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on Wed Aug 31, 2016 7:09 pm
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:

Name: General of Gold
Rank: B
Description:  Imposing and characteristically beautiful, the Golden General exhibits all the same marks of inhumanly expert craftsmanship as do the rest of the puppets owned by the demon eyed puppeteer. Spanning just over two meters in height and one and three-fourths meters in width, the puppet's large size belies its impressive speed. The main body consists of a large, bulbous, pale blue thorax, above which the insect's abdomen is covered with white fur, six small, black arms peaking out from the fluffy exterior. The head, a dark charcoal, contains two huge, compound eyes of a crystalline blue and, on each side, two large, dark brown feather-like protrusions which frame the face, appearing somewhat like an elegant crown.

Most notably, the puppet possess six massive wings which somewhat resemble huge, brightly colored autumnal leaves of a reddish orange hue, run through with shots of gold which appear like veins. The huge wings make up most of the puppet's lateral size and grant it flight, its most common mode of transportation. At the rear, between the wings, is nestled a small standing platform where the master may stand, leaning into the main body of the puppet as he flies with its creation, though its arms are fully capable of lifting him others as well.
Power: 50
Endurance: 525 (400+125)
Mobility: 51

Embrace of the Goddess, Favor and Protection:

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary Mainframe Augmentation (Item)
Materials: Materials
Visual Description: A defensive feat of engineering genius, this construction technique imbues the chosen fabric of a puppet with remarkable protection, granting it a huge boost in its defensive nature. Said to result from the binding of a powerful being's soul to the construction material, this augments the material to the highest possible levels, granting it increased abilities to absorb damage with minimal wear and tear. The exact construction can vary depending on the shape and make of the puppet in question, but in general it proves particularly effective against bladed weaponry, though in the case of this puppet, it's about equal between crushing and piercing damage.  
Power: N/A
Durability: N/A
Ability: Medium; grants 125 endurance
Cost: 6000
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu

Fiery Dance:

Rank: S
Type: Item
Materials: Inner Fire
Visual Description: The primary onboard weapon of the puppet, this system occupies the majority of its innards. This system, comprised of a terribly elaborate sealing formula, generates, once activated, what appears to be a vast swarm of hundreds of small, four to six inch butterflies comprised entirely of fire. Truly made of pure chakra which remains under the full control of the main puppet body, these small wisps can quickly swarm the battlefield, seeking out primarily other weapons and puppets. Once they alight upon another weapon, they merge into  and immediately begin sealing it, trapping its powers and preventing chakra from flowing into it, effectively disabling any special abilities, chakra flow, or specialized bukijutsu techniques from working in tandem with the affected implement. In the case of opposing puppets, this blocks the affected area from receiving controlling impulses from the controller and, once the majority of the body is covered, completely prevents strings from attaching to it, rendering it inert. Weapons cursed with this ability can still be swung about normally, even after their abilities are sealed, but double in weight for each butterfly which taints the item.
Power: N/A
Durability: N/A
Ability: [Major] See above
Cost: 8000
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu

1. They can only use this affect on weapons correct?

2. What is the power and speed of these flies?

3. There needs to be a level of power of weapon that this does not work on, and to what degree this works on weapons of a certain power; since nullifying every affect of a weapon isn't realistic.

4. Making it heavier? Specify that. It does not double in weight per butterfly if there are hundreds, and it needs to make holding the weapon require a higher strength level. This might need to be a separate ability.




Levitate:

Rank: D
Type: Weapon/Item
Materials: Wings
Visual Description: Due to the construction of this puppet, it can fly. Through wings of other forms of propulsion, this puppet soars above the terrain and is uninhibited by rocky landscapes and the like. Most certainly a boon in most any situation, the puppet flies at the same speed it would otherwise normally move.
Cost: 1000
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu

1. It flies at its base speed, if you want the boost from your puppetry skill, do know that you will need strings attached to it of course.

Flame Body:

Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Materials: Ink
Visual Description: A sealing array spread all about the puppet's body, this glorified chakra draining seal forces the puppet into a constant state of chakra absorption, meaning that anything other than the user and anyone he deems safe shall, upon contact with the puppet or any of its abilities, lose one hundred chakra per turn. The puppet does not store this chakra in anyway, though, but instead burns it up, automatically purifying it and converting it into a super heated aura which emanates from the hard exoskeleton of the creature. This sweltering aura increases in power directly proportional to the chakra which it absorbs and reduces the power of incoming attacks by an amount equal to the total power of the aura. As previously stated, this ability is always active and begins, without additional energy input, at base power of fifty. This ability cannot, of course, absorb chakra which has already been converted into a physical form, such as that of the earth release. The user can, through contact or chakra strings, transfer chakra to the puppet to be used for this ability.
Power: N/A
Durability: N/A
Ability: [Major] See Above
Cost: 8000
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu

1. If you want to reduce power of incoming attacks, you lose the aura.

TBA:

Rank: D
Type: Item
Materials:
Visual Description:
Power: N/A
Durability: N/A
Ability:
Cost: ---
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu




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on Wed Aug 31, 2016 7:30 pm
1. They can only seal the powers of weapons, puppets, weapon like things of that sort.

2. Power added. Speed is the same as the puppet I suppose.

3. Added a stacking effect to determine sealing rate and such.

4. Edited.


1. This is already specified. It won't fly without strings.


1. This is the only purpose of the aura.


*I assume Shapeless Yellow is fine.
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on Wed Aug 31, 2016 7:36 pm
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:

Name: General of Gold
Rank: B
Description:  Imposing and characteristically beautiful, the Golden General exhibits all the same marks of inhumanly expert craftsmanship as do the rest of the puppets owned by the demon eyed puppeteer. Spanning just over two meters in height and one and three-fourths meters in width, the puppet's large size belies its impressive speed. The main body consists of a large, bulbous, pale blue thorax, above which the insect's abdomen is covered with white fur, six small, black arms peaking out from the fluffy exterior. The head, a dark charcoal, contains two huge, compound eyes of a crystalline blue and, on each side, two large, dark brown feather-like protrusions which frame the face, appearing somewhat like an elegant crown.

Most notably, the puppet possess six massive wings which somewhat resemble huge, brightly colored autumnal leaves of a reddish orange hue, run through with shots of gold which appear like veins. The huge wings make up most of the puppet's lateral size and grant it flight, its most common mode of transportation. At the rear, between the wings, is nestled a small standing platform where the master may stand, leaning into the main body of the puppet as he flies with its creation, though its arms are fully capable of lifting him others as well.
Power: 50
Endurance: 525 (400+125)
Mobility: 51

Embrace of the Goddess, Favor and Protection:

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary Mainframe Augmentation (Item)
Materials: Materials
Visual Description: A defensive feat of engineering genius, this construction technique imbues the chosen fabric of a puppet with remarkable protection, granting it a huge boost in its defensive nature. Said to result from the binding of a powerful being's soul to the construction material, this augments the material to the highest possible levels, granting it increased abilities to absorb damage with minimal wear and tear. The exact construction can vary depending on the shape and make of the puppet in question, but in general it proves particularly effective against bladed weaponry, though in the case of this puppet, it's about equal between crushing and piercing damage.  
Power: N/A
Durability: N/A
Ability: Medium; grants 125 endurance
Cost: 6000
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu

Fiery Dance:

Rank: S
Type: Item
Materials: Inner Fire
Visual Description: The primary onboard weapon of the puppet, this system occupies the majority of its innards. This system, comprised of a terribly elaborate sealing formula, generates, once activated, what appears to be a vast swarm of hundreds of small, four to six inch butterflies comprised entirely of fire. Truly made of pure chakra which remains under the full control of the main puppet body, these small wisps can quickly swarm the battlefield, seeking out primarily other weapons and puppets. Once they alight upon another weapon, they merge into  and immediately begin sealing it, trapping its powers and preventing chakra from flowing into it, effectively disabling any special abilities, chakra flow, or specialized bukijutsu techniques from working in tandem with the affected implement. In the case of opposing puppets, this blocks the affected area from receiving controlling impulses from the controller and, once the majority of the body is covered, completely prevents strings from attaching to it, rendering it inert. Weapons cursed with this ability can still be swung about normally, even after their abilities are sealed, but increase in weight for each butterfly which taints the item.
Power: 500
Durability: N/A
Ability: [Major] See above. The Number of butterflies required to fully seal a weapon depend on the rank of the weapon in question. Five butterflies are required per increasing rank of weapon, beginning at E and proceeding up to S. For each butterfly which attaches to a weapon, the user will require an additional five strength to wield it.
Cost: 8000
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu

1. Please make the TWO abilities that are on this item. The sealing of buki techs is an ability in and of itself.

2. IF you want each butterfly that lands on the weapon to increase the weight by five or whatev, I need you to give me a static number of the butterflies.

3. Techniques of higher power than the butterflies can be pulsed through the weapons, and I need a certain number of flies to get on a weapon before it is disabled from chakra flow; and have it be an amount per the power of the weapon itself.


Levitate:

Rank: D
Type: Weapon/Item
Materials: Wings
Visual Description: Due to the construction of this puppet, it can fly. Through wings of other forms of propulsion, this puppet soars above the terrain and is uninhibited by rocky landscapes and the like. Most certainly a boon in most any situation, the puppet flies at the same speed it would otherwise normally move.
Cost: 1000
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu

Flame Body:

Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Materials: Ink
Visual Description: A sealing array spread all about the puppet's body, this glorified chakra draining seal forces the puppet into a constant state of chakra absorption, meaning that anything other than the user and anyone he deems safe shall, upon contact with the puppet or any of its abilities, lose one hundred chakra per turn. The puppet does not store this chakra in anyway, though, but instead burns it up, automatically purifying it and converting it into a super heated aura which emanates from the hard exoskeleton of the creature. This sweltering aura increases in power directly proportional to the chakra which it absorbs and reduces the power of incoming attacks by an amount equal to the total power of the aura. As previously stated, this ability is always active and begins, without additional energy input, at base power of fifty. This ability cannot, of course, absorb chakra which has already been converted into a physical form, such as that of the earth release. The user can, through contact or chakra strings, transfer chakra to the puppet to be used for this ability.
Power: N/A
Durability: N/A
Ability: [Major] See Above
Cost: 8000
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu

TBA:

Rank: D
Type: Item
Materials:
Visual Description:
Power: N/A
Durability: N/A
Ability:
Cost: ---
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu




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on Wed Aug 31, 2016 7:49 pm
1. Split.

2. Added.

3. I do not know what you mean by "pulsed through" the weapon. This seals the abilities of the weapon. That is its primary purpose. The number of butterflies needed to seal the weapon has already been included.
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on Wed Aug 31, 2016 8:05 pm
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:

Name: General of Gold
Rank: B
Description:  Imposing and characteristically beautiful, the Golden General exhibits all the same marks of inhumanly expert craftsmanship as do the rest of the puppets owned by the demon eyed puppeteer. Spanning just over two meters in height and one and three-fourths meters in width, the puppet's large size belies its impressive speed. The main body consists of a large, bulbous, pale blue thorax, above which the insect's abdomen is covered with white fur, six small, black arms peaking out from the fluffy exterior. The head, a dark charcoal, contains two huge, compound eyes of a crystalline blue and, on each side, two large, dark brown feather-like protrusions which frame the face, appearing somewhat like an elegant crown.

Most notably, the puppet possess six massive wings which somewhat resemble huge, brightly colored autumnal leaves of a reddish orange hue, run through with shots of gold which appear like veins. The huge wings make up most of the puppet's lateral size and grant it flight, its most common mode of transportation. At the rear, between the wings, is nestled a small standing platform where the master may stand, leaning into the main body of the puppet as he flies with its creation, though its arms are fully capable of lifting him others as well.
Power: 50
Endurance: 525 (400+125)
Mobility: 51

Embrace of the Goddess, Favor and Protection:

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary Mainframe Augmentation (Item)
Materials: Materials
Visual Description: A defensive feat of engineering genius, this construction technique imbues the chosen fabric of a puppet with remarkable protection, granting it a huge boost in its defensive nature. Said to result from the binding of a powerful being's soul to the construction material, this augments the material to the highest possible levels, granting it increased abilities to absorb damage with minimal wear and tear. The exact construction can vary depending on the shape and make of the puppet in question, but in general it proves particularly effective against bladed weaponry, though in the case of this puppet, it's about equal between crushing and piercing damage.  
Power: N/A
Durability: N/A
Ability: Medium; grants 125 endurance
Cost: 6000
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu

Fiery Dance:

Rank: S
Type: Item
Materials: Inner Fire
Visual Description: The primary onboard weapon of the puppet, this system occupies the majority of its innards. This system, comprised of a terribly elaborate sealing formula, generates, once activated, what appears to be a vast swarm of up to one thousand four to six inch butterflies comprised entirely of fire. Truly made of pure chakra which remains under the full control of the main puppet body, these small wisps can quickly swarm the battlefield, seeking out primarily other weapons and puppets. Once they alight upon another weapon, they merge into  and immediately begin sealing it, trapping its powers and preventing chakra from flowing into it, effectively disabling any special abilities, chakra flow, or specialized bukijutsu techniques from working in tandem with the affected implement. In the case of opposing puppets, this blocks the affected area from receiving controlling impulses from the controller and, once the majority of the body is covered, completely prevents strings from attaching to it, rendering it inert. Weapons cursed with this ability can still be swung about normally, even after their abilities are sealed, but increase in weight for each butterfly which taints the item.
Power: 500
Durability: N/A
Ability: [Major] See above. The Number of butterflies required to fully seal a weapon depend on the rank of the weapon in question. Five butterflies are required per increasing rank of weapon, beginning at E and proceeding up to S.
Cost: 8000
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu

" one thousand four to six inch butterflies comprised entirely of fire. Truly made of pure chakra which remains under the full control of the main puppet body, these small wisps can quickly swarm the battlefield, seeking out primarily other weapons and puppets. Once they alight upon another weapon, they merge into  and immediately begin sealing it, trapping its powers and preventing chakra from flowing into it, effectively disabling any special abilities, chakra flow, or specialized bukijutsu techniques from working in tandem with the affected implement. In the case of opposing puppets, this blocks the affected area from receiving controlling impulses from the controller and, once the majority of the body is covered, completely prevents strings from attaching to it, rendering it inert. "


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1. IF they are made of fire I assume a weakness to water.
2. They can be absorbed by intermediate chakra absorbers since they are made of chakra.
3. Lol a thousand? How many need to be on the actual weapon for its powers to be sealed?
4. There needs to be a chakra cost or cost of some kind to keep these active for obvious reasons. 1,000 500-power butterflies at S rank puppet speed that can shut down weapons?
I'll give it to you; but please give me a reasonable cost to maintain them active, and less than 1,000 of them. The more flies you have, the more I will require be on a weapon before it is lobotomized.


Levitate:

Rank: D
Type: Weapon/Item
Materials: Wings
Visual Description: Due to the construction of this puppet, it can fly. Through wings of other forms of propulsion, this puppet soars above the terrain and is uninhibited by rocky landscapes and the like. Most certainly a boon in most any situation, the puppet flies at the same speed it would otherwise normally move.
Cost: 1000
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu

Flame Body:

Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Materials: Ink
Visual Description: A sealing array spread all about the puppet's body, this glorified chakra draining seal forces the puppet into a constant state of chakra absorption, meaning that anything other than the user and anyone he deems safe shall, upon contact with the puppet or any of its abilities, lose one hundred chakra per turn. The puppet does not store this chakra in anyway, though, but instead burns it up, automatically purifying it and converting it into a super heated aura which emanates from the hard exoskeleton of the creature. This sweltering aura increases in power directly proportional to the chakra which it absorbs and reduces the power of incoming attacks by an amount equal to the total power of the aura. As previously stated, this ability is always active and begins, without additional energy input, at base power of fifty. This ability cannot, of course, absorb chakra which has already been converted into a physical form, such as that of the earth release. The user can, through contact or chakra strings, transfer chakra to the puppet to be used for this ability.
Power: N/A
Durability: N/A
Ability: [Major] See Above
Cost: 8000
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu

Gravity:

Rank: D
Type: Item
Materials:
Visual Description: Above
Power: N/A
Durability: N/A
Ability: Medium: When the butterflies of the Fiery Dance technique land upon a weapon, in addition to attempting to seal its abilities and block its receptiveness to chakra, they also further hinder them by increasing the weight of the afflicted instrument. Each butterfly which is upon the weapon shall increase the strength needed to use that weapon by five.
Cost: 6000
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu




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on Wed Aug 31, 2016 9:22 pm
1. As stated, they are not made of fire.

2. Sure.

3. Numerical amount of butterflies required to seal a weapon is stated.

4. I did not know that puppet attachments required chakra. Added a chakra cost.
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on Fri Sep 02, 2016 7:56 pm
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:1. As stated, they are not made of fire.

2. Sure.

3. Numerical amount of butterflies required to seal a weapon is stated.

4. I did not know that puppet attachments required chakra. Added a chakra cost.

1. "what appears to be a vast swarm of up to one thousand four to six inch butterflies comprised entirely of fire"

^I'm guessing that is just appearance than.

2. You may have 500 of these butterflies. For the reason being that there needs to be a reasonable limit to how many weapons and puppets you can neturalize.

It needs to take ten for E rank weapons, and increase thus as you go up. It is double to take on puppets; and of course, if their endurance is higher than your flies - this does not work.
I will not make you describe how they can be removed etc. I will leave that to your opponents. But just know they can be removed in various ways potentially. We will let the rp decide.

You pay 25 chakra every other turn for these to be actively doing this.

There can be chakra costs for weapon or puppet abilities; which includes attachments.

3. All of a sudden I no longer see the ability to make the weapons heavier (I am looking at the original post as that is the one I am expecting you to edit.
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on Fri Sep 02, 2016 8:08 pm
1. "Truly made of pure chakra"

2. No. 1000 is an already established amount of things that can be created and manipulated for a major ability on a weapon, which this essentially now qualifies as.

Ten to seal E rank and increasing with each rank is perfectly fine and has been added in, as has the double number for puppets. Thank you for the suggestion.

It will work on weapons with higher durability, as the whole purpose of the weapon is that more butterflies equal more sealing. However, if an additional number is required to overcome additional power/endurance, that is also workable

12 chakra every other turn is both the amount listed for major abilities of weapons, which this is, and the cost to specifically manipulate 1000 individual entities generated from a weapon.

3. It has, as previously stated, been split into another ability (all edits have, of course, been made to the original post).
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on Fri Sep 02, 2016 8:24 pm
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:1. "Truly made of pure chakra"

2. No. 1000 is an already established amount of things that can be created and manipulated for a major ability on a weapon, which this essentially now qualifies as.

Ten to seal E rank and increasing with each rank is perfectly fine and has been added in, as has the double number for puppets. Thank you for the suggestion.

It will work on weapons with higher durability, as the whole purpose of the weapon is that more butterflies equal more sealing. However, if an additional number is required to overcome additional power/endurance, that is also workabl.e

12 chakra every other turn is both the amount listed for major abilities of weapons, which this is, and the cost to specifically manipulate 1000 individual entities generated from a weapon.

3. It has, as previously stated, been split into another ability (all edits have, of course, been made to the original post).

1. K, let me be more clear so we can see eye to eye.
You are wielding X amount of butterflies of 500 power and over 500 speed. You will not have a thousand under these same conditions. If you insist on having a thousand, I will insist on a few things as well (which I already think need to change given the high number). And mind you, this is a technique that can shut down puppets and weapons - so please be real with what you think I am going to let you get away with here. It will be massively op, but not without a cost and reasonable limits - that is how I am with most things, but I am willing to make them work for you.

Firstly - if this is a puppet attachment, there is no obligation for its abilities to move at the exact same speed as the puppet itself. Some attachments move at different speeds than their corresponding puppets. So these flies need a capped and finite speed of 350.

Secondly, double what it takes for weapons and puppets if you get one thousand.

20 for E rank weapons
40 for E rank puppets.

120 For S rank Weapons.
240 for S rank puppets.

^^The ability to shut down potentially five puppets or six S rank weapons is extreme and as powerful as anything on the site. Especially moving at this speed and with this power.

2. You do not get to manipulate 1,000 flies at 350 speed and 500 power for 12 chakra every other turn. The rules on major ability weapons cost do not mean that absolutely every ability cannot have a cost higher than that. If that is the case - than that means that the power of things also gets a finite limit (which I am happy to add), and that would make this attachment entirely denied. 1,000 flies? Sure. You do not get them at this speed and power and ability ; that would be denied.

So given that this is an attachment ability of exceeding dimensions - your chakra cost will be higher as is only fair and reasonable.
^If this is a problem, no worries - its denied. You can lower it to something that it actually makes sense to give a chakra cost of 12 every other turn and we can revisit the issue. Otherwise, please make my suggested edits.

3. Can these be used as weapons to harm people physically?

4. I need there to be extra flies required per 50 endurance higher than the power of these flies.
We will say ten flies for every 50 endurance higher than the endurance of the flies. Double that for puppets.
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on Fri Sep 02, 2016 9:17 pm
Ok, before we get any further in this - and if this results in it's denial, so be it - I will apologize because I do not think I have been as clear as I ought to have been.

There is, as of right now, already a weapon with a major ability which allows the manipulation of 1000 objects of over 500 power; which move at 400 speed; which cannot be absorbed through chakra absorption; which can be used to pierce, slice, bind, wrap, manipulate, shield, trap, cage, and a plethora of other things; which cause a 5 post paralysis on anything they slice or pierce; which can, presumably,  be used to channel a vast array of other abilities; and which can, with a very small amount of ingenuity, seal or otherwise render almost entirely useless 1000 puppets or weapons while still performing other functions. All of this costs 12 chakra every other turn.

I do not mean to imply that mine should somehow be automatically accepted blindly because of this, only that I am following by example. A very good example if I had to select from the pool of available examples. And as my ability manipulates the same amount of objects at a slightly higher speed, with less power, endurance, functionality, and affect on a wide range of potential objects and techniques, I see no reason as to why mine should be made arbitrarily weaker and more expensive than something already accepted.

Basically, why can I not manipulate 1000 butterflies at 350 speed and 500 power for 12 chakra when others can manipulate 1000 larger objects at 400 speed, 600 power, and 500 endurance for 12 chakra?

*Side note for speed: the speed of this attachment (and puppets in general) is not even a fixed one; it is entirely dependent, from what I understand, on the user's speed and skill in puppetry.
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on Sat Sep 03, 2016 9:24 am
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Ok, before we get any further in this - and if this results in it's denial, so be it - I will apologize because I do not think I have been as clear as I ought to have been.

There is, as of right now, already a weapon with a major ability which allows the manipulation of 1000 objects of over 500 power; which move at 400 speed; which cannot be absorbed through chakra absorption; which can be used to pierce, slice, bind, wrap, manipulate, shield, trap, cage, and a plethora of other things; which cause a 5 post paralysis on anything they slice or pierce; which can, presumably,  be used to channel a vast array of other abilities; and which can, with a very small amount of ingenuity, seal or otherwise render almost entirely useless 1000 puppets or weapons while still performing other functions. All of this costs 12 chakra every other turn.

I do not mean to imply that mine should somehow be automatically accepted blindly because of this, only that I am following by example. A very good example if I had to select from the pool of available examples. And as my ability manipulates the same amount of objects at a slightly higher speed, with less power, endurance, functionality, and affect on a wide range of potential objects and techniques, I see no reason as to why mine should be made arbitrarily weaker and more expensive than something already accepted.

Basically, why can I not manipulate 1000 butterflies at 350 speed and 500 power for 12 chakra when others can manipulate 1000 larger objects at 400 speed, 600 power, and 500 endurance for 12 chakra?

*Side note for speed: the speed of this attachment (and puppets in general) is not even a fixed one; it is entirely dependent, from what I understand, on the user's speed and skill in puppetry.

I see. I trust you know I am not treating you differently than others; but I do not check everyone's stuff.
Pm me the link to said weapon so I can examine, and it looks like more precise limits to puppet attachments needs to be made; or at the very minimum the cost of said things needs to be increased.
Let me look it over and see what needs to be done.

I know you understand that there needs to be reasonable limits on objects moving that fast, that powerful and with that level of affect. So let me pause for a moment and review this stuff with staff and get back to your puppet. I will do my best to be quick and not let you wait too long. My apologies.

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on Mon Sep 12, 2016 2:05 pm
Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Name: A Most Delicate String
Rank: S
Type: Item
Materials: Cursed Red String
Visual Description:

A small length of twin, commonly wound around a finger, which binds the resurrected soul to the will of the summoner. The actual wrapping is symbolic, for once bound by this, the soul of the once departed is wrapped in a twining of chakra which revitalizes them to their former, living state and forces them into compliance to the commands of the summoner. Uniquely, this cord acts as both versions of the traditional tag. When fully intact, the target in question retains his or her personality and such, though of course must still obey his or her master. Should the strand break or be removed, the inner coil shall tighten, increasing the level of control offered to the master at the expense of the summon's personality. At any time, the user can command the cord to break, resulting in the increased control and, should he feel the necessity, he can replace the cord, reverting the summon to their previous condition.
Endurance: 600
Ability: Minor: As previous stated, this string symbolically binds the recipient to the will of the master who has revived this person through the use of the Edo Tensei technique and restores them to their original capabilities. When fully intact, the target shall retain his or her sentience, though still must comply with the user's command and allows the user to channel his or her senses through the corpse. When broken, either naturally or by the user's command, the revived person shall revert the second version of controlling talisman, which sees their personality erased and increased the fine control the user has over his subject.
Cost: 2975
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu

Purely aesthetic alteration to the above item. Not certain if this actually requires an approval, but it's the same, just a different shape (and a very slightly "different" application method).

Name: Shackle of the Gods
Rank: S
Type: Item
Materials: A strange bone
Visual Description:

A strange fragment of ornamented vertebral bone which binds the resurrected soul to the will of the summoner. The bone, once placed to the flesh of the undead, merges into their spine and revitalizes them to their former, living state and forces them into compliance to the commands of the summoner. Uniquely, this bone acts as both versions of the traditional tag. At any time, the user can command the bone to more closely restrict the mind and soul of his revived body, resulting in total control and, should he feel the necessity, he can loosen the bone once more, reverting the summon to their previous condition.
Endurance: 600
Ability: Minor: As previous stated, this bone symbolically binds the recipient to the will of the master who has revived this person through the use of the Edo Tensei technique and restores them to their original capabilities. Normally, the target shall retain his or her sentience, though still must comply with the user's command and allows the user to channel his or her senses through the corpse. When altered by the will of the user, the revived person shall revert the second version of controlling talisman, which sees their personality erased and increased the fine control the user has over his subject.
Cost: 2975
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu
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on Fri Sep 30, 2016 7:08 pm
Approved unless otherwise stated
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on Sat Oct 15, 2016 9:13 pm
Regrouped and reposted. I don't think anything needs changing?

Jianyu Uchiha wrote:Name: Contact Lenses
Rank: D
Type: Item
Materials: Hydrogel and plastics
Visual Description: Small, soft lenses placed over the eye. They fit snugly and can, if necessary, have a corrective aspect that will aid those with faulty vision, which aids a grand total of zero ninja in existence. They are supernaturally comfortable to the point that they can be worn indefinitely and people often forget they even have them in. Additionally, they are surprisingly durable and can provide a nice bit of protection from particulates that may otherwise enter one's eye.
Power: 0
Endurance: 150
Ability: Ooh Pretty Magic: Minor: With a tiny burst of chakra, the lenses can change color and pattern, allowing the wearer to vainly change the color or appearance of his eyes to anything he sees fit. Costs 5 chakra to alter the lenses and cost must be paid each time the lens is changed.
Cost: 5000
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu


Name: Shenhuo
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Materials:The Flame from which arose all souls
Visual Description: A beautiful, curved blade of a delicate appearance, Shenhou is one of a twin set. The lighter blade bears a strange texture, something akin to wrinkled flesh born of small carvings and raised areas along the flat of the weapon. Between these, in the small crevices, the metal appears a pale yellow which, if one looks very closely, appears to shift and churn, as though the blade contains a flame within it. A touch shorter than a standard katana, the blade reaches only thirty inches and has a lovely, elegant curve to it, the blade extending straight before curving very slightly, creating a small, convex curve relative to the cutting edge. In place of a more traditional cross-guard, the base of the blade sports two small pieces of additional blade jutting upwards at roughly 45 degree angles, which can catch other weapons.
Power: 400
Endurance: 600
Ability:

  • Forbidden Sun: [Major] Releasing the full nature of this blade, the sword super-heats to improbable levels, causing the surrounding atmosphere to instantly become a sweltering inferno of dry heat. The blade in this state, unexpectedly, does not ignite, but rather glows a a whit yellow-red and blurs from the incredibly heat distorting its appearance. In this form, the blade becomes essentially untouchable safe for by its wielder, the heat said to exceed that of the sun. Due to such intense power, when the blade strikes a surface, or is struck by another, it sears and melts that object, reducing its power and endurance by 1/5th. As such, it is said that no other weapon can stand against this, as their edges simply melt into dullness and the primordial flame eventually burns its enemies out of creation. Additionally, this grants the blade one hundred additional power. While in this state, chakra flow works as normal, save for water-based chakra flow, which becomes impossible. Weapons coated with water chakra are much more effective at stopping the blade, reducing the melting effect by half, while weapons coated in wind chakra amplify it, doubling the melting effect. [20 chakra per posts.]

Cost: 16.500
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu

Name: Shapeless Yellow
Rank: C
Description: A rather bizarre, hitherto unheard of incarnation of puppetry genius, Shapeless Yellow is a fully fluid, nonrigid puppet in make and design, comprised entirely of a massive collection of interwoven strips of metallic-cloth weave. Because of this, the puppet has no set form and can, instead, wrap around objects or the puppeteer's body, fitting snugly to the form of whatever it encases. From here, it can act as a sort of armor or, if fitted onto an enemy, can become a kind of restraint device, though it is only large enough to cover about one limb of an average person. Generally worn on an arm like a gauntlet, it remains dormant and hidden, not requiring any sort of chakra input, but also not enabling any sort of reshaping lest the user begins to manipulate it. Most commonly, when the puppet splits from the wielder, it retains the shape of the arm, making the user appear as though he has suddenly grown a new appendage.

Due to the unique construction of the puppet, primarily its remarkable thinness, it cannot realistically house any true weaponry. The individual ribbons of material, because of their makeup, can cause shallow lacerations, though more often than not the puppet simply is worn as an elaborate armor.  
Power: 40
Endurance: 285 [160+125]
Mobility: 200
Weapon Attachments:

  • Favor and Protection:
    Name: Reinforced Construction: Favor and Protection
    Rank: S(?)
    Type: Item
    Materials: Coalesced essence of a twisted soul
    Visual Description: A defensive feat of engineering genius, this construction technique imbues the chosen fabric of a puppet with remarkable protection, granting it a huge boost in its defensive nature. Said to result from the binding of a powerful being's soul to the construction material, this augments the material to the highest possible levels, granting it increased abilities to absorb damage with minimal wear and tear. The exact construction can vary depending on the shape and make of the puppet in question, but in general it proves particularly effective against bladed weaponry, though in the case of Shapeless Yellow - a puppet of a move woven nature - it's about equal between crushing and piercing damage. Additionally, the particular soul affixed to Shapeless Yellow confers flame retardant properties, preventing the puppet from easily catching on fire.
    Power: 0
    Durability: +125
    Ability: Medium
    Cost: 6000
    Requirements:N/A
  • Chakra-Reactive Photo Lacquer:
    Name: Chakra-Reactive Photo Lacquer
    Rank: C
    Type: Item
    Materials: Blood of mad dreamers, bound to a nightmare
    Visual Description: A clear paint-like lacquer applied to the surface of the puppet, this allows the puppeteer to run chakra over the surface, generally via the basic puppet technique, and alter the coloration and apparent texture of the surface. Simple in application and practice, this opens up a near infinite amount of uses.
    Power: N/A
    Durability: N/A
    Ability: [Minor] When galvanized by a small application of chakra, the substance applied to the puppet allows its master to freely change the colors of the puppet's surface. The user can choose, on his whim, to alter the colors in an infinite variety of complexity and can even, should he feel the need to, project scenes of his inner thoughts or visions of the real world onto the surface. This cannot cause the instrument to become invisible, though it can, with careful attention, attempt to make the puppet transparent by projecting the environment behind it onto the front of the machine, resulting in a kind of active camouflage.
    Cost: 1000
    Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu
  • Super Dreadnought Imperial Harbinger of War:

    Rank: C
    Type: Item
    Materials: Pure magic
    Visual Description: A small pocket on the puppet housing an array of sealing formulae, this allows the puppeteer to store a large host of other puppets within this one, proving quite invaluable as he can now summon to him an army at a moment's notice. This mechanism has two states, off and on. In the off state it remains dormant and must be activated by the application of five chakra, which unlocks and opens it. Once opened, puppets can be freely pulled from storage either unaided or by the attachment of chakra strings, allowing them to be manipulated the moment the appear.
    Power: N/A
    Durability: N/A
    Ability: Minor
    Cost: 1000
    Requirements:Transmuted by Jianyu



Name: Shackle of the Gods
Rank: S
Type: Item
Materials: A strange bone
Visual Description:

A strange fragment of ornamented vertebral bone which binds the resurrected soul to the will of the summoner. The bone, once placed to the flesh of the undead, merges into their spine and revitalizes them to their former, living state and forces them into compliance to the commands of the summoner. Uniquely, this bone acts as both versions of the traditional tag. At any time, the user can command the bone to more closely restrict the mind and soul of his revived body, resulting in total control and, should he feel the necessity, he can loosen the bone once more, reverting the summon to their previous condition.
Endurance: 600
Ability: Minor: As previous stated, this bone symbolically binds the recipient to the will of the master who has revived this person through the use of the Edo Tensei technique and restores them to their original capabilities. Normally, the target shall retain his or her sentience, though still must comply with the user's command and allows the user to channel his or her senses through the corpse. When altered by the will of the user, the revived person shall revert the second version of controlling talisman, which sees their personality erased and increased the fine control the user has over his subject.
Cost: 2975
Requirements: Transmuted by Jianyu
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on Tue Nov 01, 2016 5:11 pm
Name: Sword of Totsuka
Rank: S
Type: Legendary Sword
Materials: N/A
Visual Description:

A legendary blade long thought to exist only in myth, the Sword of Totsuka or "sake cutting longsword" as named by a mistranslated, is sword composed almost entirely of an ethereal, liquid-like material. As such, the blade has no true form and can simply be reshaped at the will of the user. When not in use, the spiritual fluid of the sword is stored within a small gourd bottle, making the weapon appear as nothing more than a jar of water when not unleashing its power. Because of its unique form, the blade can not only cut through materials and block attacks as a normal weapon would but can also flow directly through and around enemy weaponry and defenses, making blocking such a strike incredibly difficult.
Power: 2000
Endurance: 1000
Ability:

  • Sake: Minor: The most visible aspect of the blade, this allows it to continually be reshaped and, as previously mentioned, alternate between cutting and flowing, fully using its fluid nature.  (Inherent; no cost)
  • Drunken Dreams: Major: The hallmark, though lesser known ability of the weapon, when one is struck or pierced by this ethereal blade, the gourd shall draw in the target, sealing them away within its confines. The targets trapped are subdued by the sword and trapped endlessly within a world of drunken dreams, ensnared in blissful eternity until such a time the wielder should choose to release them.
  • True Formless: Minor: Even the jar has no specific dimensions and, as such, this weapon can be enlarged or shrunk at will so as to be used by potential avatars, such as Susano'o, allowing for the user to never be without their most trusted and valued weapon.

Cost: Cannot be purchased
Requirements: Only 1

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on Fri Nov 04, 2016 9:06 pm
Hmmm Sure, Approved for now
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