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on Mon Oct 03, 2016 7:42 pm
Name: Wind of destruction
Rank: B
Cost: 30
Upkeep:
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Wind element
Range:
Speed: Depends on the speed of user(since this requires contact)
Power: 400
Handseals:
Description: A jutsu designed to be combined with the any gentle fist move using the wind affinity to cause internal damage with each hit, once the user has been struck, the wind chakra is released inside the individual which affects the chakra circulatory system and any organ around it, the wind release chakra is sent to violently cut the tenketsu and do extreme damage to the individual, causing severe pain and internal bleeding and the elimination of the opponent's use of  chakra. Medical ninjutsu can be used to heal the damages done by this technique, if not treated before the tenketsus heal naturally, victims that move during this period are susceptible to a pang of pain which can be neglected and the internal bleeding becomes worse, for every 2 posts of movement, there Is a - 5decrease in life force, the pain and bleeding stops when the opponent stops moving.
   The chakra circulatory system cannot be fixed unless the user meets a medic that has extensive knowledge of the chakra circulatory network and the parts where they have been cut and how to patch them up, else the opponent will be unable to utilise chakra.
The tenketsus will heal naturally after the victim has made 2 topics after the topic they were hit.
Combination: Gentle fist

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Name: Stir
Rank: D
Cost: 10
Upkeep: 5
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind element
Range: 100m
Speed: 100
Power: N/A
Handseals: Bird, Dragon
Description:. The user releases wind release chakra around a large area, the jutsu itself is not capable of damage, but the wind action kicks up dust and deflates it everywhere,  creating a field that is composed of fast-moving dust which creates a smokescreen and murks sight although  incapable of causing damage, the high-veloctity dust particles will get in  one's eye(s) if exposed to the wind and. It also affects the opponent's ear since the wind carrying the dust particles whoosh around in motion. Being that the wind is generated from the user, the wind pushes the sand outwards, and thereby prevents the sand from getting into the user's eyes, however, without a dojutsu, their vision will also be murked just like their opponent's Another drawback of this technique is that if they get too close to the opponent, the wind generated from their body can be felt slightly by the opponent and the bombardment of sand particles(due to the increased pressure) is enough to alert the opponent of the user's presence if they can reason it out, of course the bombardment doesn't cause damage as stated above


Combination: Sensory impairing techniques





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on Wed Oct 05, 2016 6:07 pm
Hello??I'd be happy if a mod checks this
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on Thu Oct 06, 2016 8:00 pm
Hisoka wrote:Name:Bone Area
Rank:  B
Cost: 35
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:
Range: 30m
Speed: 300
Power: .200+70
Handseals:
Description:.Bones rise from beneath the ground up to a maximum of 6m in the air, which can have a diameter of 1 meter at the base, it it mostly circular and elliptic and can be made to incline or grow in any fashion the user wills 30m around the user .
Combination:


Pretty sure a tech for yall is already made like this, Canon too

Name: Shikotsumyaku: Revenge
Rank: C
Cost: 25
Upkeep: 5
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:
Range: 15m
Speed: 200
Power: .200+85
Handseals: Ram
Description:. When there is loose bone lying around, the user can infuse chakra to effect any bone around him in
Combination:


Awefully vauge, I will give you one chance to fill this out before I help you out, simply because it may not do as your wishing to at that point

Name: Wind of destruction
Rank: C
Cost: 20
Upkeep:
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Wind element
Range:
Speed: Depends on the speed of user(since this requires contact)
Power: 300
Handseals:
Description: A jutsu designed to be combined with the any gentle fist move using the wind affinity to cause internal damage which each hit, once the user has been struck, the wind chakra is released inside the individual which affects the chakra circulatory sys em and any organ around it, the wind release chakra is sent to violently cut the tenketsu and do extreme damage to the individual, causing severe pain and internal bleeding and the elimination of the opponent's use of  chakra
Combination: Gentle fist


Seems like yet another jutsu already made, again what is the point then at this juncture

Name: Stir
Rank: D
Cost: 10
Upkeep: 5
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind element
Range: 150m
Speed: 100
Power: N/A
Handseals: Bird, Dragon
Description:. The user releases wind release chakra around a large area, the jutsu itself is not capable of damage, but the wind action kicks up dust and deflates it everywhere,  creating a field that is composed of high moving dust which renders visibility to 0, although  incapable of causing damage, the high-veloctity dust particles will get in  one's eye(s) if exposed to the wind and, should any one have a dojutsu like the sharingan on, their vision will be blurred by the user's chakra. It also affects the opponent's ear since the wind is always howling.
Combination: Sensory impairing techniques


Sorry but according to the way this is written, Doujutsu could see through it, the dust is not made from Chakra, and Wind is clearly see through. also to effect Doujutsu this will be higher then D-rank

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on Thu Oct 06, 2016 8:37 pm
1. So the first tech is more or less like a smaller version of the Dance of Seedling Fern since it's limited, of course I am aware of the existence of that jutsu, think of it like Hashirama and Yamato, if this doesn't sit well with you I'll remove it
2. I removed the second jutsu
3. The third technique actually severs the chakra circulatory system completely. since this doesn't just force them to close or open, it cuts them off and shatters the pathway, hereby stopping chakra circulation
Of course, anyone with the required endurance can withstand the jutsu
4. I removed the part that mentions the jutsu being able to hamper dojutsu, although I think dojutsu like sharingan will see it as a cloud of chakra instead of seeing through it because it contains chakra..
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on Thu Oct 06, 2016 9:50 pm
1. I cannot allow you to make a weaker varient until you learn the first one, according to our rules.

2. Very well as you wish, it was plasuible, but anyways.

3. At which point it would be much stronger then C-rank or only lasting for so long, and at such point, is agian like the other hyuuga jutsu

4. You described it wrong for what you were trying to accomplish, if you wish to try again, so be it, otherwise Approved. (PS I did also make a side note the it may be possible to keep Doujutsu blinding, but at a higher ranking)
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on Thu Oct 06, 2016 10:07 pm
1. I removed the first jutsu
2. Bumped Wind of destruction to B rank


I think I've done all I'm required to do
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on Sat Oct 08, 2016 8:26 am
Okay you need to put in the Destruction that Medical jutsu can heal it, ect, stuff like that
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on Sat Oct 08, 2016 9:38 am
Done
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on Sat Oct 08, 2016 10:16 am
B-rank does not equal Permanent Damage at all mate, not for the Tenketsu, please revise
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on Sat Oct 08, 2016 1:31 pm
Itake it that stir has been approved, since we have not discussed about it, I fixed the problem, I hope its acceptable now
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on Mon Oct 10, 2016 10:13 pm
Hello?
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on Fri Oct 14, 2016 9:16 am
Hisoka wrote:Name: Wind of destruction
Rank: B
Cost: 30
Upkeep:
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Wind element
Range:
Speed: Depends on the speed of user(since this requires contact)
Power: 400
Handseals:
Description: A jutsu designed to be combined with the any gentle fist move using the wind affinity to cause internal damage which each hit, once the user has been struck, the wind chakra is released inside the individual which affects the chakra circulatory sys em and any organ around it, the wind release chakra is sent to violently cut the tenketsu and do extreme damage to the individual, causing severe pain and internal bleeding and the elimination of the opponent's use of  chakra. Medical ninjutsu can be used to heal the damages done by this technique, although the victim only has 3 posts for this, because if they fail to get help on time, they will die from the pang of pain inside of them and internal bleeding.
   The chakra circulatory system cannot be fixed unless the medic has extensivr knowledge of the chakra circulatory network and the parts where they have been cut and how to patch them up, else the opponent will be unable to utilise chakra until the internal problem has been solved
Combination: Gentle fist

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Name: Stir
Rank: D
Cost: 10
Upkeep: 5
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind element
Range: 150m
Speed: 100
Power: N/A
Handseals: Bird, Dragon
Description:. The user releases wind release chakra around a large area, the jutsu itself is not capable of damage, but the wind action kicks up dust and deflates it everywhere,  creating a field that is composed of fast-moving dust which renders visibility to 0, although  incapable of causing damage, the high-veloctity dust particles will get in  one's eye(s) if exposed to the wind and. It also affects the opponent's ear since the wind is always howling.
Combination: Sensory impairing techniques

Kikato Rinku wrote:B-rank does not equal Permanent Damage at all mate, not for the Tenketsu, please revise

Wind of Destruction: This jutsu does the exact same thing as the Hyuuga's Jyuuken techniques. Why create and spend ryo on a jutsu already made? Just seems like a waste to me. Plus Kikato already said that at B Rank, you cannot perform permanent damage to Tenketsu, that still hasn't been changed. Also, the cost needs bumped up to 40 chakra.

Stir: I would recommend removing the "0 visibility" part. At D Rank with only 100 speed, that's not enough to render sight useless. Also, D Ranks get 100-200 stat points. You have 250. Needs a 20 chakra cost.
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on Fri Oct 14, 2016 11:52 am
I devised a way to maintain the jutsu's effect, but without creating long-lasting effects. And the jutsu doesn't have the same effect as the jyuuken, although they both stop chakra flow, the jyuuken closes the tenketsus, preventing chakra flow, it can also be opened to resume chakra flow, but this jutsu cuts up the tenketsus, and the victim is unable to use chakra until the tenketsus have healed.
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on Sat Oct 22, 2016 7:29 pm
Hello
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on Sat Oct 22, 2016 8:14 pm
B-rank, 2 Threads Tops and thats me being Generous

Affects the ear how? details mate, the Devil is in the Details and I see None of either
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on Sun Oct 23, 2016 12:39 am
Done
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on Sun Oct 23, 2016 10:20 am
, they will die from the pang of pain inside of them and internal bleeding. <- Remove this bit please and it should be all good
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on Sun Oct 23, 2016 11:05 am
Was putting the fact that the jitsu causes internal injuries, so I removed that part and added something. I can remove it if you're not okay with it . .
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on Sun Oct 23, 2016 11:22 am
Not Per post, but im okay with Damaging the LF but not the extra bit of operating at 70% stuff
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on Sun Oct 23, 2016 4:46 pm
Is this OK?
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on Sun Oct 23, 2016 5:17 pm
Hisoka wrote:
Name: Wind of destruction
Rank: B
Cost: 30
Upkeep:
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Wind element
Range:
Speed: Depends on the speed of user(since this requires contact)
Power: 400
Handseals:
Description: A jutsu designed to be combined with the any gentle fist move using the wind affinity to cause internal damage with each hit, once the user has been struck, the wind chakra is released inside the individual which affects the chakra circulatory system and any organ around it, the wind release chakra is sent to violently cut the tenketsu and do extreme damage to the individual, causing severe pain and internal bleeding and the elimination of the opponent's use of chakra. Medical ninjutsu can be used to heal the damages done by this technique, if not treated before the tenketsus heal naturally, victims that move during this period are susceptible to a pang of pain which can be neglected and the internal bleeding becomes worse, for every 2 posts of movement, there Is a - 5decrease in life force, the pain and bleeding stops when the opponent stops moving.
The chakra circulatory system cannot be fixed unless the user meets a medic that has extensive knowledge of the chakra circulatory network and the parts where they have been cut and how to patch them up, else the opponent will be unable to utilise chakra.
The tenketsus will heal naturally after the victim has made 2 topics after the topic they were hit.
Combination: Gentle fist

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Name: Stir
Rank: D
Cost: 10
Upkeep: 5
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind element
Range: 100m
Speed: 100
Power: N/A
Handseals: Bird, Dragon
Description:. The user releases wind release chakra around a large area, the jutsu itself is not capable of damage, but the wind action kicks up dust and deflates it everywhere, creating a field that is composed of fast-moving dust which creates a smokescreen and murks sight although incapable of causing damage, the high-veloctity dust particles will get in one's eye(s) if exposed to the wind and. It also affects the opponent's ear since the wind carrying the dust particles whoosh around in motion. Being that the wind is generated from the user, the wind pushes the sand outwards, and thereby prevents the sand from getting into the user's eyes, however, without a dojutsu, their vision will also be murked just like their opponent's Another drawback of this technique is that if they get too close to the opponent, the wind generated from their body can be felt slightly by the opponent and the bombardment of sand particles(due to the increased pressure) is enough to alert the opponent of the user's presence if they can reason it out, of course the bombardment doesn't cause damage as stated above


Combination: Sensory impairing techniques
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