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Name: Suiton: Tenseinobi Ameagari no Jutsu | Water Release: Natural Beauty after the Rain Jutsu
Rank: C
Cost: 20
Upkeep: 10
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton | Water Release, Ensuiton | Brine Release
Range: 50 M | 25 M radius
Speed: 250
Power: --
Handseals: Horse - Dog - Serpent
Description: For this technique, the user will form several hand-signs before sending out their chakra to act upon water within the surrounding area. The water will then rise up and accumulate within the air in the form of a blanket that covers an area equivalent to the amount of chakra used in the production of this technique. Drops of chakra enriched rain would then shower down, soaking anything and anyone caught down below. This technique is linked to the users chakra, thus the user will always be at the center of the blanket.  If there is an applicable light source above the blanket of water a light phenomenon will reflect on the area below, typically used for distractions.
Combination: Various Suiton/Ensuiton jutsu


Name: Suiton: | Water Release: Filling Fishbowl
Rank: B
Cost: 30
Upkeep: 15
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton | Water Release, Ensuiton | Water Release
Range: 50 M | 25 M Radius
Speed: 350
Power: --
Handseals: Snake → Ox → Clap Hands
Description: By extending his chakra out in the environment in the appropriate radius water will begin to collect in the shape of a sphere, much similar to water filling up a fishbowl. The "Fishbowl" has the user at the center, thus where he moves it shall. Those caught within the "Fishbowl" are subject to the effects of the conditions to the water, subsequently as a product of his chakra it is subject to being a conduit for other techniques. Victim(s) fully submerged will see that because of "Drag" due to the aquatic conditions their Speed and Strength stats will be reduced by 33% in Salt Water and 40% in Fresh Water.
Combination: Various Suiton and Ensuiton Jutsu.


Name: Aquatic Bliss
Rank: S
Cost: 50
Upkeep: 15
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Suiton | Water Release
Range: Touch | 50 M
Speed: --
Power: 500
Handseals: Horse - Snake - Ox - Half-Ram
Description: In order for this Genjutsu to begin the user must be able to extend their chakra to their target through the sense of touch, most notably the user uses this by submerging himself and the target(s) in the same water source, but there are various other ways of creating this link. The technique begins by changing the environment that the victim experiences through their 5 senses, despite being submerged in a body of water to the victim(s) they will be forced strongly to believe that the attack simply wet them and the battle is resuming as if nothing happen.
Combination: Various Genjutsu.


Name: Siren's Speech
Rank: S
Cost: 50
Upkeep: 15
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Touch | 50 M
Speed: --
Power: 450
Handseals:
Description: Ox - Snake - Horse - Half-Ram
An audio sensory Genjutsu, By focusing his chakra, he  can cause a sedating effect on an opponent, He needs to speak softly, just loud enough to be heard, what he says isn’t important, meaning he can activate this genjutsu in a normal conversation unbeknownst to his target. As the Target listens to his voice they begin feeling calmer and calmer, disconnecting from the situation around them, if this continues for 3 posts or so, he can even put them to sleep. In combat this can prove very effective, his  opponent will literally feel their energy leaving them and by the time most realize what’s happening to them they are too tired and sedated to even bother to do anything about it, they simply won’t care, rendering them vulnerable and unable to respond to his attacks. When applied underwater the vibrations from the vocal chords travel through the water and trigger the Genjutsu through the victim(s) sense of Touch and also their Auditory senses, because of the auditory link all words spoken by the user can be changed in matters of tone pitch and volume to suit the Genjutsu.
Combination: Various Suiton, Ensuiton and Genjutsu.


Name: Suiton: Hishuame no Jutsu | Water Release: Dagger Rainstorm Technique
Rank: C
Cost: 20
Upkeep: 10
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton | Water Release, Ensuiton | Brine Release
Range: 25 M
Speed: 200
Power: 175
Handseals: Dog - Boar - Bird - Ox - Hare  - Ox - Half-Ram
Description: This is an effective technique that can overwhelm the opponent with a barrage of kunai composed of water. For this technique, the user will form several hand-signs before sending out Suiton natured chakra to act upon water within the surrounding area. This technique is partially limited by the amount of water to draw upon, though is capitalized at 30 kunai. With this technique, the user will cause water to bubble up in baseball sized spheres before pushing the water out, usually with a wave or direction of the arms, towards the opponent. This will cause the spheres to rapidly shoot in the direction the user dictates. As they take motion, these spheres elongate into kunai shaped daggers that can deliver piercing force equal to that of the typical shinobi tool. This can easily overwhelm an opponent, though the technique takes more time, concentration, and energy the more blades are in play.
Combination:


Name: Suiton: Ekinokogiri no Jutsu | Water Release: Liquid Buzz Saw Technique
Rank: C
Cost: 20
Upkeep: 10
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton | Water Release, Ensuiton | Brine Release
Range: 25 M
Speed: 200
Power: 175
Handseals: Snake → Rat → Bird → Snake → Dog 
Description: This is an effective technique that essentially creates a Fuuma Shuriken from water. After forming a string of hand-signs, the user will mold their Suiton natured chakra into this hands. Less skilled shinobi will require both hands to help with the shape manipulation, though this becomes less strenuous with experience. The user will draw water from the area and collect it into a lucid sphere before their palms before flattening it into a narrow cutting blade. Compressing the water not only modifies its shape to look like that of the for pronged shinobi weapon, but also causes the blue form to rapidly spin. The blade is held inches away from the user's clenched fist, and can continue to be held so long as the user does not break their grip. If the fist relaxes prior to throwing the blade, the shuriken will instantly liquify and splash back into normal water. In close combat, this creates a buzz saw like offensive, though the true nature of this technique is to be thrown like a typical shuriken for a ranged attack.  The water blade will be destroyed after delivering its strike, turning back into nothing but a puddle.
Combination:


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on Sat Jun 04, 2016 9:12 am
Mmm. It's interesting to say the least.



Approved!

But if another mod tells you to lower the power/speed, you must agree to do it. I'm rather interested in seeing these come into play to be honest.

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on Sat Jun 04, 2016 9:14 am
Though do increase the upkeep and cost for Siren's Speech
please and thank you. Add 5 to each.
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on Sat Jun 04, 2016 10:29 am
Bliss wrote:Name: Suiton: Tenseinobi Ameagari no Jutsu | Water Release: Natural Beauty after the Rain Jutsu
Rank: C
Cost: 20
Upkeep: 10
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton | Water Release, Ensuiton | Brine Release
Range: 50 M | 25 M radius
Speed: 250
Power: --
Handseals: Horse - Dog - Serpent
Description: For this technique, the user will form several hand-signs before sending out their chakra to act upon water within the surrounding area. The water will then rise up and accumulate within the air in the form of a blanket that covers an area equivalent to the amount of chakra used in the production of this technique. Drops of chakra enriched rain would then shower down, soaking anything and anyone caught down below. This technique is linked to the users chakra, thus the user will always be at the center of the blanket.  If there is an applicable light source above the blanket of water a light phenomenon will reflect on the area below, typically used for distractions.
Combination:


I like it. Though, I'm not quite certain what your hoping to accomplish with it. As such, please give a definite area in size. For instance the Jutsu costs 20 Chakra. I would say no more than 20-30 meters. Or is that 25m Radius the area of effect? And this light phenomenon that you spoke of, exactly what is it? You say its distractions, but how does it work? Can it be used without an existing water source? Does this Jutsu lead into another one? If so please state as much, thank you.

Name: Suiton: | Water Release: Filling Fishbowl
Rank: B
Cost: 30
Upkeep: 15
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton | Water Release, Ensuiton | Water Release
Range: 50 M | 25 M Radius
Speed: 350
Power: --
Handseals: Snake → Ox → Clap Hands
Description: By extending his chakra out in the environment in the appropriate radius water will begin to collect in the shape of a sphere, much similar to water filling up a fishbowl. The "Fishbowl" has the user at the center, thus where he moves it shall. Those caught within the "Fishbowl" are subject to the effects of the conditions to the water, subsequently as a product of his chakra it is subject to being a conduit for other techniques. Victim(s) fully submerged will see that because of "Drag" due to the aquatic conditions their Speed and Strength stats will be reduced by 33% in Salt Water and 50% in Fresh Water.
Combination: Various Suiton and Ensuiton Jutsu.


Erm..okay. *Pictures it in his mind* Bliss forms hand seals, Chakra brings forth water of out nothing and forms into a fishbowl. Bliss then traps the goldfish(Targets) into the bowl and reduces their stats. Kurotsuchi only has one issue with this, and that is Bliss needs to lower the -50% to more like 40%.

Name: Aquatic Bliss
Rank: S
Cost: 50
Upkeep: 25
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Touch | 100 M
Speed: --
Power: 600
Handseals:
Description: In order for this Genjutsu to begin the user must be able to extend their chakra to their target through the sense of touch, most notably the user uses this by submerging himself and the target(s) in the same water source, but there are various other ways of creating this link. The technique begins by changing the environment that the victim experiences through their 5 senses, despite being submerged in a body of water to the victim(s) they will be forced strongly to believe that the attack simply wet them and the battle is resuming as if nothing happen.
Combination:


Okay. This should be a water release Genjutsu. Since I don't foresee having just any source of water that your Chakra has leading to the Genjutsu. Also, Genjutsu can't have power above 500, unless its a Limited/Restricted Jutsu. It was edited on the skill system recently. Might as well inform you know and save ya the trouble of going back and forth later. Apart from those points, I like the Jutsu. And please lower the range too to up to 50 Meters.

Name: Siren's Speech
Rank: S
Cost: 30
Upkeep: 15
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Touch | 50 M
Speed: --
Power: 350
Handseals:
Description: Ox - Snake - Horse - Half-Ram
An audio sensory Genjutsu, By focusing his chakra, he  can cause a sedating effect on an opponent, He needs to speak softly, just loud enough to be heard, what he says isn’t important, meaning he can activate this genjutsu in a normal conversation unbeknownst to his target. As the Target listens to his voice they begin feeling calmer and calmer, disconnecting from the situation around them, if this continues for 3 posts or so, he can even put them to sleep. In combat this can prove very effective, his  opponent will literally feel their energy leaving them and by the time most realize what’s happening to them they are too tired and sedated to even bother to do anything about it, they simply won’t care, rendering them vulnerable and unable to respond to his attacks. When applied underwater the vibrations from the vocal chords travel through the water and trigger the Genjutsu through the victim(s) sense of Touch and also their Auditory senses, because of the auditory link all words spoken by the user can be changed in matters of tone pitch and volume to suit the Genjutsu.
Combination: Various Suiton, Ensuiton and Genjutsu.


Please increase to Chakra cost to 50-60. Not a bad Jutsu, I like it. However, it must lead on from hand seals, and not just a random conversation turning into Genjutsu.

Name: Suiton: Hishuame no Jutsu | Water Release: Dagger Rainstorm Technique
Rank: C
Cost: 20
Upkeep: 10
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton | Water Release, Ensuiton | Brine Release
Range: 25 M
Speed: 200
Power: 175
Handseals: Dog - Boar - Bird - Ox - Hare  - Ox - Half-Ram
Description: This is an effective technique that can overwhelm the opponent with a barrage of kunai composed of water. For this technique, the user will form several hand-signs before sending out Suiton natured chakra to act upon water within the surrounding area. This technique is partially limited by the amount of water to draw upon, though is capitalized at 30 kunai. With this technique, the user will cause water to bubble up in baseball sized spheres before pushing the water out, usually with a wave or direction of the arms, towards the opponent. This will cause the spheres to rapidly shoot in the direction the user dictates. As they take motion, these spheres elongate into kunai shaped daggers that can deliver piercing force equal to that of the typical shinobi tool. This can easily overwhelm an opponent, though the technique takes more time, concentration, and energy the more blades are in play. For a quick attack or distraction, only a handful of blades may be manipulated. 
Combination:


Please give a number to the handful of blade. I don't like the vagueness lol.

Name: Suiton: Ekinokogiri no Jutsu | Water Release: Liquid Buzz Saw Technique
Rank: C
Cost: 20
Upkeep: 10
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton | Water Release, Ensuiton | Brine Release
Range: 25 M
Speed: 200
Power: 175
Handseals: Snake → Rat → Bird → Snake → Dog 
Description: This is an effective technique that essentially creates a Fuuma Shuriken from water. After forming a string of hand-signs, the user will mold their Suiton natured chakra into this hands. Less skilled shinobi will require both hands to help with the shape manipulation, though this becomes less strenuous with experience. The user will draw water from the area and collect it into a lucid sphere before their palms before flattening it into a narrow cutting blade. Compressing the water not only modifies its shape to look like that of the for pronged shinobi weapon, but also causes the blue form to rapidly spin. The blade is held inches away from the user's clenched fist, and can continue to be held so long as the user does not break their grip. If the fist relaxes prior to throwing the blade, the shuriken will instantly liquify and splash back into normal water. In close combat, this creates a buzz saw like offensive, though the true nature of this technique is to be thrown like a typical shuriken for a ranged attack.  The water blade will be destroyed after delivering its strike, turning back into nothing but a puddle.
Combination:


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Kurotsuchi wrote:
Bliss wrote:Name: Suiton: Tenseinobi Ameagari no Jutsu | Water Release: Natural Beauty after the Rain Jutsu
Rank: C
Cost: 20
Upkeep: 10
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton | Water Release, Ensuiton | Brine Release
Range: 50 M | 25 M radius
Speed: 250
Power: --
Handseals: Horse - Dog - Serpent
Description: For this technique, the user will form several hand-signs before sending out their chakra to act upon water within the surrounding area. The water will then rise up and accumulate within the air in the form of a blanket that covers an area equivalent to the amount of chakra used in the production of this technique. Drops of chakra enriched rain would then shower down, soaking anything and anyone caught down below. This technique is linked to the users chakra, thus the user will always be at the center of the blanket.  If there is an applicable light source above the blanket of water a light phenomenon will reflect on the area below, typically used for distractions.
Combination:


I like it. Though, I'm not quite certain what your hoping to accomplish with it. As such, please give a definite area in size. For instance the Jutsu costs 20 Chakra. I would say no more than 20-30 meters. Or is that 25m Radius the area of effect? And this light phenomenon that you spoke of, exactly what is it? You say its distractions, but how does it work? Can it be used without an existing water source? Does this Jutsu lead into another one? If so please state as much, thank you.

Name: Suiton: | Water Release: Filling Fishbowl
Rank: B
Cost: 30
Upkeep: 15
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton | Water Release, Ensuiton | Water Release
Range: 50 M | 25 M Radius
Speed: 350
Power: --
Handseals: Snake → Ox → Clap Hands
Description: By extending his chakra out in the environment in the appropriate radius water will begin to collect in the shape of a sphere, much similar to water filling up a fishbowl. The "Fishbowl" has the user at the center, thus where he moves it shall. Those caught within the "Fishbowl" are subject to the effects of the conditions to the water, subsequently as a product of his chakra it is subject to being a conduit for other techniques. Victim(s) fully submerged will see that because of "Drag" due to the aquatic conditions their Speed and Strength stats will be reduced by 33% in Salt Water and 50% in Fresh Water.
Combination: Various Suiton and Ensuiton Jutsu.


Erm..okay. *Pictures it in his mind* Bliss forms hand seals, Chakra brings forth water of out nothing and forms into a fishbowl. Bliss then traps the goldfish(Targets) into the bowl and reduces their stats. Kurotsuchi only has one issue with this, and that is Bliss needs to lower the -50% to more like 40%.

Name: Aquatic Bliss
Rank: S
Cost: 50
Upkeep: 25
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Touch | 100 M
Speed: --
Power: 600
Handseals:
Description: In order for this Genjutsu to begin the user must be able to extend their chakra to their target through the sense of touch, most notably the user uses this by submerging himself and the target(s) in the same water source, but there are various other ways of creating this link. The technique begins by changing the environment that the victim experiences through their 5 senses, despite being submerged in a body of water to the victim(s) they will be forced strongly to believe that the attack simply wet them and the battle is resuming as if nothing happen.
Combination:


Okay. This should be a water release Genjutsu. Since I don't foresee having just any source of water that your Chakra has leading to the Genjutsu. Also, Genjutsu can't have power above 500, unless its a Limited/Restricted Jutsu. It was edited on the skill system recently. Might as well inform you know and save ya the trouble of going back and forth later. Apart from those points, I like the Jutsu. And please lower the range too to up to 50 Meters.

Name: Siren's Speech
Rank: S
Cost: 30
Upkeep: 15
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Touch | 50 M
Speed: --
Power: 350
Handseals:
Description: Ox - Snake - Horse - Half-Ram
An audio sensory Genjutsu, By focusing his chakra, he  can cause a sedating effect on an opponent, He needs to speak softly, just loud enough to be heard, what he says isn’t important, meaning he can activate this genjutsu in a normal conversation unbeknownst to his target. As the Target listens to his voice they begin feeling calmer and calmer, disconnecting from the situation around them, if this continues for 3 posts or so, he can even put them to sleep. In combat this can prove very effective, his  opponent will literally feel their energy leaving them and by the time most realize what’s happening to them they are too tired and sedated to even bother to do anything about it, they simply won’t care, rendering them vulnerable and unable to respond to his attacks. When applied underwater the vibrations from the vocal chords travel through the water and trigger the Genjutsu through the victim(s) sense of Touch and also their Auditory senses, because of the auditory link all words spoken by the user can be changed in matters of tone pitch and volume to suit the Genjutsu.
Combination: Various Suiton, Ensuiton and Genjutsu.


Please increase to Chakra cost to 50-60. Not a bad Jutsu, I like it. However, it must lead on from hand seals, and not just a random conversation turning into Genjutsu.

Name: Suiton: Hishuame no Jutsu | Water Release: Dagger Rainstorm Technique
Rank: C
Cost: 20
Upkeep: 10
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton | Water Release, Ensuiton | Brine Release
Range: 25 M
Speed: 200
Power: 175
Handseals: Dog - Boar - Bird - Ox - Hare  - Ox - Half-Ram
Description: This is an effective technique that can overwhelm the opponent with a barrage of kunai composed of water. For this technique, the user will form several hand-signs before sending out Suiton natured chakra to act upon water within the surrounding area. This technique is partially limited by the amount of water to draw upon, though is capitalized at 30 kunai. With this technique, the user will cause water to bubble up in baseball sized spheres before pushing the water out, usually with a wave or direction of the arms, towards the opponent. This will cause the spheres to rapidly shoot in the direction the user dictates. As they take motion, these spheres elongate into kunai shaped daggers that can deliver piercing force equal to that of the typical shinobi tool. This can easily overwhelm an opponent, though the technique takes more time, concentration, and energy the more blades are in play. For a quick attack or distraction, only a handful of blades may be manipulated. 
Combination:


Please give a number to the handful of blade. I don't like the vagueness lol.

Name: Suiton: Ekinokogiri no Jutsu | Water Release: Liquid Buzz Saw Technique
Rank: C
Cost: 20
Upkeep: 10
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton | Water Release, Ensuiton | Brine Release
Range: 25 M
Speed: 200
Power: 175
Handseals: Snake → Rat → Bird → Snake → Dog 
Description: This is an effective technique that essentially creates a Fuuma Shuriken from water. After forming a string of hand-signs, the user will mold their Suiton natured chakra into this hands. Less skilled shinobi will require both hands to help with the shape manipulation, though this becomes less strenuous with experience. The user will draw water from the area and collect it into a lucid sphere before their palms before flattening it into a narrow cutting blade. Compressing the water not only modifies its shape to look like that of the for pronged shinobi weapon, but also causes the blue form to rapidly spin. The blade is held inches away from the user's clenched fist, and can continue to be held so long as the user does not break their grip. If the fist relaxes prior to throwing the blade, the shuriken will instantly liquify and splash back into normal water. In close combat, this creates a buzz saw like offensive, though the true nature of this technique is to be thrown like a typical shuriken for a ranged attack.  The water blade will be destroyed after delivering its strike, turning back into nothing but a puddle.
Combination:


Approved.


1st: 25 M Radius is the range, I went according to the rules so this should be fine.
The light phenomenon looks like this:
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2nd: Edited to 40%

3rd: Edited to Water Release Genjutsu, 500 Power, 50 M

4th: Edited to 50 Chakra

5th: Removed the vagueness
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