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on Sun Apr 24, 2016 3:32 pm
Genjutsu:

B-Rank:


Name: Demonic Illusion: Slumber
Rank: B
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 10
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 50/Eye Contact
Speed: N/A
Power: 350
Handseals: Horse → Dragon → Tiger or Eye Contact
Description: The user sends an invisible pulse of chakra around him in a 25 meter radius. Any others caught in the radius upon the users intentions will be put under a genjutsu. The target will at first only begin to feel sleep, but will quickly become more tired. As they fight the urge to sleep their endurance and speed will drop by 30 every post they make after being affected by the genjutsu. Should their endurance reach 0 they will collapse from exhaustion, falling asleep for however long the user upkeeps the jutsu plus two post after he stops paying upkeep. Alternatively if the target closes their eyes longer than a blink during the jutsu's effect they will submit to the urge of slumber.

Alternatively if the users is in possession of a sharingan they can trigger the jutsu by eye contact alone, increasing the range greatly and offering some flexibility in it's usage.
Combination: N/A

Medical Ninjutsu:

B-Rank:


Name: Poison Rain
Rank: B
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 10
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 50
Speed: N/A
Power: 350
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user kneads chakra in their lungs before excreting a fine continuous screen of acidic poison mist from their mouth that can not be seen by the naked eye. This mist while minuscule is very deadly and expands from the place of origin as well as lingers in the air for 3 post rounds. Upon contact or consumption the poison creates a horrid rash on the affected area. The rash is a sign of irritation as it quickly spreads out from the area and becomes more troublesome. While the mist can be acted upon nothing besides a force greater than the jutsu's power can affect it.

The first contact with body matter of anyone beside the user lowers the users endurance, strength, and speed by 5% of the jutsu's power and paralyze the affected body part (Limb, organ, etc) within the next post after the body part is effected. Every post of the affected character will continue to drop the victim's stats by 5% of the jutsu's power. Every other post the jutsu is active the poison will spread to the next closest body part, heading in a downward direction if possible, although not mandatory. (arm to shoulder, shoulder to chest, etc.) If the users Endurance reaches 0 then the poison will continue it's effects, but instead will lower their life force.
Combination: N/A


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on Tue May 24, 2016 11:20 am
1. Genjutsu.

Tone down the range on the Genjutsu please to 50 meters. Lower the speed and endurance to 30 per post. Add an upkeep cost also. No less than 10 Chakra Resources. This needs hand seals too, and a eye contact variation seeing as you're a Uchiha. What is the trigger to the Genjutsu? Is it this pulse?

2. Poison.

Concept seems okay. However, no way am I allowing you to take 30LF at only B-rank. That is Limited technique territory right there. I say this in the nicest way possible lol. Requires an upkeep cost. 100 Range is far too much also at only B-rank. I am willing to accept 60 meters. Dont wanna reduce its range too much. Also, this immediate effect stuff needs a delay in effect. Can't just happen immediately at this level sorry.

On another note, for future, please use the updated Jutsu template XD.
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on Tue May 24, 2016 2:50 pm
1. Smacks Nao across the head.
2. Smacks himself too. *He probably didn't make things clear*

3. Genjutsu technique. Everything was okay until the combination stuff. Remove that, since the Genjutsus stacked may have different functions. So I can't approve that stuff. I'm referring to the combination stuff.

4. Medical Tech. Lower the 10% to 5 instead. No speed to the Jutsu?
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on Tue May 24, 2016 3:33 pm
Naoki Uchiha wrote:
Genjutsu:

B-Rank:


Name: Demonic Illusion: Slumber
Rank: B
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 10
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 50/Eye Contact
Speed: N/A
Power: 350
Handseals: Horse → Dragon → Tiger or Eye Contact
Description: The user sends an invisible pulse of chakra around him in a 25 meter radius. Any others caught in the radius upon the users intentions will be put under a genjutsu. The target will at first only begin to feel sleep, but will quickly become more tired. As they fight the urge to sleep their endurance and speed will drop by 30 every post they make after being affected by the genjutsu. Should their endurance reach 0 they will collapse from exhaustion, falling asleep for however long the user upkeeps the jutsu plus two post after he stops paying upkeep. Alternatively if the target closes their eyes longer than a blink during the jutsu's effect they will submit to the urge of slumber.

Alternatively if the users is in possession of a sharingan they can trigger the jutsu by eye contact alone, increasing the range greatly and offering some flexibility in it's usage.
Combination: N/A

Medical Ninjutsu:

B-Rank:


Name: Poison Rain
Rank: B
Cost: 40
Upkeep: 10
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 50
Speed: N/A
Power: 350
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user kneads chakra in their lungs before excreting a fine continuous screen of acidic poison mist from their mouth that can not be seen by the naked eye. This mist while minuscule is very deadly and expands from the place of origin as well as lingers in the air for 3 post rounds. Upon contact or consumption the poison creates a horrid rash on the affected area. The rash is a sign of irritation as it quickly spreads out from the area and becomes more troublesome. While the mist can be acted upon nothing besides a force greater than the jutsu's power can affect it.

The first contact with body matter of anyone beside the user lowers the users endurance, strength, and speed by 5% of the jutsu's power and paralyze the affected body part (Limb, organ, etc) within the next post after the body part is effected. Every post of the affected character will continue to drop the victim's stats by 5% of the jutsu's power. Every other post the jutsu is active the poison will spread to the next closest body part, heading in a downward direction if possible, although not mandatory. (arm to shoulder, shoulder to chest, etc.) If the users Endurance reaches 0 then the poison will continue it's effects, but instead will lower their life force.
Combination: N/A

Approved!!! LOL
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