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on Sat Jun 25, 2016 9:09 am
Name: Gurētosō | Great Saw
Rank: S
Type: Sword
Materials: Chakra-Refined Steel + Tungsten + Thermal Conductive inner lining of Brass and Copper
Visual Description:


A very odd weapon crafted by Kokoro's own hand, this enormous sword is about 5 feet in length from its edge to the tip of its pommel, measuring a foot and a half wide and five inches thick. The bladed side of the weapon isn't pointed or even sharp. The weapon has a very long pommel that extends to a massive blade, reinforced with layers of flame-imbued steel and tungsten over the Steel blade and exposed on its flat end, giving way for massive serrated edges looking like a giant saw-like knife. The curved end of the Gurētosō has many folds of  Chakra-Enhanced Steel and Fire-imbued Tungsten braided over its blade, making it a very powerful blunt object and to clash with blades, hammers and jutsu alike without breaking, acting as a powerful defense and an even more powerful offense but the true danger of the weapon is its serrated edges on its opposite side, which are exposed on the opposite, flat end. These edges can be used to saw through an opponent or shred a victims body to pieces. Even if the victim isn't killed, the wounds created from this blade could have permanent effects on its victims since the blade can cut through bones and even through the chakra system vessels. The inside of the blade is supported with a thermo-conductive inner lining that makes it easy to imbue the weapon with one's chakra, specifically Fire Release Chakra.
Power: 500
Endurance: 500
Ability:


Major Ability | Chakra Storage - The user is able to store chakra into the Gurētosō in order to increase its power and endurance. The user may flow chakra into the blade and store it for as long as they choose, releasing it later. The user can use their own chakra in order to do this, however their chakra stores are depleted according to the amount they expend into the swords for five turns before returning to normal. The swords strength and endurance increase by the exact amount stored into them. Also, they return to their normal stats after the topic in which they are used is complete. The blade takes on the natural affinity of the user's chakra so the user has an Fire Release Affinity then the blade will burn its victims but if the user has a Lightning Affinity, it's victims can be shocked or be harmed by lightning's numbing effects.  

*For every 2 chakra stored, 1 strength and endurance is added to the sword.
*Max stat boost of 250 for each stat
*The sword may use the stat boost form the chakra release for a single topic; after that its stats go back to normal.
*The elemental effects of the blade only last one turn.

Cost: [Grand Opening Bonus | Free S-rank slot] + 8000 ryo for Major Ability

Requirements:

Must be a bukijutsu master
Must have at least 200 strength to lift the weapon
Must train at least 1000 words with the weapon to use it the weapon properly


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on Mon Jun 27, 2016 8:03 am
Kokoro wrote:Name: Gurētosō | Great Saw
Rank: S
Type: Sword
Materials: Chakra-Refined Steel + Tungsten + Thermal Conductive inner lining of Brass and Copper
Visual Description:


A very odd weapon crafted by Kokoro's own hand, this enormous sword is about 5 feet in length from its edge to the tip of its pommel, measuring a foot and a half wide and five inches thick. The bladed side of the weapon isn't pointed or even sharp. The weapon has a very long pommel that extends to a massive blade, reinforced with layers of flame-imbued steel and tungsten over the Steel blade and exposed on its flat end, giving way for massive serrated edges looking like a giant saw-like knife. The curved end of the Gurētosō has many folds of  Chakra-Enhanced Steel and Fire-imbued Tungsten braided over its blade, making it a very powerful blunt object and to clash with blades, hammers and jutsu alike without breaking, acting as a powerful defense and an even more powerful offense but the true danger of the weapon is its serrated edges on its opposite side, which are exposed on the opposite, flat end. These edges can be used to saw through an opponent or shred a victims body to pieces. Even if the victim isn't killed, the wounds created from this blade could have permanent effects on its victims since the blade can cut through bones and even through the chakra system vessels. The inside of the blade is supported with a thermo-conductive inner lining that makes it easy to imbue the weapon with one's chakra, specifically Fire Release Chakra.
Power: 500
Endurance: 500
Ability:


Chakra Storage - The user is able to store chakra into the Gurētosō in order to increase its power and endurance. The user may flow chakra into the blade and store it for as long as they choose, releasing it later. The user can use their own chakra in order to do this, however their chakra stores are depleted according to the amount they expend into the swords for five turns before returning to normal. The swords strength and endurance increase by the exact amount stored into them. Also, they return to their normal stats after the topic in which they are used is complete. The blade takes on the natural affinity of the user's chakra so the user has an Fire Release Affinity then the blade will burn its victims but if the user has a Lightning Affinity, it's victims can be shocked or be harmed by lightning's numbing effects.  

*For every 2 chakra stored, 1 strength and endurance is added to the sword.
*Max stat boost of 500 for each stat
*The sword may use the stat boost form the chakra release for a single topic; after that its stats go back to normal.

Cost: 16,000 ryo

Requirements:

Must be a bukijutsu master
Must have at least 200 strength to lift the weapon
Must train at least 1000 words with the weapon to use it the weapon properly

Nicely done, but per the rules chakra storing on a weapon caps at 250, thus edits will need to be made. Chakra storing is considered a Major ability, please label as such. Also, your pricing is off: 8,500 (Weapon) + 8,000 (Major Ability). Lastly, give a 1 post value for the numbing effect.
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on Mon Jun 27, 2016 8:29 am
Kokoro wrote:Name: Gurētosō | Great Saw
Rank: S
Type: Sword
Materials: Chakra-Refined Steel + Tungsten + Thermal Conductive inner lining of Brass and Copper
Visual Description:


A very odd weapon crafted by Kokoro's own hand, this enormous sword is about 5 feet in length from its edge to the tip of its pommel, measuring a foot and a half wide and five inches thick. The bladed side of the weapon isn't pointed or even sharp. The weapon has a very long pommel that extends to a massive blade, reinforced with layers of flame-imbued steel and tungsten over the Steel blade and exposed on its flat end, giving way for massive serrated edges looking like a giant saw-like knife. The curved end of the Gurētosō has many folds of  Chakra-Enhanced Steel and Fire-imbued Tungsten braided over its blade, making it a very powerful blunt object and to clash with blades, hammers and jutsu alike without breaking, acting as a powerful defense and an even more powerful offense but the true danger of the weapon is its serrated edges on its opposite side, which are exposed on the opposite, flat end. These edges can be used to saw through an opponent or shred a victims body to pieces. Even if the victim isn't killed, the wounds created from this blade could have permanent effects on its victims since the blade can cut through bones and even through the chakra system vessels. The inside of the blade is supported with a thermo-conductive inner lining that makes it easy to imbue the weapon with one's chakra, specifically Fire Release Chakra.
Power: 500
Endurance: 500
Ability:


Major Ability | Chakra Storage - The user is able to store chakra into the Gurētosō in order to increase its power and endurance. The user may flow chakra into the blade and store it for as long as they choose, releasing it later. The user can use their own chakra in order to do this, however their chakra stores are depleted according to the amount they expend into the swords for five turns before returning to normal. The swords strength and endurance increase by the exact amount stored into them. Also, they return to their normal stats after the topic in which they are used is complete. The blade takes on the natural affinity of the user's chakra so the user has an Fire Release Affinity then the blade will burn its victims but if the user has a Lightning Affinity, it's victims can be shocked or be harmed by lightning's numbing effects.  

*For every 2 chakra stored, 1 strength and endurance is added to the sword.
*Max stat boost of 250 for each stat
*The sword may use the stat boost form the chakra release for a single topic; after that its stats go back to normal.
*The elemental effects of the blade only last one turn.

Cost: [Grand Opening Bonus | Free S-rank slot] + 8000 ryo for Major Ability

Requirements:

Must be a bukijutsu master
Must have at least 200 strength to lift the weapon
Must train at least 1000 words with the weapon to use it the weapon properly

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