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on Wed Jul 20, 2016 3:42 pm
Kodoku wrote:

Name: To Tear Down Walls
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Fuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 100 m
Speed: 150
Power: 150
Handseals: Draw the Seal | N/A
Description: Similar in nature to most other seals which drain and seal away chakra, this seal also robs its hapless victims of one of their more precious resources. The seal possesses two different forms, a small, "dormant" form which can be placed on small tags, objects, or other surfaces in preparation, and a massive "active" form which, once activated by running chakra through the seal, will spread out rapidly to its full reaches and begin. The huge array of the seal ensnares all those within its borders, having no apparent vertical limits either up or down, and by its very nature it does not discriminate between friend or foe, user or victim.

Spawned from the mind of an undoubtedly mad man who claims his "author," while stupid, at least gets the job done and writes nicely, this seal functions on a kind of trigger. It does not drain a set amount of chakra over any given time, but instead interacts with what Ko has come to refer to as The Code of the world and the ways in which the alleged puppet masters who pull the strings of him and all other being within it shape the universe he inhabits. The seal drains chakra in accordance to the number of uses of any form of "to be" in any person's post, stealing four chakra per use per post. The seal absorbs the stolen chakra, incorporating it into its pattern to strengthen it and fuel it endless thirst for competent word play. The chakra stolen adds to the power of the seal, making it increasingly difficult to break.
Combination: N/A

~Pretty cool idea but are you saying you're basing the absorbed chakra of this seal off of a seal victim's world count or what. The explanation is a bit confusing.
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on Wed Jul 20, 2016 5:34 pm
Wow thank you for the quick reply.

Basically it drains x amount of chakra per use of any form of "to be" anyone's post. So it isn't strictly based on word count but number of times someone uses a certain word. I hope that helps.
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on Fri Jul 22, 2016 9:02 pm
~Ah, okay. So everytime a person says, "To Be" the ability is activated ?
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on Sat Jul 23, 2016 6:44 am
Yes, any time anyone uses to be or a form of to be it drains a small amount of chakra.
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on Sat Jul 23, 2016 10:57 am
Kodoku wrote:

Name: To Tear Down Walls
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Fuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 100 m
Speed: 150
Power: 150
Handseals: Draw the Seal | N/A
Description: Similar in nature to most other seals which drain and seal away chakra, this seal also robs its hapless victims of one of their more precious resources. The seal possesses two different forms, a small, "dormant" form which can be placed on small tags, objects, or other surfaces in preparation, and a massive "active" form which, once activated by running chakra through the seal, will spread out rapidly to its full reaches and begin. The huge array of the seal ensnares all those within its borders, having no apparent vertical limits either up or down, and by its very nature it does not discriminate between friend or foe, user or victim.

Spawned from the mind of an undoubtedly mad man who claims his "author," while stupid, at least gets the job done and writes nicely, this seal functions on a kind of trigger. It does not drain a set amount of chakra over any given time, but instead interacts with what Ko has come to refer to as The Code of the world and the ways in which the alleged puppet masters who pull the strings of him and all other being within it shape the universe he inhabits. The seal drains chakra in accordance to the number of uses of any form of "to be" in any person's post, stealing four chakra per use per post. The seal absorbs the stolen chakra, incorporating it into its pattern to strengthen it and fuel it endless thirst for competent word play. The chakra stolen adds to the power of the seal, making it increasingly difficult to break.
Combination: N/A

Seems Legit. . . Approved!

Remember it states only 4 chakra in the description.
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on Mon Aug 15, 2016 8:47 pm

Name: To Meditate
Rank: A
Cost: N/A
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: N/A
Description: Part technique, part trained ability, this innate power allows the user to drink of any chakra source equally and without harm. For one with an ability to absorb chakra and an insatiable appetite for the miraculous energy form, this ability proves invaluable as he can freely drain the energy from any target without fear of "corrupted" or otherwise or otherwise damaging chakra. Because of his proficiency in consuming and metabolizing chakra, as well as his highly adaptable body, the user of this will not suffer damage when consuming altered chakra sources. This ability has no effect on sage chakra unless the user can himself use sage chakra, at which point he can simply add the absorbed chakra to his sage chakra pool.
Combination: Chakra Absorption

Name: To Sign the Scroll
Rank: S
Cost: 80 [Each participant pays half]
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu | Medical | Fuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self/Touch
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: N/A
Description: A technique allegedly stemming from the unknowable powers of inter-dimensional beings under the guise of countless different names, this technique simply allows the user to enter into a contractual agreement with another party. Much more than more banal agreements, the participating parties usually formalize the contract in writing, though simpler verbal contracts can also arise. Also unlike other agreements, even those in some other way empowered through chakra or other magics, this contract holds no downside to the one who attempts to break it, for breaking it simply becomes impossible. Those who enter this cannot, in anyway, circumvent the rules of the agreement once reached and enacted.

The true novelty of this particular ability is that both parties can pay for services, whatever those services may be, in virtually any way they see fit. From simple money or items, to specific personal favors, to extreme measures such as giving up access to a portion of one's chakra, or even future possibilities, nearly anything a party can imagine to give as payment can be given. Once completed, each affected party will bear a mark of the contract which will take the form of a small, black circle, inside of which shall read the names of all involved parties. Payments can be, at the discretion of either participant, be paid to third parties and can be designated as owed at any time, including the far flung future or under certain triggering conditions. All contracts are final, but may be overturned in the instance that both parties agree to nullifying it, which will create a second contract to nullify the first. As a permanent clause of all contracts, attempts to somehow remove responsibility to the contract or revoke payment become impossible on the part of those bound, as well as speaking of the contract, nature thereof, or parties engaged within the agreement. External attempts to tamper with or remove the contract, if such should or could ever become relevant, shall cause the person being tampered with to die and turn to dust, destroying their body fully, sealing away their memories of all activity surrounding the contract(s) in question, and passing their soul onto an Old God, from whence it cannot be retrieved.
Combination: N/A


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on Wed Aug 24, 2016 3:44 am
Kodoku wrote:

Name: To Meditate
Rank: A
Cost: N/A
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: N/A
Description: Part technique, part trained ability, this innate power allows the user to drink of any chakra source equally and without harm. For one with an ability to absorb chakra and an insatiable appetite for the miraculous energy form, this ability proves invaluable as he can freely drain the energy from any target without fear of "corrupted" or otherwise or otherwise damaging chakra. Because of his proficiency in consuming and metabolizing chakra, as well as his highly adaptable body, the user of this will not suffer damage when consuming altered chakra sources. This ability has no effect on sage chakra unless the user can himself use sage chakra, at which point he can simply add the absorbed chakra to his sage chakra pool.
Combination: Chakra Absorption

Name: To Sign the Scroll
Rank: S
Cost: 80 [Each participant pays half]
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu | Medical | Fuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self/Touch
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: N/A
Description: A technique allegedly stemming from the unknowable powers of inter-dimensional beings under the guise of countless different names, this technique simply allows the user to enter into a contractual agreement with another party. Much more than more banal agreements, the participating parties usually formalize the contract in writing, though simpler verbal contracts can also arise. Also unlike other agreements, even those in some other way empowered through chakra or other magics, this contract holds no downside to the one who attempts to break it, for breaking it simply becomes impossible. Those who enter this cannot, in anyway, circumvent the rules of the agreement once reached and enacted.

The true novelty of this particular ability is that both parties can pay for services, whatever those services may be, in virtually any way they see fit. From simple money or items, to specific personal favors, to extreme measures such as giving up access to a portion of one's chakra, or even future possibilities, nearly anything a party can imagine to give as payment can be given. Once completed, each affected party will bear a mark of the contract which will take the form of a small, black circle, inside of which shall read the names of all involved parties. Payments can be, at the discretion of either participant, be paid to third parties and can be designated as owed at any time, including the far flung future or under certain triggering conditions. All contracts are final, but may be overturned in the instance that both parties agree to nullifying it, which will create a second contract to nullify the first. As a permanent clause of all contracts, attempts to somehow remove responsibility to the contract or revoke payment become impossible on the part of those bound, as well as speaking of the contract, nature thereof, or parties engaged within the agreement. External attempts to tamper with or remove the contract, if such should or could ever become relevant, shall cause the person being tampered with to die and turn to dust, destroying their body fully, sealing away their memories of all activity surrounding the contract(s) in question, and passing their soul onto an Old God, from whence it cannot be retrieved.
Combination: N/A

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Name: To Burst at the Seams  
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Medical
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Speed: User's Speed
Power: 450
Handseals: Boar Dog
Description: A twisted variant of the Healing Hands technique, this ability, once activated, reverses the basic principle of its brother and, rather than healing, decays all that which it touches. By wrapping the hands of the user in a corroding version of medical chakra, the user's hands glow a soft green color and damage anything with which they come into contact. Targets which possess less endurance than this technique's power shall succumb, appearing to unravel as they melt away. Anything with endurance of 150 or more above this technique's power shall simply lose endurance equal to the its endurance minus the power of this technique per post. Because this ability breaks down the material of that which is affected, it is particularly useful against organic matter, as the cells are destroyed and thus cannot be used for anything else. As with the parent technique, the user may elect where to focus this chakra, allowing them to handle weapons and such without destroying them.
Combination: This can be channeled through weaponry similar to how chakra flow works, at which point the weapon gains half the power of this technique and has the additional decaying effect.

Name: To Succor the Damned  
Rank: S
Cost: 70
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Medical
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: Monkey Dragon Horse Ram Ox Boar Bird Snake
Description: A black ritual involving the consumption of a human brain, this ability allows the person consuming the organ to take on a portion of the very essence of the now deceased individual. Infused with the vigor of this other person's life, the person shall feel both rejuvenated and empowered, gaining a small sum of life force, but will also begin to feel a thirst for life that, invariably, leads them to continual consumption. The ritual requires at least two posts of five hundred words each and must be done to the remains of a player character, as non-player characters simply aren't real. Finally, the ritual cannot fully grant the life energy of the departed soul, but instead only increases the user's life force by one fourth of that of the target's.
Combination: N/A


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Name: To Stride the Storm 
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 10
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 150
Speed: 100
Power: N/A
Handseals: Bird Dragon Horse
Description: With this technique, the user generates a flexible barrier whose only purpose is to shift the placement of other barrier abilities. The user will generally create the space around himself before expanding it, but in any case the user may freely manipulate the exact shape of the barrier, expanding, contracting, and contouring it to any shape or dimensions he should see fit. When the barrier comes into contact with another barrier ability, it will slowly push at it, eventually shifting and, if necessary, contorting the other barrier such that it is essential shoved out of the space that this barrier seeks to occupy. This in no way damages any other barrier technique but rather shifts and often reshapes them.
Combination: N/A
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on Fri Oct 07, 2016 7:58 am
Kodoku wrote:Name: To Burst at the Seams
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Medical
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Speed: User's Speed
Power: 450
Handseals: Boar Dog
Description: A twisted variant of the Healing Hands technique, this ability, once activated, reverses the basic principle of its brother and, rather than healing, decays all that which it touches. By wrapping the hands of the user in a corroding version of medical chakra, the user's hands glow a soft green color and damage anything with which they come into contact. Targets which possess less endurance than this technique's power shall succumb, appearing to unravel as they melt away. Anything with endurance higher than this shall simply lose endurance equal to the power of this technique when contacted. Because this ability breaks down the material of that which is affected, it is particularly useful against organic matter, as the cells are destroyed and thus cannot be used for anything else. As with the parent technique, the user may elect where to focus this chakra, allowing them to handle weapons and such without destroying them.
Combination: This can be channeled through weaponry similar to how chakra flow works, at which point the weapon gains half the power of this technique and has the additional decaying effect.
Good technique, just needs to follow the Endurance stat. As such, your jutsu needs to be 150power over the endurance of the user to cuase their body to instantly decay. Anyone over the 150endurance of your jutsu power, would lose the difference between their endurance and the power of your jutsu per post(Such as they have 400 endurance, 400-450=50 endurance per post)

Name: To Succor the Damned  
Rank: S
Cost: 70
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Medical
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: Monkey Dragon Horse Ram Ox Boar Bird Snake
Description: A black ritual involving the consumption of a human brain, this ability allows the person consuming the organ to take on a portion of the very essence of the now deceased individual. Infused with the vigor of this other person's life, the person shall feel both rejuvenated and empowered, gaining a small sum of life force, but will also begin to feel a thirst for life that, invariably, leads them to continual consumption. The ritual requires at least two posts of five hundred words each and must be done to the remains of a player character, as non-player characters simply aren't real. Finally, the ritual cannot fully grant the life energy of the departed soul, but instead only increases the user's life force by one fourth of that of the target's.
Combination: N/A
Im not too sure about this one, I'll ask another mod to look at it.

Name: To Stride the Storm
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 10
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 150
Speed: 100
Power: N/A
Handseals: Bird Dragon Horse
Description: With this technique, the user generates a flexible barrier whose only purpose is to shift the placement of other barrier abilities. The user will generally create the space around himself before expanding it, but in any case the user may freely manipulate the exact shape of the barrier, expanding, contracting, and contouring it to any shape or dimensions he should see fit. When the barrier comes into contact with another barrier ability, it will slowly push at it, eventually shifting and, if necessary, contorting the other barrier such that it is essential shoved out of the space that this barrier seeks to occupy. This in no way damages any other barrier technique but rather shifts and often reshapes them.
Combination: N/A
I would recommend bumping the power of this barrier ninjutsu up. It's a good idea, but you wouldn't be able to budge or change another barrier which was more powerful than yours.

All in all, not bad techniques. I am sorry you had to wait since AUGUST to get someone to see this.
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on Fri Oct 07, 2016 9:21 am
I think I fixed the first one and will wait on the second one.

I have to think about the third some so give me a little time on that one please.

And thank you very much for looking at these.
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on Sat Oct 08, 2016 1:12 pm
Name: To Succor the Damned  
Rank: S
Cost: 70
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Medical
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: Monkey Dragon Horse Ram Ox Boar Bird Snake
Description: A black ritual involving the consumption of a human brain, this ability allows the person consuming the organ to take on a portion of the very essence of the now deceased individual. Infused with the vigor of this other person's life, the person shall feel both rejuvenated and empowered, gaining a small sum of life force, but will also begin to feel a thirst for life that, invariably, leads them to continual consumption. The ritual requires at least two posts of five hundred words each and must be done to the remains of a player character, as non-player characters simply aren't real. Finally, the ritual cannot fully grant the life energy of the departed soul, but instead only increases the user's life force by one fourth of that of the target's.
Combination: N/A
Alright. They say this jutsu needs reworked. You can use medical ninjutsu to absorb LF, but it must be done directly through the Player Character interaction. Also, there needs to be a limit.
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(I reposted these since they are getting a little buried. Hope that's ok. First is fixed from what you earlier said. Tried to fix the second one too so tell me what you think please and thank you.)


Name: To Burst at the Seams  
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Medical
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Speed: User's Speed
Power: 450
Handseals: Boar Dog
Description: A twisted variant of the Healing Hands technique, this ability, once activated, reverses the basic principle of its brother and, rather than healing, decays all that which it touches. By wrapping the hands of the user in a corroding version of medical chakra, the user's hands glow a soft green color and damage anything with which they come into contact. Targets which possess less endurance than this technique's power shall succumb, appearing to unravel as they melt away. Anything with endurance of 150 or more above this technique's power shall simply lose endurance equal to the its endurance minus the power of this technique per post. Because this ability breaks down the material of that which is affected, it is particularly useful against organic matter, as the cells are destroyed and thus cannot be used for anything else. As with the parent technique, the user may elect where to focus this chakra, allowing them to handle weapons and such without destroying them.
Combination: This can be channeled through weaponry similar to how chakra flow works, at which point the weapon gains half the power of this technique and has the additional decaying effect.

Name: To Succor the Damned  
Rank: S
Cost: 70
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Medical
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: Monkey Dragon Horse Ram Ox Boar Bird Snake
Description: A black ritual involving the consumption of a still-living human brain, this ability allows the person consuming the organ to take on a portion of the very essence of the now deceased individual. Infused with the vigor of this other person's life, the person shall feel both rejuvenated and empowered, gaining a small sum of life force, but will also begin to feel a thirst for life that, invariably, leads them to continual consumption. The ritual requires at least two posts of five hundred words each and must be done to the remains of a player character, as non-player characters simply aren't real. Finally, the ritual cannot fully grant the life energy of the departed soul, but instead only increases the user's life force by one fourth of that of the target's. It can only be used on player characters and can only increase the user's life force by 200 per purchase of this technique
Combination: N/A
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Kodoku wrote:(I reposted these since they are getting a little buried. Hope that's ok. First is fixed from what you earlier said. Tried to fix the second one too so tell me what you think please and thank you.)


Name: To Burst at the Seams  
Rank: A
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 20
Type: Medical
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Speed: User's Speed
Power: 450
Handseals: Boar Dog
Description: A twisted variant of the Healing Hands technique, this ability, once activated, reverses the basic principle of its brother and, rather than healing, decays all that which it touches. By wrapping the hands of the user in a corroding version of medical chakra, the user's hands glow a soft green color and damage anything with which they come into contact. Targets which possess less endurance than this technique's power shall succumb, appearing to unravel as they melt away. Anything with endurance of 150 or more above this technique's power shall simply lose endurance equal to the its endurance minus the power of this technique per post. Because this ability breaks down the material of that which is affected, it is particularly useful against organic matter, as the cells are destroyed and thus cannot be used for anything else. As with the parent technique, the user may elect where to focus this chakra, allowing them to handle weapons and such without destroying them.
Combination: This can be channeled through weaponry similar to how chakra flow works, at which point the weapon gains half the power of this technique and has the additional decaying effect.

Name: To Succor the Damned  
Rank: S
Cost: 70
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Medical
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: Monkey Dragon Horse Ram Ox Boar Bird Snake
Description: A black ritual involving the consumption of a still-living human brain, this ability allows the person consuming the organ to take on a portion of the very essence of the now deceased individual. Infused with the vigor of this other person's life, the person shall feel both rejuvenated and empowered, gaining a small sum of life force, but will also begin to feel a thirst for life that, invariably, leads them to continual consumption. The ritual requires at least two posts of five hundred words each and must be done to the remains of a player character, as non-player characters simply aren't real. Finally, the ritual cannot fully grant the life energy of the departed soul, but instead only increases the user's life force by one fourth of that of the target's. It can only be used on player characters and can only increase the user's life force by 200 per purchase of this technique
Combination: N/A

Approved unless someone states otherwise.
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Name: Casualty Puppet
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Medical | Canon
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: Boar Snake
Description: Developed by Kodoko, this technique allows the user to partially absorb a freshly killed corpse, transforming it into an extension of the user's body. Though absorbing allows one to gain access to the target's techniques, the use of Casualty Puppet can warp the user's mind and body, making the user highly unstable with only a great shock snapping them back to their senses. If the user attempts to absorb a person with greater life force than himself, he will suffer negative issues with his psyche, though those weaker than him pose little threat.

When used, the body in question is absorb and stored with the user's body and can be freely used at any time. The user can use any techniques the body knew and can also manifest parts of the body at any time for no cost, which can be used to block attacks or launch offenses. Each body, when partially manifested, must remain connected to the user, can only use techniques which it originally knew, and can be destroyed. When absorbing a body, the user gains one fourth of the body's origional chakra.
Combination: N/A

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on Sun Oct 16, 2016 10:31 pm
Kodoku wrote:Name: Casualty Puppet
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Medical | Canon
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: Boar Snake
Description: Developed by Kodoko, this technique allows the user to partially absorb a freshly killed corpse, transforming it into an extension of the user's body. Though absorbing allows one to gain access to the target's techniques, the use of Casualty Puppet can warp the user's mind and body, making the user highly unstable with only a great shock snapping them back to their senses. If the user attempts to absorb a person with greater life force than himself, he will suffer negative issues with his psyche, though those weaker than him pose little threat.

When used, the body in question is absorb and stored with the user's body and can be freely used at any time. The user can use any techniques the body knew and can also manifest parts of the body at any time for no cost, which can be used to block attacks or launch offenses. Each body, when partially manifested, must remain connected to the user, can only use techniques which it originally knew, and can be destroyed. When absorbing a body, the user gains one fourth of the body's origional chakra.
Combination: N/A


Could you elaborate on the potential drawbacks? What about the endurance, how does that effect you if absorbing a corpse? Also, please consider the drawback of psyche an enrage like a curse seal.

Consider lowering the amount of chakra absorbed. As this is a variant of Chimera, it's reasonable tp request between 50-100 chakra per corpse. Though reasonable there should be a limit to how many corpses you can absorb before becoming a grotesque monster yourself.
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on Mon Nov 21, 2016 6:43 pm

Name: Divine Left Hand, Demonic Right Hand
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Medical
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Speed: Instant
Power: N/A
Handseals:
Description: An externalization of the Fission Clone technique, from which this ability derives, Divine Left Hand, Demonic Right Hand allows the user to grant the abilities of Fission to another party, willingly or otherwise. In this case, the user need simply make contact with the intended target, generally with a hand, and he can then generate a perfect fission clone from his opposite hand. As with the original, the clones operate at 70% of the stats of the original, are subject to all previous stipulations of the original Fission technique, and neither clone can be said to be the original. Full of versatility, the user of this ability can grant his subjects the ability to be in two places at once, as an example. The user may return the pair to their original, whole state by simply touching the two and willing them to fuse. The holder of this technique is required for such a fusion.
Combination: N/A

Name: Looking Glass
Rank: B
Cost: 30
Upkeep: 10
Type: Medical
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Speed: Instant
Power: N/A
Handseals:
Description: By using his nearly limitless power of camouflage granted by his unique body make up, Kodoku takes the pigments of his skin and the color sacs therein and alters them to a perfectly mirrored finish. His entire body becomes a complete mirror, devoid of any features other than those reflected off of his environment as his very being causes any and all light to bounce from him. By using chakra, he can allow this effect to extend to weapons and clothing of his, should he so choose. While in this state, he become incredibly strange to look at, appeared somewhat like a bizarre disturbance in the air, though for most opponents they find no difficulty adjusting to this (as they find little difficulty adjusting to anything). A simple technique causing him to reflect all light of any source or type, Ko enjoys this effect immensely for its "cool, stylish looks."
Combination: N/A


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on Tue Nov 22, 2016 7:02 pm
Name: Divine Left Hand, Demonic Right Hand
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Medical
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Speed: Instant
Power: N/A
Handseals:
Description: An externalization of the Fission Clone technique, from which this ability derives, Divine Left Hand, Demonic Right Hand allows the user to grant the abilities of Fission to another party, willingly or otherwise. In this case, the user need simply make contact with the intended target, generally with a hand, and he can then generate a perfect fission clone from his opposite hand. As with the original, the clones operate at 70% of the stats of the original, are subject to all previous stipulations of the original Fission technique, and neither clone can be said to be the original. Full of versatility, the user of this ability can grant his subjects the ability to be in two places at once, as an example. The user may return the pair to their original, whole state by simply touching the two and willing them to fuse. The holder of this technique is required for such a fusion.
Combination: N/A

You will need Fission for this which you dont

Name: Looking Glass
Rank: E
Cost: 4
Upkeep: 2
Type: Medical
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Speed: Instant
Power: N/A
Handseals:
Description: By using his nearly limitless power of camouflage granted by his unique body make up, Kodoku takes the pigments of his skin and the color sacs therein and alters them to a perfectly mirrored finish. His entire body becomes a complete mirror, devoid of any features other than those reflected off of his environment as his very being causes any and all light to bounce from him. By using chakra, he can allow this effect to extend to weapons and clothing of his, should he so choose. While in this state, he become incredibly strange to look at, appeared somewhat like a bizarre disturbance in the air, though for most opponents they find no difficulty adjusting to this (as they find little difficulty adjusting to anything). A simple technique causing him to reflect all light of any source or type, Ko enjoys this effect immensely for its "cool, stylish looks."
Combination: N/A

Okay so this isnt going to be a E-rank, B-rank is the best i will allow this
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on Tue Nov 22, 2016 7:45 pm
I will buy the parent tech.

And walking on water in a Jesus impersonation is deserving of an E rank yet turning yourself into a mirror requires B rank? Comparable to all of Kakuzu's signature, notably destructive moves? Sure. Edited, in any case.
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