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on Thu Jun 30, 2016 3:47 pm
Name: OniRaidengan(Right eye)
Rank: C
Type: Contact Lenses
Materials: Chakra material
Visual Description:
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Power: 250
Endurance: 50
Ability:(Medium Ability) When put on the contacts increase the user's perception  as the clarity of their vision becomes more sharpened preventing motion blur. Utilizing this Mujin can use his chidori as if he had a doujustu stopping the tunnel vision affect.
Cost: 1.250 for one 2.5 for pair(6k for ability)
Requirements:


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on Thu Jun 30, 2016 4:05 pm
Mujin wrote:Name: OniRaidengan(Right eye)
Rank: C
Type: Contact Lenses
Materials: Chakra material
Visual Description:
Spoiler:
Power: 250
Endurance: 50
Ability: When put on the contacts increase the user's perception  as the clarity of their vision becomes more sharpened preventing motion blur. Utilizing this Mujin can use his chidori as if he had a doujustu stopping the tunnel vision affect.
Cost: 1.250 for one 2.5 for pair
Requirements:

Name: Raidengan(Left eye)
Rank: C
Type: Contact Lenses
Materials: Chakra material
Visual Description:
Spoiler:
Power: 250
Endurance: 50
Ability: These contacts made from a chakra conductive material have a unique ability in which they can reflect chakra namely ocular genjustu attempted. Likewise this only works with eye based genjustu stopping targets from making contact with the user. The lenses are actually mirrors as well and additionally they reflect genjustu C-Rank and below back on too the user which are eye contact based.
Cost: 1.250 for one 2.5 for pair
Requirements:

OniRaidengan(Right eye)
- Your ability will need to be a Medium ability.

Raidengan(Left eye)
- Can you add in that these can only stop Genjutsu up to its rank (C). Additionally, you have two abilities here. The second being reflecting the Genjutsu back, thus this will need to be an extra Medium Ability.
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on Thu Jun 30, 2016 4:29 pm
Mujin wrote:Name: OniRaidengan(Right eye)
Rank: C
Type: Contact Lenses
Materials: Chakra material
Visual Description:
Spoiler:
Power: 250
Endurance: 50
Ability:(Medium Ability) When put on the contacts increase the user's perception  as the clarity of their vision becomes more sharpened preventing motion blur. Utilizing this Mujin can use his chidori as if he had a doujustu stopping the tunnel vision affect.
Cost: 1.250 for one 2.5 for pair(6k for ability)
Requirements:

Name: Raidengan(Left eye)
Rank: C
Type: Contact Lenses
Materials: Chakra material
Visual Description:
Spoiler:
Power: 250
Endurance: 50
Ability:(2 Medium Abilitys) These contacts made from a chakra conductive material have a unique ability in which they can reflect C-Rank and below chakra namely ocular genjustu attempted. Likewise this only works with eye based genjustu stopping targets from making contact with the user. The lenses are actually mirrors as well and additionally they reflect genjustu C-Rank and below back on too the user which are eye contact based.
Cost: 1.250 for one 2.5 for pair(12k for abilitys)
Requirements:

Approved, unless stated otherwise.
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on Fri Jul 01, 2016 11:22 am
Mujin wrote:Name: OniRaidengan(Right eye)
Rank: C
Type: Contact Lenses
Materials: Chakra material
Visual Description:
Spoiler:
Power: 250
Endurance: 50
Ability:(Medium Ability) When put on the contacts increase the user's perception  as the clarity of their vision becomes more sharpened preventing motion blur. Utilizing this Mujin can use his chidori as if he had a doujustu stopping the tunnel vision affect.
Cost: 1.250 for one 2.5 for pair(6k for ability)
Requirements:

Name: Raidengan(Left eye)
Rank: C
Type: Contact Lenses
Materials: Chakra material
Visual Description:
Spoiler:
Power: 250
Endurance: 50
Ability:(2 Medium Abilitys) These contacts made from a chakra conductive material have a unique ability in which they can reflect C-Rank and below chakra namely ocular genjustu attempted. Likewise this only works with eye based genjustu stopping targets from making contact with the user. The lenses are actually mirrors as well and additionally they reflect genjustu C-Rank and below back on too the user which are eye contact based.
Cost: 1.250 for one 2.5 for pair(12k for abilitys)
Requirements:

Denied.

Really like these and a good idea. Here is what I have a problem with:

1. Just to be clear, make sure you read the buki siystem. No one can use weapons with no skill in buki. You can make them though I suppose, but I'd rather you have some points first before doing so. Everyone is allowed to purchase up to two skill points after character creation MAX; the rest must be purchased via the exp system.

2. You cannot auto-reflect C rank and below genjutsu. We don't do auto-hit or auto-reflect here. You can defend against certain ocular based gen up to a certain power level or sometihng to that effect. But nothing that blocks out all things of a certain rank and below.

3. Redo the second one completely please.

This is denied until edits are made and these are made according to the system in place. The first one is not bad, just uneccessary (imo); but you are free to keep it unless I see something else. Just know that this has no speed enhancing or site enhancing abilities. It just means when you move fast you don't have blurs...
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