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on Mon Jul 11, 2016 12:31 am
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[font=Georgia][b]Name[/b]: Obvious
[b]Rank:[/b] D-S
[b]Cost:[/b] Per rank
[b]Upkeep:[/b]
[b]Type[/b]: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu ect.
[b]Element[/b]: Fire Release, Water Release ect.
[b]Range[/b]: Expend Jutsu Stats. 1 stat = 1 meter. 2 stats = 1 meter radius.
[b]Speed[/b]: Expend Jutsu Stats.
[b]Power[/b]: Expend Jutsu Stats.
[b]Handseals[/b]: Almost all techniques require handseals!
[b]Description[/b]: Be descriptive, please.
[b]Combination:[/b] What other techniques can it be combined with? Please be descriptive, could be used to earn rewards![/font]

Name: Shōhi Shimasu no Yari [Lit: Consuming Pike]
Rank: B-Ranked
Cost: 40
Upkeep:N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range 3m(10ft)
Speed: N/A
Power: 300
Handseals: Snake
Description: Once the snake seal is formed, one hand will extend forward. This hand will wield the pike soon to be create. Chakra will began flowing down to the hand, releasing from the fingertips and palm. The air around the hand will mix with the user's chakra, spawning a frozen pike.  This pike can extend to a maximum of 3m in length. The pike is merely an extension of ones hand, ultimately making the technique a "close combat maneuver. Upon contact with any substance that has some moisture, the pike will began to freeze the victim from inside out. This process is a slow consumption, similar to watching a snake feast upon large prey. This consumption process requires 3 posts to finalize. One can stop the consumption rate in several ways: Immediate removal of affected area; Ijutsu of equivalent strength to heal affected area; Flowing chakra to affected area with equal or greater power for 3 turns; An Adept Medic can expend 15 Chakra for 3 turns completely halting the process.
Combination: Direct contact with any liquid, will result in it being instantly frozen. [1 post]


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on Mon Jul 11, 2016 8:55 am
Muroku Washiba wrote:
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[font=Georgia][b]Name[/b]: Obvious
    [b]Rank:[/b] D-S
    [b]Cost:[/b] Per rank
    [b]Upkeep:[/b]
    [b]Type[/b]: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu ect.
    [b]Element[/b]: Fire Release, Water Release ect.
    [b]Range[/b]: Expend Jutsu Stats. 1 stat = 1 meter. 2 stats = 1 meter radius.
    [b]Speed[/b]: Expend Jutsu Stats.
    [b]Power[/b]: Expend Jutsu Stats.
    [b]Handseals[/b]: Almost all techniques require handseals!
    [b]Description[/b]: Be descriptive, please.
    [b]Combination:[/b] What other techniques can it be combined with? Please be descriptive, could be used to earn rewards![/font]

   Name: Shōhi Shimasu no Yari [Lit: Consuming Pike]
   Rank: B-Ranked
   Cost: 40
   Upkeep:N/A
   Type: Ninjutsu
   Element: Ice Release
   Range 3m(10ft)
   Speed: N/A
   Power: 300
   Handseals: Snake
   Description: Once the snake seal is formed, one hand will extend forward. This hand will wield the pike soon to be create. Chakra will began flowing down to the hand, releasing from the fingertips and palm. The air around the hand will mix with the user's chakra, spawning a frozen pike.  This pike can extend to a maximum of 3m in length. The pike is merely an extension of ones hand, ultimately making the technique a "close combat maneuver. Upon contact with any substance that has some moisture, the pike will began to freeze the victim from inside out. This process is a slow consumption, similar to watching a snake feast upon large prey. This consumption process requires 3 posts to finalize. The pike consumption can be stopped by applying equivalent heat strength to affected area for 2 posts or removal of affected area before spreading throughout the body.
   Combination: Direct contact with any water, will result in it being instantly frozen. [1 post]

The pike touches you and in three turns the area or the body is frozen?

Pike consumption can freeze a human body correct? If you are touched it spreads to the entire body or no?

Medical jutsu can heal this "frostbite"; if the Ijutsu is of equal rank or more. "Heat" being applied is too vague so just take that out; that will let people easily get out of this tech by blowing hot breath on their arm. The consumption can be stopped by chakra flow to the area as well; as long as the chakra flow tech is of equal or more power.

Lastly, it can be stopped by expending 15 chakra per post that the area has been frozen if you are a Medic Adept or higher. - sound good?
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on Mon Jul 11, 2016 9:56 am
1. Yes, if left untreated, it will consume the entire body. 1st turn is the initial area struck, frozen. 2nd turn, should spread to center of body. 3rd turn should reach opposite side of body.

2. Added Ijutsu Healing technique equivalency or stronger.

3. Removed heat concept.

4. Added chakra flow counter. Forgot about that.

5. Added chakra expenditure.
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on Mon Jul 11, 2016 11:21 am
Muroku Washiba wrote:
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[font=Georgia][b]Name[/b]: Obvious
    [b]Rank:[/b] D-S
    [b]Cost:[/b] Per rank
    [b]Upkeep:[/b]
    [b]Type[/b]: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu ect.
    [b]Element[/b]: Fire Release, Water Release ect.
    [b]Range[/b]: Expend Jutsu Stats. 1 stat = 1 meter. 2 stats = 1 meter radius.
    [b]Speed[/b]: Expend Jutsu Stats.
    [b]Power[/b]: Expend Jutsu Stats.
    [b]Handseals[/b]: Almost all techniques require handseals!
    [b]Description[/b]: Be descriptive, please.
    [b]Combination:[/b] What other techniques can it be combined with? Please be descriptive, could be used to earn rewards![/font]

Name: Shōhi Shimasu no Yari [Lit: Consuming Pike]
Rank: B-Ranked
Cost: 40
Upkeep:N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range 3m(10ft)
Speed: N/A
Power: 300
Handseals: Snake
Description: Once the snake seal is formed, one hand will extend forward. This hand will wield the pike soon to be create. Chakra will began flowing down to the hand, releasing from the fingertips and palm. The air around the hand will mix with the user's chakra, spawning a frozen pike.  This pike can extend to a maximum of 3m in length. The pike is merely an extension of ones hand, ultimately making the technique a "close combat maneuver. Upon contact with any substance that has some moisture, the pike will began to freeze the victim from inside out. This process is a slow consumption, similar to watching a snake feast upon large prey. This consumption process requires 3 posts to finalize. One can stop the consumption rate in several ways: Immediate removal of affected area; Ijutsu of equivalent strength to heal affected area; Flowing chakra to affected area with equal or greater power for 3 turns; An Adept Medic can expend 15 Chakra for 3 turns completely halting the process.
Combination: Direct contact with any liquid, will result in it being instantly frozen. [1 post]


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Let me just clarify these few things:

1.Flowing chakra to an area can stop the jutsu if the power is of equal or greater, instantly.
2. Healing of equal or greater instantly can stop if the tech is strong enough and if the person is adept or higher in medical.
3. Medics who pay chakra to negate the jutsu only have to pay 15 chakra per turn they have been infected to nullify it. So if I've been infected for two turns, I can pay thirty chakra to dispel it.
4. If a person becomes frozen - I presume they are dead.
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on Mon Jul 11, 2016 3:53 pm
Name: Ryūsenka Fūin [lit. Dragon Hail Flower Seal]
Rank: C-Ranked
Cost: 30
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Fūinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Hand (Short Range)
Speed: 300
Power: (Disrupted by any stronger unsealing technique)
Handseals: Touch Seal
Description: This seal was specifically created by Muroku to aid him in close combat. After discovering the need to have a much faster summoning process for his pike, he grew tired of the need to create hand seals every time he wanted to summon it. As a result, he created the Dragon Hail Flower Seal, to store his pike. This seal would ultimately allow him to summon the pike at a moments notice, without revealing his intentions. The seal would resemble a spearhead, while the name would personify a flower blossoming (summoning process). Upon activation, the seal will glow bright red and release any given number of pikes stored within the seal. Maximum of 2.
Combination: Shōhi Shimasu no Yari [Sealed Technique]


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on Mon Jul 11, 2016 7:12 pm
Muroku Washiba wrote:Name: Ryūsenka Fūin [lit. Dragon Hail Flower Seal]
Rank: C-Ranked
Cost: 30
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Fūinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Hand (Short Range)
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: Touch Seal
Description: This seal was specifically created by Muroku to aid him in close combat. After discovering the need to have a much faster summoning process for his pike, he grew tired of the need to create hand seals every time he wanted to summon it. As a result, he created the Dragon Hail Flower Seal, to store his pike. This seal would ultimately allow him to summon the pike at a moments notice, without revealing his intentions. The seal would resemble a spearhead, while the name would personify a flower blossoming (summoning process). Upon activation, the seal will glow bright red and release any given number of pikes stored within the seal. Maximum of 2.
Combination: Shōhi Shimasu no Yari [Sealed Technique]


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1. Include the power of this seal as every seal has a power since it can technically be broken or cancelled.

2. There needs to be an upkeep cost, and I need to know how fast you can summon the technique.

3. Also, are you sealing it within the seal before the topic you use it or after? To seal it, you will have to activate the chakra cost for the crystal tech and the fuuinjutsu thing. So basically the benefit is that you do not have to use hand seals - but you still have to pay for it if that makes sense.
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on Tue Jul 12, 2016 6:44 am
Added, more.

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on Tue Jul 12, 2016 7:49 am
Name: Hyō Kawarimi [lit. Ice Replacement]
Rank: A-Ranked
Cost: 30
Upkeep: 20 PP [When prepared as Armor]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: Self
Speed: 300
Power: 200
Handseals: Rat
Parent Technique: Water Replacement
Description: Another technique created by Muroku, seeing where it can be advanced. Not satisfied with being left in a vulnerable liquid state, Muroku spotted when his KKG could fill in the gaps. Once struck, Muroku's body would instantly crystallize into ice trapping the victim. The next part depends on the strength of the victim. If the initial attack is stronger, Muroku's ice body will shatter in pieces, evading damage. If weaker, the victim with be stuck within the human fly trap. Once trapped, the ice will began to consume the victim, completely within 3 posts. Escape after being caught can be chosen as such: Immediate removal of affected area; Ijutsu of equivalent strength or greater to heal affected area; An Adept Medic can expend 15 Chakra (PP) within 3 turns completely halting the process.
Combination: N/A
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on Tue Jul 12, 2016 11:04 am
Muroku Washiba wrote:Name: Ryūsenka Fūin [lit. Dragon Hail Flower Seal]
Rank: C-Ranked
Cost: 30
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Fūinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Hand (Short Range)
Speed: 300
Power: (Disrupted by any stronger unsealing technique)
Handseals: Touch Seal
Description: This seal was specifically created by Muroku to aid him in close combat. After discovering the need to have a much faster summoning process for his pike, he grew tired of the need to create hand seals every time he wanted to summon it. As a result, he created the Dragon Hail Flower Seal, to store his pike. This seal would ultimately allow him to summon the pike at a moments notice, without revealing his intentions. The seal would resemble a spearhead, while the name would personify a flower blossoming (summoning process). Upon activation, the seal will glow bright red and release any given number of pikes stored within the seal. Maximum of 2.
Combination: Shōhi Shimasu no Yari [Sealed Technique]


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on Thu Jul 14, 2016 9:16 am
Name: Makyō Hyōshō: Chikyū Amekagami [Lit. Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals: Earth Reflecting Heaven]
Rank: A-Rank
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 25
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: 50m
Speed: +300
Power: N/A
Handseals: Snake
Description: Upon seeing the effectiveness of the original technique, Muroku saw how to take such a technique to the next level. If one could make the earth one huge mirror, he could seamlessly phase in and out of existence. This idea would further Muroku's quest for becoming the God he sees himself as. Instead of creating vertical mirrors, reflecting his own image(his power), Muroku would create a single mirror, reflecting the image of a higher being(God's power). This mirror would be created beneath his feet, stretching 50m in length and 25m in width. To the ignorant, the mirror would merely look like a huge ice sheet laying upon the ground. Anyone but Muroku upon the mirror will take a -50 Speed deduction. While upon the mirror, Muroku gains +300 speed, in addition to the original abilities of Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals [Sink in and Out of Mirror].
Combination:Shiro Hyōga Yama



Name: Shiro Hyōga Yama [Lit. White Glacier Mountain]
Rank: B-Rank
Cost: 40
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: 15m
Speed: 100
Power: 285
Handseals: Dragon → Touch Ground
Description: This technique was created, to give Muroku the ability to create as any God would be able to. After touching the ground, chakra would flow into the ground below. This chakra would erect a glacier from the ground. This glacier, tipped with sharp edges, would race forward toward the intended target. If the glacier is overpowered, the glacier will turn into deadly shrapnel.  Like most Ice Release, techniques, Muroku can phase into the Ice. The glacier spans about 10m wide an
Combination: What other techniques can it be combined with? Please be descriptive, could be used to earn rewards!
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on Thu Jul 14, 2016 10:46 am
Muroku Washiba wrote:Name: Hyō Kawarimi [lit. Ice Replacement]
Rank: A-Ranked
Cost: 30
Upkeep: 20 PP [When prepared as Armor]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: Self
Speed: 300
Power: 200
Handseals: Rat
Parent Technique: Water Replacement
Description: Another technique created by Muroku, seeing where it can be advanced. Not satisfied with being left in a vulnerable liquid state, Muroku spotted when his KKG could fill in the gaps. Once struck, Muroku's body would instantly crystallize into ice trapping the victim. The next part depends on the strength of the victim. If the initial attack is stronger, Muroku's ice body will shatter in pieces, evading damage. If weaker, the victim with be stuck within the human fly trap. Once trapped, the ice will began to consume the victim, completely within 3 posts. Escape after being caught can be chosen as such: Immediate removal of affected area; Ijutsu of equivalent strength or greater to heal affected area; An Adept Medic can expend 15 Chakra (PP) within 3 turns completely halting the process.
Combination: N/A
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on Thu Jul 14, 2016 11:27 pm
Muroku Washiba wrote:Name: Hyō Kawarimi [lit. Ice Replacement]
Rank: A-Ranked
Cost: 30
Upkeep: 20 PP [When prepared as Armor]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: Self
Speed: 300
Power: 200
Handseals: Rat
Parent Technique: Water Replacement
Description: Another technique created by Muroku, seeing where it can be advanced. Not satisfied with being left in a vulnerable liquid state, Muroku spotted when his KKG could fill in the gaps. Once struck, Muroku's body would instantly crystallize into ice trapping the victim. The next part depends on the strength of the victim. If the initial attack is stronger, Muroku's ice body will shatter in pieces, evading damage. If weaker, the victim with be stuck within the human fly trap. Once trapped, the ice will began to consume the victim, completely within 3 posts. Escape after being caught can be chosen as such: Immediate removal of affected area; Ijutsu of equivalent strength or greater to heal affected area; An Adept Medic can expend 15 Chakra (PP) within 3 turns completely halting the process.
Combination: N/A


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Name: Makyō Hyōshō: Chikyū Amekagami [Lit. Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals: Earth Reflecting Heaven]
Rank: A-Rank
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 25
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: 50m
Speed: +300
Power: N/A
Handseals: Snake
Description: Upon seeing the effectiveness of the original technique, Muroku saw how to take such a technique to the next level. If one could make the earth one huge mirror, he could seamlessly phase in and out of existence. This idea would further Muroku's quest for becoming the God he sees himself as. Instead of creating vertical mirrors, reflecting his own image(his power), Muroku would create a single mirror, reflecting the image of a higher being(God's power). This mirror would be created beneath his feet, stretching 50m in length and 25m in width. To the ignorant, the mirror would merely look like a huge ice sheet laying upon the ground. Anyone but Muroku upon the mirror will take a -50 Speed deduction. While upon the mirror, Muroku gains +300 speed, in addition to the original abilities of Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals [Sink in and Out of Mirror].
Combination:Shiro Hyōga Yama


I think the anyone but Muroku should be taken out personally, but lets say, for a single post or something, and that Yuki themselves are not effected by it

Name: Shiro Hyōga Yama [Lit. White Glacier Mountain]
Rank: B-Rank
Cost: 40
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: 15m
Speed: 100
Power: 285
Handseals: Dragon → Touch Ground
Description: This technique was created, to give Muroku the ability to create as any God would be able to. After touching the ground, chakra would flow into the ground below. This chakra would erect a glacier from the ground. This glacier, tipped with sharp edges, would race forward toward the intended target. If the glacier is overpowered, the glacier will turn into deadly shrapnel.  Like most Ice Release, techniques, Muroku can phase into the Ice. The glacier spans about 10m wide an
Combination: What other techniques can it be combined with? Please be descriptive, could be used to earn rewards!


Please Expound upon what style of destruction is needed to turn this tech into deadly shrapnel and give the Shrapnel stats please, Size ect, this whole tech could use a lot more added into it from my personal opinion
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on Fri Jul 15, 2016 3:10 pm
Name: Makyō Hyōshō: Chikyū Amekagami [Lit. Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals: Earth Reflecting Heaven]
Rank: A-Rank
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 25
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: 50m
Speed: +300
Power: N/A
Handseals: Snake
Description: Upon seeing the effectiveness of the original technique, Muroku saw how to take such a technique to the next level. If one could make the earth one huge mirror, he could seamlessly phase in and out of existence. This idea would further Muroku's quest for becoming the God he sees himself as. Instead of creating vertical mirrors, reflecting his own image(his power), Muroku would create a single mirror, reflecting the image of a higher being(God's power). This mirror would be created beneath his feet, stretching 50m in length and 25m in width. To the ignorant, the mirror would merely look like a huge ice sheet laying upon the ground. People with the Yuki KKG, upon the mirror will take a -50 Speed reduction for one turn. While upon the mirror, Muroku gains +300 speed, in addition to the original abilities of Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals [Sink in and Out of Mirror].
Combination:Shiro Hyōga Yama


Changed to one turn. Yuki KKG Immunity

Name: Shiro Hyōga Yama [Lit. White Glacier Mountain]
Rank: B-Rank
Cost: 40
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: 15m
Speed: 100
Power: 285
Handseals: Dragon → Touch Ground
Description: This technique was created, to give Muroku the ability to create as any God would be able to. After touching the ground, chakra would flow into the ground below. This chakra would erect a glacier from the ground. This glacier, tipped with sharp edges, would race forward toward the intended target. Like most Ice Release, techniques, Muroku can phase into the Ice. The glacier spans about 10m wide an
Combination: What other techniques can it be combined with? Please be descriptive, could be used to earn rewards!


Removed Shrapnel, Ill make that a technique for all Ice Techniques.
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on Sat Jul 16, 2016 2:23 pm
Name: Shinka Saisei Fuin: [Lit. Evolutionary Rebirth Seal]
Rank: S-Ranked
Cost: 60
Upkeep:
Type: Fuinjutsu; Ijutsu
Element: Ice Release; Water Release
Range: Self
Speed: +150
Power: +450
Handseals: Phoenix Seal  [Custom Hand Seal]
Description: This seals allows Muroku to rebirth himself, stronger and faster in a fragment of the time. At the cost of 20% of his life, Muroku has created a seal to place him within a ice crystal for 3 days. Within this crystal, Muroku's cells would undergo evolutionary metamorphosis. This metamorphosis would enhance cellular growth within his body, making him stronger, but also enhancing him aging process, ironically. The seal would go about this process, making his cell endure a Hypotonic transformation. Cells growth would be accelerated by pulling in more water and nutrients into the cells. Ultimately this would make the user live 3 decades within 3 days. This process repeats and balances itself by the 3rd day. On the 3rd day, the ice crystal will shatter, revealing the evolved specimen. This evolved form would be bulkier in muscle, and longer hair, potentially grey by now. All evolved creatures has the insignia [+] in the middle of their forehand, between the eyebrows.
Combination: N/A


Name: Tensō Aka no Kōtei Fuin [Lit. Subjugation of the Crimson Emperor Seal]
Rank: S-Rank
Cost: 50
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Fuinjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Power: 300
Handseals: Phoenix Seal [Custom Hand Seal]
Description: This seal was created in preparation for meeting others with the Yuki KKG. Being the God-King himself, Muroku created a way to create separation between his abilities and that of others. Unable to truly express his power/anger through the natural blue tint of ice, Muroku's emotions would lead to the creation of a Hierarchy when using his KKG, ultimately creating ice with a red hue. This ice would be much colder in temperature and could consume other form ice adding to his own control. Once the seal is placed upon the wielder, he/she now has sovereign against other ice techniques. All techniques used under the influence of the seal, gains a rank in power against other ice techniques and water techniques.
Combination: All Ice Techniques
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on Sat Jul 16, 2016 2:44 pm
Name: Hyō Hoeru Kai[Lit. Ice Howling Release
Rank: C-Rank
Cost: 25
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: 10m
Speed: 200
Power: 100
Handseals: Wolf [Custom Hand Seal]
Description: This technique is a staple among those with Yuki KKG. By manipulating already formed ice, the user can shatter the ice, creating sharp shrapnel. This shrapnel would create a second wave of attack flying toward the target.
Combination: Any Ice technique can be used as source for technique
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on Sun Jul 17, 2016 1:12 am
Muroku Washiba wrote:Name: Makyō Hyōshō: Chikyū Amekagami [Lit. Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals: Earth Reflecting Heaven]
Rank: A-Rank
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 25
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: 50m
Speed: +300
Power: N/A
Handseals: Snake
Description: Upon seeing the effectiveness of the original technique, Muroku saw how to take such a technique to the next level. If one could make the earth one huge mirror, he could seamlessly phase in and out of existence. This idea would further Muroku's quest for becoming the God he sees himself as. Instead of creating vertical mirrors, reflecting his own image(his power), Muroku would create a single mirror, reflecting the image of a higher being(God's power). This mirror would be created beneath his feet, stretching 50m in length and 25m in width. To the ignorant, the mirror would merely look like a huge ice sheet laying upon the ground. People with the Yuki KKG, upon the mirror will take a -50 Speed reduction for one turn. While upon the mirror, Muroku gains +300 speed, in addition to the original abilities of Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals [Sink in and Out of Mirror].
Combination:Shiro Hyōga Yama


According to how this reads, the Yuki are taking the debuff, You might wish to adjust this

Name: Shiro Hyōga Yama [Lit. White Glacier Mountain]
Rank: B-Rank
Cost: 40
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: 15m
Speed: 100
Power: 285
Handseals: Dragon → Touch Ground
Description: This technique was created, to give Muroku the ability to create as any God would be able to. After touching the ground, chakra would flow into the ground below. This chakra would erect a glacier from the ground. This glacier, tipped with sharp edges, would race forward toward the intended target. Like most Ice Release, techniques, Muroku can phase into the Ice. The glacier spans about 10m wide an
Combination: What other techniques can it be combined with? Please be descriptive, could be used to earn rewards!


10 meters wide an? what it stops there

Name: Shinka Saisei Fuin: [Lit. Evolutionary Rebirth Seal]
Rank: S-Ranked
Cost: 60
Upkeep:
Type: Fuinjutsu; Ijutsu
Element: Ice Release; Water Release
Range: Self
Speed: +150
Power: +450
Handseals: Phoenix Seal  [Custom Hand Seal]
Description: This seals allows Muroku to rebirth himself, stronger and faster in a fragment of the time. At the cost of 20% of his life, Muroku has created a seal to place him within a ice crystal for 3 days. Within this crystal, Muroku's cells would undergo evolutionary metamorphosis. This metamorphosis would enhance cellular growth within his body, making him stronger, but also enhancing him aging process, ironically. The seal would go about this process, making his cell endure a Hypotonic transformation. Cells growth would be accelerated by pulling in more water and nutrients into the cells. Ultimately this would make the user live 3 decades within 3 days. This process repeats and balances itself by the 3rd day. On the 3rd day, the ice crystal will shatter, revealing the evolved specimen. This evolved form would be bulkier in muscle, and longer hair, potentially grey by now. All evolved creatures has the insignia [+] in the middle of their forehand, between the eyebrows.
Combination: N/A


okay other then effectivly making you older, I have no idea what this is purposed for, and your sacrificing life fore to use it, you might wanna rethink this technique or give it more meaning and more worth the 20% sacrifice

Name: Tensō Aka no Kōtei Fuin [Lit. Subjugation of the Crimson Emperor Seal]
Rank: S-Rank
Cost: 50
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Fuinjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Power: 300
Handseals: Phoenix Seal [Custom Hand Seal]
Description: This seal was created in preparation for meeting others with the Yuki KKG. Being the God-King himself, Muroku created a way to create separation between his abilities and that of others. Unable to truly express his power/anger through the natural blue tint of ice, Muroku's emotions would lead to the creation of a Hierarchy when using his KKG, ultimately creating ice with a red hue. This ice would be much colder in temperature and could consume other form ice adding to his own control. Once the seal is placed upon the wielder, he/she now has sovereign against other ice techniques. All techniques used under the influence of the seal, gains a rank in power against other ice techniques and water techniques.
Combination: All Ice Techniques


In order to control anothers ice you must be able to overcome their chakra so Cost of technique used + 50% of that cost on top of it

Name: Hyō Hoeru Kai[Lit. Ice Howling Release
Rank: C-Rank
Cost: 25
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: 10m
Speed: 200
Power: 100
Handseals: Wolf [Custom Hand Seal]
Description: This technique is a staple among those with Yuki KKG. By manipulating already formed ice, the user can shatter the ice, creating sharp shrapnel. This shrapnel would create a second wave of attack flying toward the target.
Combination: Any Ice technique can be used as source for technique


Sharpnel Number and size?
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Muroku Washiba wrote:Name: Makyō Hyōshō: Chikyū Amekagami [Lit. Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals: Earth Reflecting Heaven]
Rank: A-Rank
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 25
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: 50m
Speed: +300
Power: N/A
Handseals: Snake
Description: Upon seeing the effectiveness of the original technique, Muroku saw how to take such a technique to the next level. If one could make the earth one huge mirror, he could seamlessly phase in and out of existence. This idea would further Muroku's quest for becoming the God he sees himself as. Instead of creating vertical mirrors, reflecting his own image(his power), Muroku would create a single mirror, reflecting the image of a higher being(God's power). This mirror would be created beneath his feet, stretching 50m in length and 25m in width. To the ignorant, the mirror would merely look like a huge ice sheet laying upon the ground. With the exception of people with the Yuki KKG, anyone upon the mirror will take a -50 Speed reduction for one turn. While upon the mirror, Muroku gains +300 speed, in addition to the original abilities of Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals [Sink in and Out of Mirror].
Combination:Shiro Hyōga Yama


Edited

Name: Shiro Hyōga Yama [Lit. White Glacier Mountain]
Rank: B-Rank
Cost: 40
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: 15m
Speed: 100
Power: 285
Handseals: Dragon → Touch Ground
Description: This technique was created, to give Muroku the ability to create as any God would be able to. After touching the ground, chakra would flow into the ground below. This chakra would erect a glacier from the ground. This glacier, tipped with sharp edges, would race forward toward the intended target. Like most Ice Release, techniques, Muroku can phase into the Ice. The glacier spans about 10m wide an 10m in height.
Combination: Hyō Hoeru Kai


Edited

Name: Shinka Saisei Fuin: [Lit. Evolutionary Rebirth Seal]
Rank: S-Ranked
Cost: 60
Upkeep:
Type: Fuinjutsu; Ijutsu
Element: Ice Release; Water Release
Range: Self
Speed: +150
Power: +450
Handseals: Phoenix Seal  [Custom Hand Seal]
Description: This seals allows Muroku to rebirth himself, stronger and faster in a fragment of the time. At the cost of 10% of his life, Muroku has created a seal to place him within a ice crystal for 3 days. Within this crystal, Muroku's cells would undergo evolutionary metamorphosis. This metamorphosis would enhance cellular growth within his body, making him stronger, but also enhancing him aging process, ironically. The seal would go about this process, making his cell endure a Hypotonic transformation. Cells growth would be accelerated by pulling in more water and nutrients into the cells. Ultimately this would make the user live 3 decades within 3 days. This process repeats and balances itself by the 3rd day. On the 3rd day, the ice crystal will shatter, revealing the evolved specimen. This evolved form would be bulkier in muscle mass, and longer hair, potentially grey by now. All evolved creatures has the insignia [+] in the middle of their forehand, between the eyebrows.
Combination: N/A


The technique is a evolution. Muroku will undergo this crystallization, coming out purely stronger and older. Edited, to 10% of health.

Name: Tensō Aka no Kōtei Fuin [Lit. Subjugation of the Crimson Emperor Seal]
Rank: S-Rank
Cost: 50
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Fuinjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Power: 300
Handseals: Phoenix Seal [Custom Hand Seal]
Description: This seal was created in preparation for meeting others with the Yuki KKG. Being the God-King himself, Muroku created a way to create separation between his abilities and that of others. Unable to truly express his power/anger through the natural blue tint of ice, Muroku's emotions would lead to the creation of a Hierarchy when using his KKG, ultimately creating ice with a red hue. This ice would be much colder in temperature and could consume other forms of ice adding to his own control. Once the seal is placed upon the wielder, he/she now has sovereign against other ice techniques. All techniques used under the influence of the seal, gains a rank in power against other ice techniques and water techniques. In addition, to properly absorb another Ice, one must expend another 50% of chakra cost.
Combination: All Ice Techniques


Edited.

Name: Hyō Hoeru Kai[Lit. Ice Howling Release]
Rank: C-Rank
Cost: 25
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: 10m
Speed: 200
Power: 100
Handseals: Wolf [Custom Hand Seal]
Description: This technique is a staple among those with Yuki KKG. By manipulating already formed ice, the user can shatter the ice, creating sharp shrapnel. This shrapnel would create a second wave of attack flying toward the target. 0m-3 of Ice; create up to 25 shrapnel (5in. in Length). 4m-7m of ice; create up to 50 shrapnel (5in. in Length). 8m-10m of ice; create up to 75 shrapnel (5in. in Length).
Combination: Any Ice technique can be used as source for technique


Edited.
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on Sun Jul 17, 2016 12:30 pm
Muroku Washiba wrote:
Muroku Washiba wrote:Name: Makyō Hyōshō: Chikyū Amekagami [Lit. Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals: Earth Reflecting Heaven]
Rank: A-Rank
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 25
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: 50m
Speed: +300
Power: N/A
Handseals: Snake
Description: Upon seeing the effectiveness of the original technique, Muroku saw how to take such a technique to the next level. If one could make the earth one huge mirror, he could seamlessly phase in and out of existence. This idea would further Muroku's quest for becoming the God he sees himself as. Instead of creating vertical mirrors, reflecting his own image(his power), Muroku would create a single mirror, reflecting the image of a higher being(God's power). This mirror would be created beneath his feet, stretching 50m in length and 25m in width. To the ignorant, the mirror would merely look like a huge ice sheet laying upon the ground. With the exception of people with the Yuki KKG, anyone upon the mirror will take a -50 Speed reduction for one turn. While upon the mirror, Muroku gains +300 speed, in addition to the original abilities of Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals [Sink in and Out of Mirror].
Combination:Shiro Hyōga Yama


Approved

Name: Shiro Hyōga Yama [Lit. White Glacier Mountain]
Rank: B-Rank
Cost: 40
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: 15m
Speed: 100
Power: 285
Handseals: Dragon → Touch Ground
Description: This technique was created, to give Muroku the ability to create as any God would be able to. After touching the ground, chakra would flow into the ground below. This chakra would erect a glacier from the ground. This glacier, tipped with sharp edges, would race forward toward the intended target. Like most Ice Release, techniques, Muroku can phase into the Ice. The glacier spans about 10m wide an 10m in height.
Combination: Hyō Hoeru Kai


Approved

Name: Shinka Saisei Fuin: [Lit. Evolutionary Rebirth Seal]
Rank: S-Ranked
Cost: 60
Upkeep:
Type: Fuinjutsu; Ijutsu
Element: Ice Release; Water Release
Range: Self
Speed: +150
Power: +450
Handseals: Phoenix Seal  [Custom Hand Seal]
Description: This seals allows Muroku to rebirth himself, stronger and faster in a fragment of the time. At the cost of 10% of his life, Muroku has created a seal to place him within a ice crystal for 3 days. Within this crystal, Muroku's cells would undergo evolutionary metamorphosis. This metamorphosis would enhance cellular growth within his body, making him stronger, but also enhancing him aging process, ironically. The seal would go about this process, making his cell endure a Hypotonic transformation. Cells growth would be accelerated by pulling in more water and nutrients into the cells. Ultimately this would make the user live 3 decades within 3 days. This process repeats and balances itself by the 3rd day. On the 3rd day, the ice crystal will shatter, revealing the evolved specimen. This evolved form would be bulkier in muscle mass, and longer hair, potentially grey by now. All evolved creatures has the insignia [+] in the middle of their forehand, between the eyebrows.
Combination: N/A


I must ask, Stronger in what way?

Name: Tensō Aka no Kōtei Fuin [Lit. Subjugation of the Crimson Emperor Seal]
Rank: S-Rank
Cost: 50
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Fuinjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Power: 300
Handseals: Phoenix Seal [Custom Hand Seal]
Description: This seal was created in preparation for meeting others with the Yuki KKG. Being the God-King himself, Muroku created a way to create separation between his abilities and that of others. Unable to truly express his power/anger through the natural blue tint of ice, Muroku's emotions would lead to the creation of a Hierarchy when using his KKG, ultimately creating ice with a red hue. This ice would be much colder in temperature and could consume other forms of ice adding to his own control. Once the seal is placed upon the wielder, he/she now has sovereign against other ice techniques. All techniques used under the influence of the seal, gains a rank in power against other ice techniques and water techniques. In addition, to properly absorb another Ice, one must expend another 50% of chakra cost.
Combination: All Ice Techniques


Approved

Name: Hyō Hoeru Kai[Lit. Ice Howling Release]
Rank: C-Rank
Cost: 25
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Range: 10m
Speed: 200
Power: 100
Handseals: Wolf [Custom Hand Seal]
Description: This technique is a staple among those with Yuki KKG. By manipulating already formed ice, the user can shatter the ice, creating sharp shrapnel. This shrapnel would create a second wave of attack flying toward the target. 0m-3 of Ice; create up to 25 shrapnel (5in. in Length). 4m-7m of ice; create up to 50 shrapnel (5in. in Length). 8m-10m of ice; create up to 75 shrapnel (5in. in Length).
Combination: Any Ice technique can be used as source for technique


Approved
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on Sun Jul 17, 2016 12:34 pm
Evolutionary Rebirth Seal - Is basically walking into the gym, coming back out in 3 days, swole and older. Its literally accelerates muscle growth and aging.
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on Sun Jul 17, 2016 12:53 pm
But gives you no stats? Doesn't make you Stronger say, Litterally by our standards, but gives just muscle mass/definition?
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Name: Shinka Saisei Fuin: [Lit. Evolutionary Rebirth Seal]
Rank: S-Ranked
Cost: 60
Upkeep:
Type: Fuinjutsu; Ijutsu
Element: Ice Release; Water Release
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: Phoenix Seal  [Custom Hand Seal]
Description: This seals allows Muroku to rebirth himself, stronger and faster in a fragment of the time. At the cost of 20% of his life, Muroku has created a seal to place him within a ice crystal for 3 days. Within this crystal, Muroku's cells would undergo evolutionary metamorphosis. This metamorphosis would enhance cellular growth within his body, making him stronger, but also enhancing his aging process, ironically. The seal would go about this process, making his cell endure a Hypotonic transformation. Growth is medically enhanced through the water.

The body uses the chakra like creatine, pulling water into your muscle cells. Which increases protein synthesis. Ultimately this would make the user live 3 decades within 3 days[3 Day Writing Process]. This process repeats and balances itself by the 3rd day. On the 3rd day, the ice crystal will shatter, revealing the evolved specimen. This evolved form would be bulkier in muscle mass, and longer hair, potentially grey by now. All evolved creatures has the insignia [+] in the middle of their forehand, between the eyebrows. +150 Endurance; +150 Strength;

The increase in stats apply as long as seal is active. Once, seal is disrupted, the evolution process must be repeated (1.2k Words). Disruption of Seal can go about in 2 ways:


  • 1. Unsealing Technique of equal or greater level.
  • 2. If the user is hit with lightning of 200+ will disable boost for 1 post, reducing user back to original form temporarily.


Combination: N/A


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on Sun Jul 17, 2016 1:36 pm
Where is he getting the Nutrients from as well? Need that to be stated. Living 3 decades in 3 days, you're gonna need a Lot of nutrients for that. So make sure to reveals where you're getting it from. I would say make it 150+ for strength as well. 300 extra strength for this sounds kinda wild since there's no real cost for it.
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Removed Nutrients; "Growth is medically enhanced through the water. The body uses the chakra like creatine, pulling water into your muscle cells. Which increases protein synthesis."
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Muroku Washiba wrote:Name: Shinka Saisei Fuin: [Lit. Evolutionary Rebirth Seal]
Rank: S-Ranked
Cost: 60
Upkeep:
Type: Fuinjutsu; Ijutsu
Element: Ice Release; Water Release
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: Phoenix Seal  [Custom Hand Seal]
Description: This seals allows Muroku to rebirth himself, stronger and faster in a fragment of the time. At the cost of 10% of his life, Muroku has created a seal to place him within a ice crystal for 3 days. Within this crystal, Muroku's cells would undergo evolutionary metamorphosis. This metamorphosis would enhance cellular growth within his body, making him stronger, but also enhancing his aging process, ironically. The seal would go about this process, making his cell endure a Hypotonic transformation. Growth is medically enhanced through the water. The body uses the chakra like creatine, pulling water into your muscle cells. Which increases protein synthesis. Ultimately this would make the user live 3 decades within 3 days. This process repeats and balances itself by the 3rd day. On the 3rd day, the ice crystal will shatter, revealing the evolved specimen. This evolved form would be bulkier in muscle mass, and longer hair, potentially grey by now. All evolved creatures has the insignia [+] in the middle of their forehand, between the eyebrows. +150 Endurance; +150 Strength;
Combination: N/A

1. So, the seal/containment cannot give you a permanent boost in strength and Endurance - or else anyone at anytime could do such a thing. The boosts can last as long as the seal is active.

2. The ways in which it can be disrupted are as follows:

-By a seal of equal or greater power unsealing it. Once this happens, you must go through the process once more to regain it.
-By lightning element of 200 or more power hitting your body. Seal is "disrupted", and you lose the boost for one turn. And then it returns to function.

3. The process for this to come to be must be made more difficult. And each time the seal is shut off, you must go through it once more in order for it to be in effect. I want the following added:

-The process must be 2k words.
-The process is so strenuous on the body that it takes time to adapt. You suffer -20 life force after the process is over. It heals back in normal time of life force healing (five posts).
-Requires Master in Fuuin
-This technique is limited.
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on Sun Jul 17, 2016 9:23 pm
Muroku Washiba wrote:Name: Shinka Saisei Fuin: [Lit. Evolutionary Rebirth Seal] [Limited]
Rank: S-Ranked
Cost: 60
Upkeep:
Type: Fuinjutsu; Ijutsu
Element: Ice Release; Water Release
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: Phoenix Seal  [Custom Hand Seal]
Description: This seals allows Muroku to rebirth himself, stronger and faster in a fragment of the time. At the cost of 20% of his life, Muroku has created a seal to place him within a ice crystal for 3 days. Within this crystal, Muroku's cells would undergo evolutionary metamorphosis. This metamorphosis would enhance cellular growth within his body, making him stronger, but also enhancing his aging process, ironically. The seal would go about this process, making his cell endure a Hypotonic transformation. Growth is medically enhanced through the water.

The body uses the chakra like creatine, pulling water into your muscle cells. Which increases protein synthesis. Ultimately this would make the user live 3 decades within 3 days[3 Day Writing Process]. This process repeats and balances itself by the 3rd day. On the 3rd day, the ice crystal will shatter, revealing the evolved specimen. This evolved form would be bulkier in muscle mass, and longer hair, potentially grey by now. All evolved creatures has the insignia [+] in the middle of their forehand, between the eyebrows. +150 Endurance; +150 Strength;

The increase in stats apply as long as seal is active. Once, seal is disrupted, the evolution process must be repeated (1.2k Words). Disruption of Seal can go about in 2 ways:


  • 1. Unsealing Technique of equal or greater level.
  • 2. If the user is hit with lightning of 200+ will disable boost for 1 post, reducing user back to original form temporarily.


Combination: N/A

Approved. You in the chamber with -20% life force while in the tank. You cannot move or use jutsu; but you can have techniques active before you enter the chamber.
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