construction. Most often he simply creates arrows for his bow, allowing him to no longer need replenishment of the more basic variety, each complete with fetching comprised of thin, flexible black receiver filaments. Of course, other constructions are also possible, so long as they are comprised of the receivers. These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment.
Combination: N/A




  • These can be five meters in size.
  • S rank tech/60 chakra
  • 20 upkeep to keep making them
  • They can be the power of your base chakra.
  • They cannot come from every part of your body; pick some. You do not magically spawn rods from your neck as this is not an organic technique.
  • These are black poles/chakra receivers; not any other object.
  • You put these in your paths in order to control them; if they are removed, you lose control of them. You must have at least three rods in them to maintain control of them.





Key Square: Edited. Forgot to change rank/cost. My bad.

Everything is stated in the description. If you're still confused, ask directly what you don't understand.

I have absolutly zero idea as to what you mean when you say they "do not get the same unique affect of Susanoo."

Bell Jar: Thank you.

Tea Party: I have fixed that statement already, as I said when I removed the 'sum of all party's' bit. If you still do no understand what this means, please say so and specify what you do not know.

Initiative:
  1. Gave a size of 10 m. It's an S rank technique now.

  2. It's an S rank technique now.

  3. What do you mean with an upkeep? An upkeep to maintain their existence?

  4. They are the power of the User's Chakra

  5. I do not know what you mean that this is not an "organic" technique or how that has anything to do with where they come from.

  6. This has already been specified. Even the arrow I gave as an example is only made of cylindrical chakra receivers.

  7. The ones put in paths to control them are the free ones gained as an ability of the Rinnegan and should be covered in that section. I have already asked for clarification on this twice now, but I'll ask a third time: what stats do they have? How do they work?
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on Sat Dec 03, 2016 2:28 pm
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Name: Key Square
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Blaze
Range: Susano'o
Speed: N/A
Power: +User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: An augmentation which Jianyu can add to his Susano'o or variants of at any point, this spontaneously transmutes the otherwise basic chakra weave of the avatar into that of the cursed flames of Amaterasu, enshrouding the user with a quasi-living projection made of black flames. This technique, rather uniquely, does not simply cover the Susano'o with the black flames but actually fuses it with the avatar, granting extra power to the summoned creature. When used by Jianyu, whose Susano'o is golden in color, the flames begin as gold before turning black, granting the infrequent and fleeting view of golden flames lurking beneath the black swathe of inferno, earning him the tile of "The Lord of Sunlight."
Combination:Susano'o and variants


Approved.
The flames do not have the ability to stay on someone permanently like Amaterasu.


Name: The Bell Jar
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: Triggered by being in range of the genjutsu, this illusion dilates any and all victim's perceptions of time, causing everything to appear to take a near-infinite amount of time. This extends not simply to physical actions but sensations and thoughts, slowing everything to a pace beyond glacial. This does not affect the target's speed, though in the initial post after being affected and the first post after escaping syncing one's body up with one's thoughts can prove incredibly awkward.  Rather, the ability seeks to mentally exhaust the opposition as, when even the sensation of pain moving from your hand to your brain can seem to take a hundred years, complete mental collapse is almost assured. Because of this, victims quickly feel as though they are trapped within their own bodies and, in the course of a few posts, they can easily feel as if they have been trapped there for many a lifetime.
Combination:Any


Approved.

Name: Mad Tea Party
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: An illusion which borders upon complete insanity, this genjutsu appears to simply improve the victim's attention when in range. By sharing with the opponent the user's incredible perception and capacity for rapid thought, he forcibly heightens the perceptive powers of enemies. Superficially, this appears to simply increase the senses of those affected, sharpening their sight, hearing, and such to previously unheard of levels. However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the user's genjutsu points.

Truthfully, this illusions alters the prey's consciousness in an extremely subtle way, removing the brain's natural filtration of "useless" information. For example, the eyes can always see the nose but, at almost all times, the brain simply chooses to look beyond this, filtering out the pointlessness of always being able to look at one's nose. This illusion inhibits this sort of filtration, turning unconscious action into purely conscious action and forcing those under its sway to, essentially, think themselves to death. Every single firing of a nerve, every bit of feedback from motion, every tiny breath of air upon the flesh become utterly demanding of attention, causing victims to have to manually evaluate each and every thought, sensation, action, and reaction. The mind, having only a certain amount of attention it can give and under the stress of an infinite amount of stimuli and movements, of actions and thoughts, eventually gives out. While people can be easily driven insane, this is not always the case. Instead, those under this illusion are driven to an utter paralysis of thought as simply observing everything around and within them dominates their every thought.
Combination:

What does "increase by the factorial of the user's gen points" mean? That is my only question.

Name: Initiative
Rank: S
Cost: 50
Upkeep: N/A
Type: General Ability
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user takes the abilities of the Rinnegan to produce black chakra receivers to new heights by combining it with Jianyu's extensive knowledge in fabrication and construction. Most often he simply creates arrows for his bow, allowing him to no longer need replenishment of the more basic variety, each complete with fetching comprised of thin, flexible black receiver filaments. Of course, other constructions are also possible, so long as they are comprised of the receivers. These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment. Rods can be no more than ten meters in size
Combination: N/A


I thought you wanted these to be the ones you put inside of your paths. If you want it to be the free ones, no worries on that. The free ones can just be used to control your paths.

Jianyu wrote:These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment. Rods can be no more than ten meters in size

1. What I meant by saying these are not "organic" is that it does not make since for black rods to just appear from all areas of your body. Its not like wooden spikes with senju whose bodies can be altered to be "wooden" or fused with their element. These are just black rods so I'm not sure why they can be spawned anywhere and everywhere at all times. If you can explain that I'd reconsider.

2. Large complicated objects? What?

3. I asked for upkeep because you sounded like you are continually creating them...



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[12:09:51] Jianyu Uchiha : We gotta keep competitive in the arms race of which land has how many Sorikata.
[21:26:29] Rei Uchiha : If you have beef with someone, let them know & give far chance
[16:55:16] Psychosis : Maybe but people get PISSED when you take shit away from them based on a misunderstanding.
[16:55:23] Psychosis : A lot of being staff is knowing how to not piss people off.
[16:56:30] Psychosis : Have you met most RPers?
[20:12:14] Muroku Washiba : This is no WE is MEssiah
[14:26:12]Cecilia Terumi : Pretty much let the snake find the hole, and make it fit. >>
[19:59:06] Valentina Yuki : I am the senior director of playing with penises on this site.
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on Sat Dec 03, 2016 10:08 pm
Eververse wrote:
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Name: Key Square
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Blaze
Range: Susano'o
Speed: N/A
Power: +User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: An augmentation which Jianyu can add to his Susano'o or variants of at any point, this spontaneously transmutes the otherwise basic chakra weave of the avatar into that of the cursed flames of Amaterasu, enshrouding the user with a quasi-living projection made of black flames. This technique, rather uniquely, does not simply cover the Susano'o with the black flames but actually fuses it with the avatar, granting extra power to the summoned creature. When used by Jianyu, whose Susano'o is golden in color, the flames begin as gold before turning black, granting the infrequent and fleeting view of golden flames lurking beneath the black swathe of inferno, earning him the tile of "The Lord of Sunlight."
Combination:Susano'o and variants


Approved.
The flames do not have the ability to stay on someone permanently like Amaterasu.


Name: The Bell Jar
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: Triggered by being in range of the genjutsu, this illusion dilates any and all victim's perceptions of time, causing everything to appear to take a near-infinite amount of time. This extends not simply to physical actions but sensations and thoughts, slowing everything to a pace beyond glacial. This does not affect the target's speed, though in the initial post after being affected and the first post after escaping syncing one's body up with one's thoughts can prove incredibly awkward.  Rather, the ability seeks to mentally exhaust the opposition as, when even the sensation of pain moving from your hand to your brain can seem to take a hundred years, complete mental collapse is almost assured. Because of this, victims quickly feel as though they are trapped within their own bodies and, in the course of a few posts, they can easily feel as if they have been trapped there for many a lifetime.
Combination:Any


Approved.

Name: Mad Tea Party
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: An illusion which borders upon complete insanity, this genjutsu appears to simply improve the victim's attention when in range. By sharing with the opponent the user's incredible perception and capacity for rapid thought, he forcibly heightens the perceptive powers of enemies. Superficially, this appears to simply increase the senses of those affected, sharpening their sight, hearing, and such to previously unheard of levels. However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the user's genjutsu points.

Truthfully, this illusions alters the prey's consciousness in an extremely subtle way, removing the brain's natural filtration of "useless" information. For example, the eyes can always see the nose but, at almost all times, the brain simply chooses to look beyond this, filtering out the pointlessness of always being able to look at one's nose. This illusion inhibits this sort of filtration, turning unconscious action into purely conscious action and forcing those under its sway to, essentially, think themselves to death. Every single firing of a nerve, every bit of feedback from motion, every tiny breath of air upon the flesh become utterly demanding of attention, causing victims to have to manually evaluate each and every thought, sensation, action, and reaction. The mind, having only a certain amount of attention it can give and under the stress of an infinite amount of stimuli and movements, of actions and thoughts, eventually gives out. While people can be easily driven insane, this is not always the case. Instead, those under this illusion are driven to an utter paralysis of thought as simply observing everything around and within them dominates their every thought.
Combination:

What does "increase by the factorial of the user's gen points" mean? That is my only question.

Name: Initiative
Rank: S
Cost: 50
Upkeep: N/A
Type: General Ability
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user takes the abilities of the Rinnegan to produce black chakra receivers to new heights by combining it with Jianyu's extensive knowledge in fabrication and construction. Most often he simply creates arrows for his bow, allowing him to no longer need replenishment of the more basic variety, each complete with fetching comprised of thin, flexible black receiver filaments. Of course, other constructions are also possible, so long as they are comprised of the receivers. These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment. Rods can be no more than ten meters in size
Combination: N/A


I thought you wanted these to be the ones you put inside of your paths. If you want it to be the free ones, no worries on that. The free ones can just be used to control your paths.

Jianyu wrote:These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment. Rods can be no more than ten meters in size

1. What I meant by saying these are not "organic" is that it does not make since for black rods to just appear from all areas of your body. Its not like wooden spikes with senju whose bodies can be altered to be "wooden" or fused with their element. These are just black rods so I'm not sure why they can be spawned anywhere and everywhere at all times. If you can explain that I'd reconsider.

2. Large complicated objects? What?

3. I asked for upkeep because you sounded like you are continually creating them...



Key Square: Thank you. And that's fine.

Bell Jar: Approved.

Tea Party: Ah yes. Factorial is a mathematical function. Victims' abilities of perception increase vastly to the point they can do nothing but think. That simply illustrates the magnitude to which their perception increases.

Initiative:

1. They are already produced from the user's body. "Rinnegan users are able to generate them from their own bodies, usually their hands." From the wiki. Madara frequently produced them from his hands. Obito produces them from various locations of his arm. They literally appear to grow from one's body. As they are produced from the body, there's no reason they can't be produced from, say, the feet.

2. Any complicated or large object I attempt to make would be apped as some kind of pseudo-weapon.

3. Added upkeep.
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on Sun Dec 04, 2016 7:52 am
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Name: Key Square
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Blaze
Range: Susano'o
Speed: N/A
Power: +User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: An augmentation which Jianyu can add to his Susano'o or variants of at any point, this spontaneously transmutes the otherwise basic chakra weave of the avatar into that of the cursed flames of Amaterasu, enshrouding the user with a quasi-living projection made of black flames. This technique, rather uniquely, does not simply cover the Susano'o with the black flames but actually fuses it with the avatar, granting extra power to the summoned creature. When used by Jianyu, whose Susano'o is golden in color, the flames begin as gold before turning black, granting the infrequent and fleeting view of golden flames lurking beneath the black swathe of inferno, earning him the tile of "The Lord of Sunlight."
Combination:Susano'o and variants


Name: The Bell Jar
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: Triggered by being in range of the genjutsu, this illusion dilates any and all victim's perceptions of time, causing everything to appear to take a near-infinite amount of time. This extends not simply to physical actions but sensations and thoughts, slowing everything to a pace beyond glacial. This does not affect the target's speed, though in the initial post after being affected and the first post after escaping syncing one's body up with one's thoughts can prove incredibly awkward.  Rather, the ability seeks to mentally exhaust the opposition as, when even the sensation of pain moving from your hand to your brain can seem to take a hundred years, complete mental collapse is almost assured. Because of this, victims quickly feel as though they are trapped within their own bodies and, in the course of a few posts, they can easily feel as if they have been trapped there for many a lifetime.
Combination:Any


Name: Mad Tea Party
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 m
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Gen Points
Handseals:
Description: An illusion which borders upon complete insanity, this genjutsu appears to simply improve the victim's attention when in range. By sharing with the opponent the user's incredible perception and capacity for rapid thought, he forcibly heightens the perceptive powers of enemies. Superficially, this appears to simply increase the senses of those affected, sharpening their sight, hearing, and such to previously unheard of levels. However, the effect multiplies far beyond this basic scope, causing the perception of those ensnared to increase by the factorial of the user's genjutsu points.

Truthfully, this illusions alters the prey's consciousness in an extremely subtle way, removing the brain's natural filtration of "useless" information. For example, the eyes can always see the nose but, at almost all times, the brain simply chooses to look beyond this, filtering out the pointlessness of always being able to look at one's nose. This illusion inhibits this sort of filtration, turning unconscious action into purely conscious action and forcing those under its sway to, essentially, think themselves to death. Every single firing of a nerve, every bit of feedback from motion, every tiny breath of air upon the flesh become utterly demanding of attention, causing victims to have to manually evaluate each and every thought, sensation, action, and reaction. The mind, having only a certain amount of attention it can give and under the stress of an infinite amount of stimuli and movements, of actions and thoughts, eventually gives out. While people can be easily driven insane, this is not always the case. Instead, those under this illusion are driven to an utter paralysis of thought as simply observing everything around and within them dominates their every thought.
Combination:


Name: Initiative
Rank: S
Cost: 50
Upkeep: 20
Type: General Ability
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Power: User's Chakra
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user takes the abilities of the Rinnegan to produce black chakra receivers to new heights by combining it with Jianyu's extensive knowledge in fabrication and construction. Most often he simply creates arrows for his bow, allowing him to no longer need replenishment of the more basic variety, each complete with fetching comprised of thin, flexible black receiver filaments. Of course, other constructions are also possible, so long as they are comprised of the receivers. These can be created from any part of his body (or the body of paths) at any time, though large, complicated objects require a more significant time investment. Rods can be no more than ten meters in size
Combination: N/A

Instead of factorial, please use more clear language to those who might be confused. I get what you mean; but just so I'm not pulled into an argument between you and someone else.

Everything else is approved for now.

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[21:26:29] Rei Uchiha : If you have beef with someone, let them know & give far chance
[16:55:16] Psychosis : Maybe but people get PISSED when you take shit away from them based on a misunderstanding.
[16:55:23] Psychosis : A lot of being staff is knowing how to not piss people off.
[16:56:30] Psychosis : Have you met most RPers?
[20:12:14] Muroku Washiba : This is no WE is MEssiah
[14:26:12]Cecilia Terumi : Pretty much let the snake find the hole, and make it fit. >>
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on Sun Dec 04, 2016 10:07 am
The factorial is the most efficient way I can think to phrase it. If you understand it then it's clearly comprehensible. Anyone who wants clarification from me can, as always, simply ask.

And are they approved or approved temporarily?

Thank you.
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on Sun Dec 04, 2016 2:13 pm
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:The factorial is the most efficient way I can think to phrase it. If you understand it then it's clearly comprehensible. Anyone who wants clarification from me can, as always, simply ask.

And are they approved or approved temporarily?

Thank you.

I need you to clarify to ME. Because factorial often means 5 + 4 +3 + 2 +1. And that is denied for this tech since it is a basic S rank. I don't want any confusion with your tech.

Your other techniques are approved.

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on Sun Dec 04, 2016 2:25 pm
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Jianyu Uchiha wrote:The factorial is the most efficient way I can think to phrase it. If you understand it then it's clearly comprehensible. Anyone who wants clarification from me can, as always, simply ask.

And are they approved or approved temporarily?

Thank you.

I need you to clarify to ME. Because factorial often means 5 + 4 +3 + 2 +1. And that is denied for this tech since it is a basic S rank. I don't want any confusion with your tech.

Your other techniques are approved.


I get what you mean;

What - Exactly - are you unclear on? You said you understood, so I assumed you did. Do you not? That is now how a factorial works. Is that what you are asking? Do you want me to explain how to factorialize a number?
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on Sun Dec 04, 2016 8:58 pm
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:
Eververse wrote:
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:The factorial is the most efficient way I can think to phrase it. If you understand it then it's clearly comprehensible. Anyone who wants clarification from me can, as always, simply ask.

And are they approved or approved temporarily?

Thank you.

I need you to clarify to ME. Because factorial often means 5 + 4 +3 + 2 +1. And that is denied for this tech since it is a basic S rank. I don't want any confusion with your tech.

Your other techniques are approved.


I get what you mean;

What - Exactly - are you unclear on? You said you understood, so I assumed you did. Do you not? That is now how a factorial works. Is that what you are asking? Do you want me to explain how to factorialize a number?

Please Explain. Rarely do we have the same definition for the same thing and I don't want a possibility of confusion.

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[12:09:51] Jianyu Uchiha : We gotta keep competitive in the arms race of which land has how many Sorikata.
[21:26:29] Rei Uchiha : If you have beef with someone, let them know & give far chance
[16:55:16] Psychosis : Maybe but people get PISSED when you take shit away from them based on a misunderstanding.
[16:55:23] Psychosis : A lot of being staff is knowing how to not piss people off.
[16:56:30] Psychosis : Have you met most RPers?
[20:12:14] Muroku Washiba : This is no WE is MEssiah
[14:26:12]Cecilia Terumi : Pretty much let the snake find the hole, and make it fit. >>
[19:59:06] Valentina Yuki : I am the senior director of playing with penises on this site.
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on Sun Dec 04, 2016 9:30 pm
Eververse wrote:
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:
Eververse wrote:
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:The factorial is the most efficient way I can think to phrase it. If you understand it then it's clearly comprehensible. Anyone who wants clarification from me can, as always, simply ask.

And are they approved or approved temporarily?

Thank you.

I need you to clarify to ME. Because factorial often means 5 + 4 +3 + 2 +1. And that is denied for this tech since it is a basic S rank. I don't want any confusion with your tech.

Your other techniques are approved.


I get what you mean;

What - Exactly - are you unclear on? You said you understood, so I assumed you did. Do you not? That is now how a factorial works. Is that what you are asking? Do you want me to explain how to factorialize a number?

Please Explain. Rarely do we have the same definition for the same thing and I don't want a possibility of confusion.

Merriam-Webster wrote:factorial
noun  fac·to·ri·al
Definition of factorial
1
:  the product of all the positive integers from 1 to n —symbol n!
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I've provided the definition of factorial if that helps. I still do not know what you are not certain about. Please state clearly what you do not understand and I am more than happy to clarify.
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