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Amanozako, she who opposes everything in heaven

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on Sat Apr 23, 2016 6:11 pm
Name:Amanozako
Rank:S
Type: Scythe
Materials: Ootsutsuki bones.
Visual Description: http://darksouls2.wiki.fextralife.com/file/view/Bone%20Scythe.png/508131344/Bone%20Scythe.png
Amanozako is a long warscythe, standing at an impressive seven feet tall, with the bone like blade a good four feet long and two feet wide. The handle of the scythe is covered in cloth and wrappings to help the wielder keep a grip on it if they are being thrown around by abilities or explosions. At the base of the blade, where it meets the shaft, a small red cloth can be seen handing there. The shaft of the scythe can fold up, after pushing a few buttons in, to bring it to a compact size of only two feet high. The blade will poke out when doing this, but it makes storing it that much easier. At the very top of the shaft, above where the blade meets the shaft itself, is a small hole that's only ten inches deep. There's nothing in this hole, but it serves a purpose that will be shown later. At the base of the shaft, there is a connection point, where a piece of metal cable can be attached to it to give the scythe much longer range as long as the wielder can handle the seemingly unpredictability that it gives. The cable is strong enough to stop kunai and shuriken, but will be blown apart by things like an Explosive tag. Along the shaft is a metal clasp that can hook onto robes or just the back of your shirt so that you don't have to carry it around as much. The Clasp will unhook itself when you run chakra through the shaft, making it hard for the scythe to be dislodged by explosions and being knocked around. Both the length and blade of Amanozako are deathly white, helping to illustrate the fact that this scythe has come to reap you, as well as the small grim reaper looking carving on both sides of the shaft at the very top.
Stats
Durablity:500
Power:500
Cable Endurance: 75
[b]Ability
: Medium Ability: Amanozako has the ability to lengthen itself by about a meter and a half, as well as the blade gets thicker and longer, and 35 spikes appear along its length, except at the handle, while 5 thicker and longer spikes, about 4 inches long and an inch in diameter.  appear along the top of the blade to give it better reaching and penetration power.
Cost: 10 chakra every other post while Medium ability is activated. To activate, you must pay 25 chakra.
Requirements:Must be level 5 Bukijutsu user to wield. Must have at least 100 strength


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on Sun Apr 24, 2016 9:00 am
Motsudo wrote:Name:Amanozako
Rank:S
Type: Scythe
Materials: Ootsutsuki bones.
Visual Description: http://darksouls2.wiki.fextralife.com/file/view/Bone%20Scythe.png/508131344/Bone%20Scythe.png
Amanozako is a long warscythe, standing at an impressive seven feet tall, with the bone like blade a good four feet long and two feet wide. The handle of the scythe is covered in cloth and wrappings to help the wielder keep a grip on it if they are being thrown around by abilities or explosions. At the base of the blade, where it meets the shaft, a small red cloth can be seen handing there. The shaft of the scythe can fold up, after pushing a few buttons in, to bring it to a compact size of only two feet high. The blade will poke out when doing this, but it makes storing it that much easier. At the very top of the shaft, above where the blade meets the shaft itself, is a small hole that's only ten inches deep. There's nothing in this hole, but it serves a purpose that will be shown later. At the base of the shaft, there is a connection point, where a piece of metal cable can be attached to it to give the scythe much longer range as long as the wielder can handle the seemingly unpredictability that it gives. The cable is strong enough to stop kunai and shuriken, but will be blown apart by things like an Explosive tag. Along the shaft is a metal clasp that can hook onto robes or just the back of your shirt so that you don't have to carry it around as much. The Clasp will unhook itself when you run chakra through the shaft, making it hard for the scythe to be dislodged by explosions and being knocked around. Both the length and blade of Amanozako are deathly white, helping to illustrate the fact that this scythe has come to reap you, as well as the small grim reaper looking carving on both sides of the shaft at the very top.
Stats
Durablity:500
Power:500
Ability: Medium Ability: Amanozako has the ability to lengthen itself by about half a meter. The blade gets thicker and longer, and 35 spikes appear along its length, except at the handle, while 5 thicker and longer spikes, about 4 inches long and an inch in diameter.  appear along the top of the blade to give it better reaching and penetration power.
Cost: 30 chakra every other post while it's active. To activate, you must pay 25 chakra.
Requirements:Must be level 5 Bukijutsu user to wield. Must have at least 200 strength

Let me help you out here just a bit.

1. I need the cable to have an endurance stat; not just a description of what it can defend against. Have it be like 75 endurance.

2. You don't have to have 30 chakra per turn while it is active. I am giving oyu this tip since we are all new to the system and it has recently been updated. That is too heavy a drawback and for no reason really. It's just a scythe.

3. For a MEDIUM ability - growing half a meter is... no way. That should be a minor ability. Just trying to help you out here my friend.

4. You don't have to make the requirement 200 strength to use it - we have lowered the limits on that for weapons to my knowledge. I will get back with you on the stat needed because I need to confirm with staff on that rule - but for now lets just say you need 100 strength.
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Updated to fix, and changed the Medium ability a little, while also giving the cable endurance.
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on Tue Apr 26, 2016 7:53 pm
Motsudo wrote:Name:Amanozako
Rank:S
Type: Scythe
Materials: Ootsutsuki bones.
Visual Description: http://darksouls2.wiki.fextralife.com/file/view/Bone%20Scythe.png/508131344/Bone%20Scythe.png
Amanozako is a long warscythe, standing at an impressive seven feet tall, with the bone like blade a good four feet long and two feet wide. The handle of the scythe is covered in cloth and wrappings to help the wielder keep a grip on it if they are being thrown around by abilities or explosions. At the base of the blade, where it meets the shaft, a small red cloth can be seen handing there. The shaft of the scythe can fold up, after pushing a few buttons in, to bring it to a compact size of only two feet high. The blade will poke out when doing this, but it makes storing it that much easier. At the very top of the shaft, above where the blade meets the shaft itself, is a small hole that's only ten inches deep. There's nothing in this hole, but it serves a purpose that will be shown later. At the base of the shaft, there is a connection point, where a piece of metal cable can be attached to it to give the scythe much longer range as long as the wielder can handle the seemingly unpredictability that it gives. The cable is strong enough to stop kunai and shuriken, but will be blown apart by things like an Explosive tag. Along the shaft is a metal clasp that can hook onto robes or just the back of your shirt so that you don't have to carry it around as much. The Clasp will unhook itself when you run chakra through the shaft, making it hard for the scythe to be dislodged by explosions and being knocked around. Both the length and blade of Amanozako are deathly white, helping to illustrate the fact that this scythe has come to reap you, as well as the small grim reaper looking carving on both sides of the shaft at the very top.
Stats
Durablity:500
Power:500
Cable Endurance: 75
Ability: Medium Ability: Amanozako has the ability to lengthen itself by about a meter and a half, as well as the blade gets thicker and longer, and 35 spikes appear along its length, except at the handle, while 5 thicker and longer spikes, about 4 inches long and an inch in diameter.  appear along the top of the blade to give it better reaching and penetration power.
Cost: 10 chakra every other post while Medium ability is activated. To activate, you must pay 25 chakra.
Requirements:Must be level 5 Bukijutsu user to wield. Must have at least 100 strength


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