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on Sat Mar 11, 2017 6:12 pm
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[font=Georgia][b]Name:[/b] Obvious
[b]Rank:[/b] D-S
[b]Cost:[/b] Per rank
[b]Upkeep:[/b]
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu ect.
[b]Element:[/b] Fire Release, Water Release ect.
[b]Range:[/b] Expend Jutsu Stats. 1 stat = 1 meter. 2 stats = 1 meter radius.
[b]Speed:[/b] Expend Jutsu Stats.
[b]Power:[/b] Expend Jutsu Stats.
[b]Handseals:[/b] Almost all techniques require handseals!
[b]Description:[/b] Be descriptive, please.
[b]Combination:[/b] What other techniques can it be combined with? Please be descriptive, could be used to earn rewards![/font]

Name: Dance of the Underbrush
Rank: A
Cost: 40 Chakra
Upkeep: 20 Chakra (Optional)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Range: 25 Meters
Speed: 325
Power: 400+200
Handseals: None
Description: The user shoots several bones charged with chakra into the ground while in the ground the bones rapidly grow like tree roots until they have surrounded a sizable  area below the surface of the ground. The user then touches the ground with his/her hand and the bones spike up at high speeds in order to impale everything within range not counting themselves and their allies due to the user being able to control the trajectory that they spike up at. Each spike has a thickness of 4 inches with a jagged tip and victims who rip the bones spikes out of their bodies begin to lose a great amount of blood due to the sharpness of the spike. These spikes can grow up to 20ft in height, making them taller than some trees when used correctly. By supplying additional chakra (See upkeep price), the user is able to cause these spikes to grow branches that lance throughout the area instantly, enabling them to set a rather impressive trap for any enemy who is unlucky enough to get trapped within.
Combination: Shikotsumyaku techniques


Name: Jiongu Puppetry Style
Rank: B
Cost: -
Upkeep: -
Type: Ninjutsu (Kugutsu)
Element: -
Range: 100 Meters (Monsters), Varies (Threads)
Speed: -
Power: -
Handseals: -
Description: After facing puppeteers in battle, Orion could not refute the utility that came with the usage of puppets. For someone who relied so much on keeping their hearts safe in order to stay immortal, it was invaluable. That is why he picked up the practice of puppetry. However, he found a way to tailor regular puppetry to his own skillset, making him even more dangerous on the field of battle. Using the Effigy Monsters he is able to create as well as the threads within his body, Orion is able to manipulate his puppets in two different ways the first and primary way of doing so is by placing one of the Jiongu Masks on a target. This causes the monster's size to increase or decrease to fit around the puppet snugly while if the target is either a corpse or currently alive the threads will burrow into their skull to hijack their brain in order to pilot the body. With a corpse this occurs instantly while a living target can delay their minds being hijacked by way of Endurance. Once the link has been established the puppets are unable to be manipulated by anything other than the masks even if chakra strings or even chakra receivers are buried within them. This effect remains active as long as the hearts within Jiongu masks are not destroyed and while worn by puppets they constantly beat. In order to protect themselves from destruction, the puppets are also able to move their heart within their newfound puppet in order to grant it a layer of protection. The second method is by extending out the Jiongu threads comprising his body out like chakra strings in order to manipulate puppets.


  • Due to the extension of the threads, they follow the rules for the range and Endurance loss of Jiongu.
  • Due to this still being puppetry, this follows the rules on puppetry that establishes the number of puppets he may control as well as the boosts to speed for controlling a certain number.
  • The Mobility of the puppet must be equal to the speed of the monster in order for it to move at full speed. If it is not, then the puppet moves at a speed equal to its mobility.
  • The strength of the Monster is able to augment the power of the puppet, therefore 1/2 of the Monster's strength is added to the puppet's power.
  • The puppet's Endurance is also supplemented by the Monster's own, adding +300 to said endurance.
  • When a body is hijacked, the above is applied to the body itself, though with Strength and Speed in place of Power and Mobility.
  • When a body is hijacked, the monster gains access to all of the body's techniques, unless they are Elemental Ninjutsu of a different element than the heart.
  • For an additional 25 Chakra, Orion can choose to wrap a Monster's threads around the heart of a LIVING target. This enables the beast to automatically replace their own heart should it be destroyed. If the beast is recalled to Orion's body with its own heart intact, the other heart is added to Orion's arsenal and becomes a Monster as well.
  • In terms of resisting the hijacking abilities of an Effigy Monster, those with Endurance greater than that of the beast itself is able to delay the hijacking process. Though they are delaying the process, their Endurance is eroded over time, losing -5 to it each post the mask is attempting to hijack their body. Should their Endurance fall below that of the beast's due to said erosion, they will be hijacked. Those with Endurance +150 above the monster's are completely immune to hijacking.


Combination: Jiongu, Puppetry


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on Thu Mar 16, 2017 3:16 pm
Orion wrote:
Tech Template:

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[font=Georgia][b]Name:[/b] Obvious
[b]Rank:[/b] D-S
[b]Cost:[/b] Per rank
[b]Upkeep:[/b]
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu ect.
[b]Element:[/b] Fire Release, Water Release ect.
[b]Range:[/b] Expend Jutsu Stats. 1 stat = 1 meter. 2 stats = 1 meter radius.
[b]Speed:[/b] Expend Jutsu Stats.
[b]Power:[/b] Expend Jutsu Stats.
[b]Handseals:[/b] Almost all techniques require handseals!
[b]Description:[/b] Be descriptive, please.
[b]Combination:[/b] What other techniques can it be combined with? Please be descriptive, could be used to earn rewards![/font]

Name: Dance of the Underbrush
Rank: A
Cost: 40 Chakra
Upkeep: 10 Chakra (Optional)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Range: 50 Meters
Speed: 350
Power: 600+200
Handseals: None
Description: The user shoots several bones charged with chakra into the ground while in the ground the bones rapidly grow like tree roots until they have surrounded a sizable  area below the surface of the ground. The user then touches the ground with his/her hand and the bones spike up at high speeds in order to impale everything within range not counting themselves and their allies due to the user being able to control the trajectory that they spike up at. Each spike has a thickness of 4 inches with a jagged tip and victims who rip the bones spikes out of their bodies begin to lose a great amount of blood due to the sharpness of the spike. By supplying additional chakra, the user is able to cause these spikes to grow branches that lance throughout the area, enabling them to set a rather impressive trap for any enemy who is unlucky enough to get trapped within.
Combination: Shikotsumyaku techniques



1. Interesting Jutsu. However, please make it into a limited Jutsu, this is due to the stats exceeding 750, even without the +200 Otsutsuki boost.

2. Does it only occupy a 50 meter wide area? How long do these spikes grow in terms of height? Please make reference to the additional Chakra, and what can be accomplished with it. That way we can find a way to make it work.

3. How long does it take for these spikes to spread out in the area?

4. Sorry for it taking so long to get checked.


Name: Jiongu Puppetry Style
Rank: B
Cost: -
Upkeep: -
Type: Ninjutsu (Kugutsu)
Element: -
Range: 100 Meters (Monsters), Varies (Threads)
Speed: -
Power: -
Handseals: -
Description: After facing puppeteers in battle, Orion could not refute the utility that came with the usage of puppets. For someone who relied so much on keeping their hearts safe in order to stay immortal, it was invaluable. That is why he picked up the practice of puppetry. However, he found a way to tailor regular puppetry to his own skillset, making him even more dangerous on the field of battle. Using the Effigy Monsters he is able to create as well as the threads within his body, Orion is able to manipulate his puppets in two different ways the first and primary way of doing so is by placing one of the Jiongu Masks on a target. This causes the monster's size to increase or decrease to fit around the puppet snugly while if the target is either a corpse or currently alive the threads will burrow into their skull to hijack their brain in order to pilot the body. With a corpse this occurs instantly while a living target can delay their minds being hijacked by way of Endurance. Once the link has been established the puppets are unable to be manipulated by anything other than the masks even if chakra strings or even chakra receivers are buried within them. This effect remains active as long as the hearts within Jiongu masks are not destroyed and while worn by puppets they constantly beat. In order to protect themselves from destruction, the puppets are also able to move their heart within their newfound puppet in order to grant it a layer of protection. The second method is by extending out the Jiongu threads comprising his body out like chakra strings in order to manipulate puppets.


  • Due to the extension of the threads, they follow the rules for the range and Endurance loss of Jiongu.
  • Due to this still being puppetry, this follows the rules on puppetry that establishes the number of puppets he may control as well as the boosts to speed for controlling a certain number.
  • The Mobility of the puppet must be equal to the speed of the monster in order for it to move at full speed. If it is not, then the puppet moves at a speed equal to its mobility.
  • The strength of the Monster is able to augment the power of the puppet, therefore 1/2 of the Monster's strength is added to the puppet's power.
  • The puppet's Endurance is also supplemented by the Monster's own, adding +300 to said endurance.
  • When a body is hijacked, the above is applied to the body itself, though with Strength and Speed in place of Power and Mobility.
  • When a body is hijacked, the monster gains access to all of the body's techniques, unless they are Elemental Ninjutsu of a different element than the heart.
  • For an additional 25 Chakra, Orion can choose to wrap a Monster's threads around the heart of a LIVING target. This enables the beast to automatically replace their own heart should it be destroyed. If the beast is recalled to Orion's body with its own heart intact, the other heart is added to Orion's arsenal and becomes a Monster as well.
  • In terms of resisting the hijacking abilities of an Effigy Monster, those with Endurance greater than that of the beast itself is able to delay the hijacking process. Though they are delaying the process, their Endurance is eroded over time, losing -5 to it each post the mask is attempting to hijack their body. Should their Endurance fall below that of the beast's due to said erosion, they will be hijacked. Those with Endurance +150 above the monster's are completely immune to hijacking.


Combination: Jiongu, Puppetry


This is puppetry, except I don't see you possessing any puppetry skills. As much as I like the idea, I cannot in good conscience allow you to infringe upon a puppeteers skill set. You may of course seek a second opinion on the deal.

Sorry for the long wait.


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on Thu Mar 16, 2017 4:06 pm
I edited the stats so that it fits the rank. Hehe I didn't even notice that ^.^ It does occupy the now 25 meter area. And I've added how tall they grow and how fast the branches reach out. The additional chakra price was added before (In the upkeep slot, as it was empty), and what the additional chakra does was clearly stated before, allowing the spikes to grow branches.

I know that Orion lacks puppetry at the moment, but this technique wasn't meant for him as of now. I do plan on giving him puppetry skills in the future, when I have the required points.
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on Fri Mar 24, 2017 3:00 am
Ugh. How did I miss this reply? Smh. Sorry dude.

1st Jutsu. Looks better but with the stats that high, it would need to be bumped to S rank.

2nd Jutsu. I like whatcha trying to do. I can dig it. But let me revisit this one. I would wager to say this is not a simple B rank jutsu. Its capabilities alone takes it beyond that.
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