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Damarugōsuto no Kyuuryou || The Silent Ghost of the Hill

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on Mon Jun 20, 2016 10:34 am

Name:  Damarugōsuto no Kyuuryou || The Silent Ghost of the Hill
Rank: S
Power: 500
Endurance: 249
Mobility: 126 | 1 + 125
Description: The first of its kind, a puppet specifically tailored for an Iryo-Ninjutsu specialist crafted from the body of a human male whose soul is no longer bound to the physical realm, in its place something much darker was left. The living male once stood at six feet three inches and was coupled with one hundred and eighty pounds, all of which now was nothing more than dead weight and muscle. Bare backed and bare foot, the only form of clothing was a lengthy piece of cloth covering the lower half of his body.

Weapon Attachments:
Name: Red Pyramid
Rank: S
Type: Item
Materials: N/A
Visual Description:  The product of modern engineering and shinobi application, the "Red Pyramid" is much more than its triangular pyramid design and blood tarnished outward appearance. Inflicted by a curse seal, The tetrahedron serves as a prison bound to the "head" of the puppet, removal would require proper Juinjutsu countermeasures, otherwise inflicting the assailant with a Curse. The two forward facing faces of the pyramid are congruent and measuring at four and a half feet each, whilst the back measures three and a half feet, the bottom face measuring four and a half feet. With the exception of the "head", the inside of the pyramid is hollow although there are twenty-one different slots and compartments within the interior used to store numerous hand held items, poisons, etc…
Power: +125
Durability: 575 | 500 + 75
Ability: "Otherworld" - Major Ability - This ability stems from the Curse inflicted on the Red Pyramid by the Curse Seal which is only activated when foreign chakra touches the body of the Puppet. Upon being activated by chakra, the Puppet's body will fall lifeless and unable to be used with any type of chakra, thus making the Puppet technique unusable due to having to use chakra strings. Seemingly, this turns the puppet into nothing more than a rag doll… Although one with a cursed soul bound to it… Per the ability, an intangible and ethereal manifestation of the Puppet's body and anything on its person will appear in the visual sights of whoever's foreign chakra touched the Puppet for the remainder of the topic. Like a cursed soul, the manifestation is bound for all eternity to the body, thus it can not move outside of a one meter radius of the body. In the event that the assailant neglects the fact of the ethereal manifestation and he/she comes within reach of it the cursed soul will try all means to strike/touch its target, this then causes a 10 LF depletion. To rid themselves of the curse the target must lick the P.E.T.Per the rules, 12 chakra must be paid every 2 turns. Per my handicap, no more than 10 LF can be depleted per post regardless of the strikes or touches.
Cost: 8,000 Ryo
Requirements: Cursed Seal Knowledge + 5 - Kugujutsu + 5 - Bukijutsu

Name: Prehensile Elongated Tongue
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Materials: N/A
Visual Description: The tongue is much like that of a lizard in the sense that it is capable of extending out (15 M) wrapping around and grasping most objects. Its housed inside the interior of the Red Pyramid where it appears to get its salivating effect.
Power: N/A
Durability: 500
Ability: Saliva Gallery - Major Ability - The P.E.T. is unique in the sense that through proper Iryo-Ninjutsu chakra being channeled through the Puppet it allows it to change the properties of its saliva exhibited when being touched by it. Per the rules, requires 12 chakra every 2 posts. Per my handicap, switching between types of saliva requires an extra 6 chakra and the user can not use the Saliva Effects when the Otherworld ability is active.

  • Acidic Saliva | The Acidic Saliva is capable of breaking down and destroying defenses, it has a strength of 300.
  • Paralytic Saliva | The Paralytic Saliva is capable of paralyzing a target when they come in contact with it. The saliva can paralize 0-250 endurance for two turns. 251-400 for one turn. Anything above that is not paralyzed by it.
  • Adhesive Saliva | The Adhesive Saliva is capable of causing the a target to become stuck to what ever is being bridged by the saliva, it has a strength of 300. The Saliva dries after 1 post, thus reducing the strength by half.  

Cost: 8,500 Ryo
Requirements: 5 - Iryo-Ninjutsu + 5 - Bukijutsu


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on Fri Jun 24, 2016 4:35 pm
Setō wrote:

Name:  Damarugōsuto no Kyuuryou || The Silent Ghost of the Hill
Rank: S
Power: 625 | 500 + 125
Endurance: 249
Mobility: 126 | 1 + 125
Description: The first of its kind, a puppet specifically tailored for an Iryo-Ninjutsu specialist crafted from the body of a human male whose soul is no longer bound to the physical realm, in its place something much darker was left. The living male once stood at six feet three inches and was coupled with one hundred and eighty pounds, all of which now was nothing more than dead weight and muscle. Bare backed and bare foot, the only form of clothing was a lengthy piece of cloth covering the lower half of his body.

Weapon Attachments:
Name: Red Pyramid
Rank: S
Type: Item
Materials: N/A
Visual Description:  The product of modern engineering and shinobi application, the "Red Pyramid" is much more than its triangular pyramid design and blood tarnished outward appearance. Inflicted by a curse seal, The tetrahedron serves as a prison bound to the "head" of the puppet, removal would require proper Juinjutsu countermeasures, otherwise inflicting the assailant with a Curse. The two forward facing faces of the pyramid are congruent and measuring at four and a half feet each, whilst the back measures three and a half feet, the bottom face measuring four and a half feet. With the exception of the "head", the inside of the pyramid is hollow although there are twenty-one different slots and compartments within the interior used to store numerous hand held items, poisons, etc…
Power: +125
Durability: 575 | 500 + 75
Ability: "Otherworld" - Major Ability - This ability stems from the Curse inflicted on the Red Pyramid by the Curse Seal which is only activated when foreign chakra touches the body of the Puppet. Upon being activated by chakra, the Puppet's body will fall lifeless and unable to be used with any type of chakra, thus making the Puppet technique unusable due to having to use chakra strings. Seemingly, this turns the puppet into nothing more than a rag doll… Although one with a cursed soul bound to it… Per the ability, an intangible and ethereal manifestation of the Puppet's body and anything on its person will appear in the visual sights of whoever's foreign chakra touched the Puppet for the remainder of the topic. Like a cursed soul, the manifestation is bound for all eternity to the body, thus it can not move outside of a one meter radius of the body. In the event that the assailant neglects the fact of the ethereal manifestation and he/she comes within reach of it the cursed soul will try all means to strike/touch its target, this then causes a 10 LF depletion. To rid themselves of the curse the target must lick the P.E.T.Per the rules, 12 chakra must be paid every 2 turns. Per my handicap, no more than 10 LF can be depleted per post regardless of the strikes or touches.
Cost: 8,000 Ryo
Requirements: Cursed Seal Knowledge + 5 - Kugujutsu + 5 - Bukijutsu

You cannot attach items to puppets; only Puppet attachments.

Name: Prehensile Elongated Tongue
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Materials: N/A
Visual Description: The tongue is much like that of a lizard in the sense that it is capable of extending out (15 M) wrapping around and grasping most objects. Its housed inside the interior of the Red Pyramid where it appears to get its salivating effect.
Power: N/A
Durability: 500
Ability: Saliva Gallery - Major Ability - The P.E.T. is unique in the sense that through proper Iryo-Ninjutsu chakra being channeled through the Puppet it allows it to change the properties of its saliva exhibited when being touched by it. Per the rules, requires 12 chakra every 2 posts. Per my handicap, switching between types of saliva requires an extra 6 chakra and the user can not use the Saliva Effects when the Otherworld ability is active.

  • Acidic Saliva | The Acidic Saliva is capable of breaking down and destroying defenses, its power is equivalent to the power of the puppet.
  • Paralytic Saliva | The Paralytic Saliva is capable of paralyzing a target when they come in contact with it. 1 Post.
  • Adhesive Saliva | The Adhesive Saliva is capable of causing the a target to become stuck to what ever is being bridged by the saliva, the saliva's strength is equivalent to the puppet's. The Saliva dries after 1 post, thus reducing the strength by half.

Cost: 8,500 Ryo
Requirements: 5 - Iryo-Ninjutsu + 5 - Bukijutsu

1. The acidic saliva is not as powerful as the puppet.

2. Parasitic saliva - sure. What level of endurance can it affect and not affect?

3. Saliva does not have power of puppet; and you can only attach puppetry attachments to puppets; not just pure weapons per the system I believe.

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on Sat Jun 25, 2016 11:57 am
1. Changed to 300 Strength
2. Changed Endurance:
- Medical Ninjutsu Novice | +451 Endurance, affected 3 posts
- Medical Ninjutsu Apprentice | 450 Endurance, affected 3 posts
- Medical Ninjutsu Adept | 400 Endurance, affected 2 posts
- Medical Ninjutsu Master | 350 Endurance, affected 2 posts
- Medical Ninjutsu God | 300 Endurance, affected 1 post
3. The tongue can be compared to a cord (On the Puppet Rules) which is capable of being elongated and retracted, the saliva is apart of the ability produced from medical chakra, thus this should be fine.
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on Wed Jun 29, 2016 10:14 am
Setō wrote:1. Changed to 300 Strength
2. Changed Endurance:
- Medical Ninjutsu Novice | +451 Endurance, affected 3 posts
- Medical Ninjutsu Apprentice | 450 Endurance, affected 3 posts
- Medical Ninjutsu Adept | 400 Endurance, affected 2 posts
- Medical Ninjutsu Master | 350 Endurance, affected 2 posts
- Medical Ninjutsu God | 300 Endurance, affected 1 post
3. The tongue can be compared to a cord (On the Puppet Rules) which is capable of being elongated and retracted, the saliva is apart of the ability produced from medical chakra, thus this should be fine.

I don't understand your endurance chart. I just need to know which level of strength or endurance the tongue can paralyze, and for how long. I'm not sure what your medical skill has to do with it.
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on Wed Jun 29, 2016 3:19 pm
I edited it to this:
- Medical Ninjutsu Novice | 200 Endurance, affected 1 Post
- Medical Ninjutsu Apprentice | 250 Endurance, affected 1 post
- Medical Ninjutsu Adept | 300 Endurance, affected 1 post
- Medical Ninjutsu Master | 350 Endurance, affected 2 posts
- Medical Ninjutsu God | 400 Endurance, affected 2 posts

Endurance Chart Breakdown:
- Medical Ninjutsu Novice can paralyze Endurances of 200 for 1 post.
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on Thu Jun 30, 2016 8:56 pm
Setō wrote:I edited it to this:
- Medical Ninjutsu Novice | 200 Endurance, affected 1 Post
- Medical Ninjutsu Apprentice | 250 Endurance, affected 1 post
- Medical Ninjutsu Adept | 300 Endurance, affected 1 post
- Medical Ninjutsu Master | 350 Endurance, affected 2 posts
- Medical Ninjutsu God | 400 Endurance, affected 2 posts

Endurance Chart Breakdown:
- Medical Ninjutsu Novice can paralyze Endurances of 200 for 1 post.

Ok. Since you are likely already a medical master or soon to become one and this is YOUR puppet - lets just cut to the chase.

The saliva can paralize 0-250 endurance for two turns. 251-400 for one turn. Anything above that is not paralyzed by it.

Also, I need your other two salivas to make sense. They are not the power of the puppet; and remember these are attachments. So they have their own distinct and static power. Pleaes give them a static power that make sense so I can approve. Also, remember only puppet attachments to this puppet. So I hope the Pyramid or whatever is a SEPARATE thing.
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on Fri Jul 01, 2016 7:11 am
I edited in what you said verbatim.
I also gave the salivas a static power of 300, so they should make sense to You now.

The pyramid is a plated helmet, a form of armor, Ever which allowed in the rules. All I did was give the helmet an ability. Please, stop trying to make it into something its not or seeing it as something other than its not whether you're doing it on purpose or not. It's a HELMET to used to protect the PUPPET'S head.
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on Fri Jul 01, 2016 10:27 am
Setō wrote:I edited in what you said verbatim.
I also gave the salivas a static power of 300, so they should make sense to You now.

The pyramid is a plated helmet, a form of armor, Ever which allowed in the rules. All I did was give the helmet an ability. Please, stop trying to make it into something its not or seeing it as something other than its not whether you're doing it on purpose or not. It's a HELMET to used to protect the PUPPET'S head.

Mother trucker, you used the word ITEM; so I assumed it was an item. Make it have the stats of a puppet attachment so I don't get confused; you know I am not smart.

Also, its not just a helmet - its a helmet with a demon sealed inside of it Lol not that I mind cause I think that kind of stuff is cute.

Anywho, I am assuming that if someone neglects to write that they saw the ghost once they touch the puppet - loses the ten life force.
That works and that is cool.

I need the Pyramid to have puppet attachment stats if it is a puppet attachment - per the rules, puppets can only have those attached to them. Correct me if I am wrong and I will cut my nuts off and auto-approve.

^Edit that if I am right and I will give you your stamp.
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on Fri Jul 01, 2016 10:50 am
The Pyramid does have puppet attachment stats, 500. +75 comes from the item bonus in the rules.

The +125 is the max boost that is given to puppets, thus I added that to Mobility 126 |125 + 1

*Grabs the giant pair of Scissors for the castration*

Gimme my stamp of approval!
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on Fri Jul 01, 2016 10:57 am
Setō wrote:The Pyramid does have puppet attachment stats, 500. +75 comes from the item bonus in the rules.

The +125 is the max boost that is given to puppets, thus I added that to Mobility 126 |125 + 1

*Grabs the giant pair of Scissors for the castration*

Gimme my stamp of approval!

Next time make it clear that this is giving this specific puppet its major and only stat boost. I am keeping my jewels.

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