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on Mon Aug 01, 2016 5:34 pm
Clan jutsu:
Name: Obvious
Rank: D-S
Cost: Per rank
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu ect.
Element: Fire Release, Water Release ect.
Range: Expend Jutsu Stats. 1 stat = 1 meter. 2 stats = 1 meter radius.
Speed: Expend Jutsu Stats.
Power: Expend Jutsu Stats.
Handseals: Almost all techniques require handseals!
Description: Be descriptive, please.
Combination: What other techniques can it be combined with? Please be descriptive, could be used to earn rewards!


Name: Keraia Clan Secret Style: Explosion Release: Explosive Armor
Rank: D-S
Cost:
D-15
C-30
B- 45
A-60
S-75
Upkeep:
D-7- 2 posts
C-15 - 4 posts
B- 22 - 6 posts
A- 30- 8posts
S- 37- until deactivated
Type: Ninjutsu taijutsu
Element:Bakuton
Range: Contact
Explosion range:
D- up to 5 meters
C-up to 10 meters
B- up to 15 meters
A- up to 20 meters
S- up to 30 meters
Speed: user's speed
Power: (+300 Keraia clan)
D- 200
C- 300
B- 400
A- 500
S- 750
Handseals:
Description: The main fighting style taught to member's of the Keraia clan since they first start training in the academy. The user expel a shell of explosive unstable chakra around themselves which covers their entire body and gives them a dim white glow which moves around the body in frantic and random waves. While this technique is active anytime the user comes in contact with any other sort of object(s) an explosion will be detonated instantly upon contact with said object(s) and push it in the opposite direction (naturally this does not count for things such as the surfaces the user is walking on or their own ninja tools and equipment.) This can be used to strengthen the force of other taijutsu or hand to hand combat as well as disperse and blast back projectiles and techniques with less power than the power of this technique. This shroud also has another ability in that the explosive chakra will absorb and deflect any other explosions not made from the user's chakra, as long as the power of those explosions is less than or equal to the power of this technique.
Combination: Can be used to strengthen the striking power of other taijutsu


Name: Explosion Release: Exploding Palm
Rank: D
Cost: 22
Upkeep:
Type: ninjutsu, taijutsu
Element: Bakuton
Range: Contact, explosion range is 1 meter
Speed: user's speed
Power: 200 (+300 Keraia)
Handseals:
Description: The user creates a small explosion in their palm. If properly timed and angled, it can be used to redirect projectiles back at the user if the technique's power is greater than that of the projectile in question. Can also used this to cut through things with less durability than the power of this technique.
Combination:


Name:Explosion Release: Shrapnel Barrage
Rank: C
Cost: 37 (half for descendants of zongli)
Upkeep:
Type: Nin, buki
Element: Bakuton
Range: Size of object plus 15 meter explosive radius
Speed: speed of object thrown
Power: 250 (+300 Keraia or +400 for descendants of Zongli)
Handseals:
Description: The user infuses an object (can't be used on people), such as a shuriken with bakuton chakra. The user then has 3 posts to release the chakra stored in the item and detonate it before the Bakuton chakra will fizzle and dissolve. These items detonate upon being thrown and making contact with something else. Alternatively the user can detonate them at will by performing the seal of confrontation. The explosion from the bakuton chakra alone is capable of tremendous damage but the item will also be blown apart and be sent out as shrapnel, piercing everything within a 10 meter radius. The power of this shrapnel is equal to the sharpness of the item, or endurance of the item if sharpness is not available, plus the power of the explosion. This technique is free to those with the descendants of zongli bloodline who meet the requirements to learn it as they are able to naturally infuse and knead their chakra into material.
Combination: Weaponry techniques


Name: Explosion Release: Burst Step
Rank: B
Cost: 52
Upkeep: 18
Type: Ninjutsu, taijutsu
Element: Bakuton
Range: Self, explosion flares out 1 meter
Speed:
Power: 400 (+300 Keraia)
Handseals:
Description: The user expels bakuton chakra from their feet allowing them to move in one direction at intense speeds equal to the the power of this jutsu for a post. The user cannot activate other techniques while moving. Lasts one post. Alternatively the user can use this technique to blast themselves into the air ( max of 30 meters into the air) and keep themselves airborne by constantly letting off smaller explosions, allowing them to move through the air somewhat as long as they keep letting off explosions. This can only be maintained for 2 posts and they fly at a speed equal to their speed.
Combination: u


Name: Explosion Release: Blast Rifle
Rank: A
Cost: 52
Upkeep:
Type: ninjutsu
Element: Bakuton
Range: travels up to 30 meters
Speed: 450
Power: 50 (+300 Keraia)
Handseals: Finger gun, point and shoot
Description: A common technique used in assassinations and demolition jobs. The user release a  5 by 5 meter beam of bakuton chakra through their finger in one direction. This beam is invisible to the naked eye but can be sensed through sensory techniques or with chakra seeing doujutsu. The beam will travel in one direction and the user can choose to detonate it at whim. The beam has no physical form and will pass through most things but once the beam makes contact with something it will leave apart of the chakra behind around the object it made contact with (this does not work on people or summons.) Once the user chooses to detonate the technique all things covered in the chakra will detonate with a 20 meter explosion radius. The user has 2 posts to detonate before the chakra fizzles out. Upon becoming a master in ninjutsu the user can fire two of these beams at once for the cost of an additional 25 chakra.  
Combination:


Name: Explosion Release: Phantom Mine
Rank: A
Cost: 67
Upkeep: 37
Type: Ninjutsu fuinjutsu
Element:Bakuton
Range: contact with target
Speed: 400
Power: 100 (300 Keraia)
Handseals:
Description: Another well known technique of the Keraia. When making contact with anything the user can behind a small seal of bakuton chakra which is invisible to the naked eye. These seals will release the chakra when someone besides the user makes contact with them and cause massive explosions with a max radius of 30 meters. The user can have a max of 15 seals in place at a time and can detonate each one remotely by thought alone. The user has a max of 6 posts to detonate the seals before they detonate on their own.
Combination:


Name: Explosion Release: Landmine Fist
Rank: A
Cost: 67
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu, taijutsu
Element: Bakuton
Range: contact
Speed: User's speed
Power: 500 (300)
Handseals: contact
Description: After establishing direct contact with their opponent through a simple contact, such as a  punch or kick, the user utilities Explosion Release to subsequently generate an enormous explosion from the opponent's insides with a power equal to the user's strength plus the power of this technique. This explosion is powerful enough to completely obliterate an opponent far larger than the user and the explosion can reach a max range of 25 meters in every direction besides that of the user's. Due to the direction of the blast, the user minimizes any potential repercussions, such as being struck by resultant debris and even recoil appears to be completely negated.

The user is also able to use the technique on the ground to create a shock wave of upturned earth and debris to throw the enemy off balance with a radius of 30 meters. When used like this, the explosion is orange colored instead of red. This technique can also create a puff of smoke instead of an explosion which covers a 40 meter radius.
Combination:


Name: Keraia clan forbidden technique: Explosion Release: Chorus of 1000 Hungry Ghosts
Rank: S rank clan kinjutsu
Cost: 200
Upkeep: 75
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Bakuton
Range: Orbs can be manipulated in a 50 meter radius around the user
Speed: 600
Power: 500 (+400 Keraia clan Zongli descendants)
Handseals: Tiger-Snake- Seal of confrontation
Description: The ultimate technique of the Keraia clan created by Zongli himself and claimed to be unavoidable execution. This technique can only be performed by those who are direct descendants of Zongli. The user will open all of their additional mouths after performing the hand signs and small white orbs will began to spew out (max 25). These orbs have 29.5 circumference (about the size of a basketball)and glow white. The user can manipulate these orbs at will to have them grow (max is double their usual size) or shrink in size (max is down to a circumference of 2). These orbs cause no physical damage on their own and are completely made of unstable bakuton chakra. Bringing their unique talent of kneading and infusing chakra into physical material to its peak, the user will have these orbs make contact with other material around them, such as clothing, surroundings, or physical chakra constructs, and once doing so the orbs will be absorbed into the material. Once these orbs are absorbed into a material they will dissolve and spread their bakuton chakra into the object turning it into a bomb that the user can detonate at will. These bombs have the power of this jutsu and a explosive radius equal to the dimensions of the object being used plus an additional 25 meters. These orbs cannot be absorbed by humans or summons but can be absorbed by other organic and biological matter such as kaguya bones or mokuton. Since these orbs do not destroy or attempt to dissolve other jutsu and instead simple phase into objected, they can be absorbed by any item whose endurance is less than the power of this technique and the endurance of the target is treated as half of what it usually is. Does not work on non physical material such as futon or raiton, but will affect chakra based constructs such as barriers or clones. Once detonated the object turned into a bomb will be destroyed unless its endurance is higher than power of this technique. User and the objects and materiel on them are immune to this technique. Chakra absorbing humans of level 3 as well as S rank and above chakra absorption techniques can absorb the orbs before the have a chance to detonate. Any chakra absorption technique or human that is A ranking or level 2 will not able to absorb all of the chakra in time and will take damage equal to half the power of this technique. This technique is too fast for chakra absorbing humans and techniques of lower ranks/levels.
Combination: Must be Zongli's descendant to use this technique



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Ready for slaughter grading
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on Wed Aug 10, 2016 3:42 pm
Sorry, I am looking these over , I been trying to fine tooth each one before I make any sort of post so that you only have to edit once "If you follow what I suggjest for any changes" and so we can get these all approved as quickly as possible
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Please make sure all techniques are up to date via http://shinobifablesuntold.forumotion.com/t1120-elemental-property-advantages-system this system
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on Tue Aug 16, 2016 9:50 pm
Minerva Keraia wrote:
Clan jutsu:
Name: Obvious
Rank: D-S
Cost: Per rank
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu ect.
Element: Fire Release, Water Release ect.
Range: Expend Jutsu Stats. 1 stat = 1 meter. 2 stats = 1 meter radius.
Speed: Expend Jutsu Stats.
Power: Expend Jutsu Stats.
Handseals: Almost all techniques require handseals!
Description: Be descriptive, please.
Combination: What other techniques can it be combined with? Please be descriptive, could be used to earn rewards!


Name: Keraia Clan Secret Style: Explosion Release: Explosive Armor
Rank: D-S
Cost:
D-15
C-30
B- 45
A-60
S-75
Upkeep:
D-7- 2 posts
C-15 - 4 posts
B- 22 - 6 posts
A- 30- 8posts
S- 37- until deactivated
Type: Ninjutsu taijutsu
Element:Bakuton
Range: Contact
Explosion range:
D- up to 5 meters
C-up to 10 meters
B- up to 15 meters
A- up to 20 meters
S- up to 30 meters
Speed: user's speed
Power: (+300 Keraia clan)
D- 200
C- 300
B- 400
A- 500
S- 750
Handseals:
Description: The main fighting style taught to member's of the Keraia clan since they first start training in the academy. The user expel a shell of explosive unstable chakra around themselves which covers their entire body and gives them a dim white glow which moves around the body in frantic and random waves. While this technique is active anytime the user comes in contact with any other sort of object(s) an explosion will be detonated instantly upon contact with said object(s) and push it in the opposite direction (naturally this does not count for things such as the surfaces the user is walking on or their own ninja tools and equipment.) This can be used to strengthen the force of other taijutsu or hand to hand combat as well as disperse and blast back projectiles and techniques with less power than the power of this technique. This shroud also has another ability in that the explosive chakra will absorb and deflect any other explosions not made from the user's chakra, as long as the power of those explosions is less than or equal to the power of this technique. The shroud then adds the power and kinetic force of that explosion (half the power of the technique absorbed) to its own power for the remainder of the time it is active.
Combination: Can be used to strengthen the striking power of other taijutsu


1. Take out the kinetic stuff; you do not get that.
2. This is S rank Limited.
3. Does the power stat equal


Name: Explosion Release: Exploding Palm
Rank: D
Cost: 22
Upkeep:
Type: ninjutsu, taijutsu
Element: Bakuton
Range: Contact, explosion range is 1 meter
Speed: user's speed
Power: 200 (+300 Keraia)
Handseals:
Description: The user creates a small explosion in their palm. If properly timed and angled, it can be used to redirect projectiles back at the user if the technique's power is greater than that of the projectile in question. Can also used this to cut through things with less durability than the power of this technique plus the user's strength.
Combination:


1. This is A rank. You do not get to add strength.

Name:Explosion Release: Shrapnel Barrage
Rank: C
Cost: 37 (half for descendants of zongli)
Upkeep:
Type: Nin, buki
Element: Bakuton
Range: Size of object plus 15 meter explosive radius
Speed: speed of object thrown
Power: 250 (+300 Keraia or +400 for descendants of Zongli)
Handseals:
Description: The user infuses an object, such as a shuriken with bakuton chakra. The user then has 3 posts to release the chakra stored in the item and detonate it before the Bakuton chakra will fizzle and dissolve. These items detonate upon being thrown and making contact with something else. Alternatively the user can detonate them at will by performing the seal of confrontation. The explosion from the bakuton chakra alone is capable of tremendous damage but the item will also be blown apart and be sent out as shrapnel, piercing everything within a 10 meter radius. The power of this shrapnel is equal to the sharpness of the item, or endurance of the item if sharpness is not available, plus the power of the explosion. This technique is free to those with the descendants of zongli bloodline who meet the requirements to learn it as they are able to naturally infuse and knead their chakra into material.
Combination: Weaponry techniques


1. This is S rank.
2. You do not get this free. Everyone pays.
3. Idk why Descendants get half off.
4. Cannot be used on people.

Name: Explosion Release: Burst Step
Rank: B
Cost: 52
Upkeep: 18
Type: Ninjutsu, taijutsu
Element: Bakuton
Range: Self, explosion flares out 1 meter
Speed:
Power: 400 (+300 Keraia)
Handseals:
Description: The user expels bakuton chakra from their feet allowing them to move in one direction at intense speeds equal to their speed plus the power of this jutsu for a post. The user cannot activate other techniques while moving. Lasts one post. Alternatively the user can use this technique to blast themselves into the air ( max of 30 meters into the air) and keep themselves airborne by constantly letting off smaller explosions, allowing them to move through the air somewhat as long as they keep letting off explosions. This can only be maintained for 3 posts and they fly at a speed equal to the power of this jutsu.
Combination: u


1. You do not constantly fly.
2. You move at the speed of the jutsu, not your speed and jutsu speed combined.
3. You can kepe up the airborn with bursts/explosions by paying chakra cost. But you can only maintain for two turns and you move at your speed ONLY.


Name: Explosion Release: Blast Rifle
Rank: A
Cost: 52
Upkeep:
Type: ninjutsu
Element: Bakuton
Range: travels up to 30 meters
Speed: 450
Power: 50 (+300 Keraia)
Handseals: Finger gun, point and shoot
Description: A common technique used in assassinations and demolition jobs. The user release a  5 by 5 meter beam of bakuton chakra through their finger in one direction. This beam is invisible to the naked eye but can be sensed through sensory techniques or with chakra seeing doujutsu. The beam will travel in one direction and the user can choose to detonate it at whim. The beam has no physical form and will pass through most things but once the beam makes contact with something it will leave apart of the chakra behind around the object it made contact with (this does not work on people or summons.) Once the user chooses to detonate the technique all things covered in the chakra will detonate with a 20 meter explosion radius. The user has 2 posts to detonate before the chakra fizzles out. Upon becoming a master in ninjutsu the user can fire two of these beams at once for the cost of an additional 25 chakra.  
Combination:


1. This is S rank and Limited.
2. Good tech.


Name: Explosion Release: Phantom Mine
Rank: A
Cost: 67
Upkeep: 37
Type: Ninjutsu fuinjutsu
Element:Bakuton
Range: contact with target
Speed: 400
Power: 100 (300 Keraia)
Handseals:
Description: Another well known technique of the Keraia. When making contact with anything the user can behind a small seal of bakuton chakra which is invisible to the naked eye. These seals will release the chakra when someone besides the user makes contact with them and cause massive explosions with a max radius of 30 meters. The user can have a max of 15 seals in place at a time and can detonate each one remotely by thought alone. The user has a max of 6 posts to detonate the seals before they detonate on their own.
Combination:


1. This is S rank and limited.

Name: Explosion Release: Landmine Fist
Rank: A
Cost: 67
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu, taijutsu
Element: Bakuton
Range: contact
Speed: User's speed
Power: 500 (300)
Handseals: contact
Description: After establishing direct contact with their opponent through a simple contact, such as a  punch or kick, the user utilities Explosion Release to subsequently generate an enormous explosion from the opponent's insides with a power equal to the user's strength plus the power of this technique. This explosion is powerful enough to completely obliterate an opponent far larger than the user and the explosion can reach a max range of 25 meters in every direction besides that of the user's. Due to the direction of the blast, the user minimizes any potential repercussions, such as being struck by resultant debris and even recoil appears to be completely negated.

The user is also able to use the technique on the ground to create a shock wave of upturned earth and debris to throw the enemy off balance with a radius of 30 meters. When used like this, the explosion is orange colored instead of red. This technique can also create a puff of smoke instead of an explosion which covers a 40 meter radius.
Combination:


1. Take out the puff of smoke.
2. You do not completely negate all possible recoil.
3. This is S rank Limited with chakra cost of about 125.


Name: Keraia clan forbidden technique: Explosion Release: Chorus of 1000 Hungry Ghosts
Rank: S rank clan kinjutsu
Cost: 150
Upkeep: 75
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Bakuton
Range: Orbs can be manipulated in a 50 meter radius around the user
Speed: 600
Power: 500 (+400 Keraia clan Zongli descendants)
Handseals: Tiger-Snake- Seal of confrontation
Description: The ultimate technique of the Keraia clan created by Zongli himself and claimed to be unavoidable execution. This technique can only be performed by those who are direct descendants of Zongli. The user will open all of their additional mouths after performing the hand signs and small white orbs will began to spew out (max 25). These orbs have 29.5 circumference (about the size of a basketball)and glow white. The user can manipulate these orbs at will to have them grow (max is double their usual size) or shrink in size (max is down to a circumference of 2). These orbs cause no physical damage on their own and are completely made of unstable bakuton chakra. Bringing their unique talent of kneading and infusing chakra into physical material to its peak, the user will have these orbs make contact with other material around them, such as clothing, surroundings, or physical chakra constructs, and once doing so the orbs will be absorbed into the material. Once these orbs are absorbed into a material they will dissolve and spread their bakuton chakra into the object turning it into a bomb that the user can detonate at will. These bombs have the power of this jutsu and a explosive radius equal to the dimensions of the object being used plus an additional 25 meters. These orbs cannot be absorbed by humans or summons but can be absorbed by other organic and biological matter such as kaguya bones or mokuton. Since these orbs do not destroy or attempt to dissolve other jutsu, they will be absorbed by any object with endurance that is less than or equal to half the power of this technique. Does not work on non physical material such as futon or raiton, but will affect chakra based constructs such as barriers or clones. Once detonated the object turned into a bomb will be destroyed unless its endurance is higher than power of this technique. User and the objects and materiel on them are immune to this technique.
Combination: Must be Zongli's descendant to use this technique


1. The cost needs to be 200.
2. They can only be absorbed by things with endurance equal to or less than half the power of this tech correct?
3. These orbs are subject to being absorbed by chakra absorption people etc.
4. They cannot be blown up until they are absorbed correct?



Love the creativity.

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on Wed Aug 17, 2016 10:05 am
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1. Take out the kinetic stuff; you do not get that.
2. This is S rank Limited.
3. Does the power stat equal


1.Took out kinetic stuff
2. Could I please get a reason why.This is really supposed to be open to everyone as it's just a basic chakra shroud which offers no state boosts and there base powers do not exceed their rank limits.
3. I'm not sure what you mean in the third thing.


1. This is A rank. You do not get to add strength.

1. I'm sensing a theme here. This is cannon technique that makes a tiny explosion from the palm to deflect things, it is by no means A ranking and I'm not sure the reasoning behind it as it, again does not break the base power limits for its ranking. Took out the add of strength.


1. This is S rank.
2. You do not get this free. Everyone pays.
3. Idk why Descendants get half off.
4. Cannot be used on people.


1. If you are going to make all these A and S ranking no one in the clan who isn't S rank will be able to afford most of these which is silly really. Again I'll ask why.
2. The reason I said it ws free was because descdants already do this naturally as the technique is basically just chakra infusion bakuton style. Descendants already can naturally infuse their chakra into things for no cost.
3. Same reasoning as 2.
4. Added that in.


1. You do not constantly fly.
2. You move at the speed of the jutsu, not your speed and jutsu speed combined.
3. You can kepe up the airborn with bursts/explosions by paying chakra cost. But you can only maintain for two turns and you move at your speed ONLY.

1. Okay
2. Done
3.Okay

1. This is S rank and Limited.
2. Good tech.


1. I'm okay with making it S rank (with an S rank increase to its offensive potential of course), but not sure why limited as there are far more destructive limited that exist in the world and it also doesn't step outside the power limits of its ranking. I'm not really sure why you want to make all of these techniques basically accessible to anyone who isn't S ranking as other people are supposed to be joining the clan as well and I see no reason for these high rankings for most of these techniques.

2. Thank you I appreciate it.

1. This is S rank and limited.

1. Again, not understanding why. This basically a Keraia style explosive seal, which normally is A ranking. Especially not seeing why on earth it would be limited.


1. Take out the puff of smoke.
2. You do not completely negate all possible recoil.
3. This is S rank Limited with chakra cost of about 125.


1. Why it is a cannon fact of the technique?
2. Again another cannon fact of the technique.
3. Why would this be limited, this is like poster taijutsu for the clan. It's a simple use of bakuton so it also would not take that degree of chakra. This is the 4th time you wanted me to make a simple technique limited, there's no way anyone is going to be able to learn more than one of these techniques like that, and only if they are very high ranking. There's no reason for especially this one to be as it's like one of the most basic techniques of the clan.



1. The cost needs to be 200.
2. They can only be absorbed by things with endurance equal to or less than half the power of this tech correct?
3. These orbs are subject to being absorbed by chakra absorption people etc.
4. They cannot be blown up until they are absorbed correct?


1. That's fine.
2. No they can be absorbed by anything whose endurance is less the power of this technique, but the target's endurance is treated as half of what is usually is since it's not attempting to destroy or attack the target. Sorry for the confusion, I have I re-worded it.
3. Added that in at the end.
4. Nope they need to be absorbed to detonate.


Love the creativity.

Thanks again.

Please refrain from posting more than five jutsu at once in the future, and keep all your jutsu on one page.

Sorry I'll do that in the future. And were they not all on one page?
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on Wed Aug 17, 2016 9:32 pm
1. Dear I think you are confused about what the word "Limited" means. Limited simply means that the chakra cost of the technique does not come with the normal discount, and that it costs 7k ryo to purchase. It is still open to anyone to getting.

My question on the power stat is - If it is the S rank version, are you meaning that S rank gets 750 + 300 from Keraia clan?


2. It can be made C rank if you take out strength.



3. It can be C rank. You must still pay something for this technique.



4. "1. I'm okay with making it S rank (with an S rank increase to its offensive potential of course), but not sure why limited as there are far more destructive limited that exist in the world and it also doesn't step outside the power limits of its ranking. I'm not really sure why you want to make all of these techniques basically accessible to anyone who isn't S ranking as other people are supposed to be joining the clan as well and I see no reason for these high rankings for most of these techniques.
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Techniques are not ranked purely based on stat power. Which is something it is clear you are not clear about. Also, Limiteds, as I said earlier, do not make it so that no one can get them. It just means they cost more ryo and chakra.
This technique moves at 450 speed, invisible to the naked eye, everything it touches it fuses with bakuton chakra and the user can detonate said objects at 350 power. Minvera - that is S rank at minimum. Also, can you hit people with this?
Is there a limit to the amount of objects the beam can infuse? I need there to be a specified limit if there is one.

Needless to say, this is obviously limited as it is right now.


5. Phantom Mine - Keep it as A rank, that is fine.


6. Landmine Fist - If you are wanting to add your strength and the power of the blast, this is no less than S rank. If you are only having the blast of the technique and it is based on contact, you may keep it at A rank.


7. " Since these orbs do not destroy or attempt to dissolve other jutsu and instead simple phase into objected, they can be absorbed by any item whose endurance is less than the power of this technique and the endurance of the target is treated as half of what it usually is."

^Denied. Remove that entirely. The orbs can be absorbed by things by objects. If you want to be absorbed by a chakra construct, than that construct's endurance should be taken into account. Entering clones and barriers needs to have clarified limitations. Meaning, what exactly must something do to avoid these orbs being able to be absorbed into them.
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