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Kozai wrote:Name: Tree of Knowledge of Good and Evil
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep:-
Type: Ninjutsu/Space-Time
Element: Wood Release
Range: 150 meters
Speed: -
Power: 600
Handseals: Boar-Tiger-Rat-Snake-Ram
Description: The user initiates a 2-post preparation process inside a tree, touching and transforming a tree that he's already created using a Mokuton technique into something more. Contact need only be made once, and does not need to be maintained for the duration of the 2 posts. After the first post of charging, the symbol of the Tree of Sephiroth briefly flashes in the sky over the transforming tree, making this technique unable to be performed stealthily. After the two posts end, the tree itself gains additional endurance equal to the power of the jutsu and generates a unique chakra field over the range of the jutsu, which restricts certain actions of souls within it. The aura itself is invisible, but is easily sensed.
- Within this field, resurrection and revival techniques, as well as life creation techniques and animation techniques other than the user's cease to function, and Edo Tensei summons that aren't the user's crumble away, though they can be revived outside of the radius.
- The user is able to cast Evangelization on any target within the field's range, should he know the technique.
- Chakra-based communication techniques, whether telepathic or otherwise, cease to function within the barrier, whether the communication is being sent within or across the barrier.
- Genjutsu other than the user's that are below the power of this jutsu cease to function and cannot be initiated while either the caster or the target is within the barrier.
- Teleportation techniques other than the user's cease to function and cannot be initiated while either the caster or the target is within the barrier.


The tree stands permanently throughout topics until destroyed, which ends the technique. The user can also turn the field on or off at will. Only one field can exist at a time generated by the same user.
 
Combination: Any Mokuton technique that creates a tree


Kozai...

You are shutting down ALL Edo/Ressurrection, Genjutsu, Telepathy, and Teleportation?

Firstly, completely stopping something is rarely acceptable for any technique; that is why we have stats. You cannot just make a tech that auto-denies four different types of jutsu; especially the most powerful types arguably.

The automatic stopping of all Edos/Animations etc. within the barrier is completely denied with no exception or argument needed.  
The shutting down of teleportation, genjutsu, and communication needs to be  limited based on the power of the barrier where possible.  Pick two, and be reasonable. Shutting anything down 99% of the time should be due to having a more powerful stat than it; not just the ability to do it. A person can use gen etc. while OUTSIDE the barrier.

Please add a respectable cost for this technique...


Kozai wrote:Name: Evangelization
Rank: S
Cost: 65
Upkeep:-
Type: Medical
Element: -
Range: Contact
Speed: Instantaneous
Power: 700
Handseals: -
Description: The user directly absorbs another person, destroying their conciousness in the process. The user then is forced to make a choice: to assimilate their soul or body.
If the user chooses to assimilate the body, then he gains the use (as with Chimera techniques) of the victim's bloodline(s) and doujutsu, and the memories and methods of how to use them directly from the victim. As such, he also gains the use of all of their techniques, and is able to change his genetic code and appearance superficially at will to match theirs.
If the user chooses to assimilate the soul, he gains none of the above benefits, but instead, adds 25% of the victim's life force directly to his own permanently.
Basically an advanced application of Chimera Technique.
Combination: What other techniques can it be combined with? Please be descriptive, could be used to earn rewards!


I'm at a loss for words with this tech but I'm not going to even go there right now.
Needless to say, bud - you cannot "cast" this on anyone within range of your barrier. You need to TOUCH them to use something this insanely powerful.


Name: Nine Lotus Seat
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep:-
Type: Bukijutsu/Genjutsu
Element: -
Range: -
Speed: User's attack speed
Power: 700
Handseals: -
Description: The user takes a gamble and makes a single attack with his weapon. However, the most dangerous part of of this technique isn't the attack itself, but actually the genjutsu that comes with it. The tricky part of the genjutsu is the trigger, as the user needs to make a full frontal attack for it to work: the trigger is the opponent "recognizing that the attack exists". In other words, as long as the victim knows that the opponent is attack him/her, the genjutsu will trigger. A sneak attack where the victim doesn't know that the user is attacking him will not trigger the genjutsu.
The genjutsu itself is simple enough: the user steals one of the victim's five senses. Until he so chooses to end the effect, the victim completely loses access to a sense (say, hearing) and the user can now tap into whatever the victim would be hearing at any time. The same goes for sight, smell, etc.
Combination: What other techniques can it be combined with? Please be descriptive, could be used to earn rewards!


Please pick a trigger other than "I attacked and someone realized it".
Is the 700 the power of the gen or of the buki attack?



Name: Gate to the Future
Rank: S
Cost: 70
Upkeep:
Type: Space-Time
Element: -
Range: Indefinite
Speed: -
Power: -
Handseals: Ram
Description: The user locks on to an unoccupied portion of space and teleports there. This requires a post to "lock on" to the destination. The user takes everything he's wearing, as well as any possessions on him, but cannot take other people with him.
Combination: What other techniques can it be combined with? Please be descriptive, could be used to earn rewards!


This is basically FTG - No. And furthermore, if you want a tech like this, you need to be more specific as to its range.

Name: Outer Apotheosis
Rank: S
Cost: 30 sage chakra (see below)
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu/Senjutsu/Space-Time
Element: -
Range: Self
Speed:
Power:
Handseals:
Description: Instead of taking on the normal physical methods of performing a "sage mode" transformation, the user instead begins drawing energy directly using essokinesis, empowering himself with energy drawn from different dimensions and timelines. This power heightens himself to "a level beyond humanity", enabling him to directly bypass the charging time for gathering sage chakra and the stat requirements for entering sage mode. Since he is continuously gathering energy, the duration is also bypassed. However, he loses the increase in sensory range, as well as options to spend sage chakra to enhance himself or jutsu temporarily, since the sage chakra he is gathering is being directly expended to maintain the form. This gives a +225 to all physical stats.
Since the user is now enhanced beyond human comprehension, foreign entities and energies (such as chakra, cells, particles) that attempt to infiltrate his body are detected and have their effect/power immediately reduced by 80%.
This jutsu takes the form of a flaming blue aura around the user, effective power/endurance of 200.
Combination: What other techniques can it be combined with? Please be descriptive, could be used to earn rewards!


1. You do not get to bypass the stat requirements for sage mode.

2. 30 sage energy is not even close to enough to do this; not to mention you cannot even use this tech/sage energy UNTIL sage mode has already been activated.

3. You do not get to bypass the time requirement for sage mode.

4. "Since the user is now enhanced beyond human comprehension, foreign entities and energies (such as chakra, cells, particles) that attempt to infiltrate his body are detected and have their effect/power immediately reduced by 80%."
This is completely denied and makes no sense.

I obviously am aware you are trying to "prepare" for me etc. but making techs that have absurd abilities with no warrant is not the way to do it.

"Since the user is now enhanced beyond human comprehension" - that is relative and a bit comical. Firstly, you are enhanced by a certain amount; not infinitely. Secondly, your boost is not even that impressive so it does not warrant that kind of statement in the first place...
3.The ability for foreign entities (like my cells) to enter you is solely based upon your endurance and factors like that. If you want to defend against things penetrating you, you need to be harder to penetrate; not magically reduce them by 80% with a tech that costs you 30 sage energy.

5. If you want to use this as an alternative to sage mode (using sage energy), please pitch something without bypassing all restrictions of sage mode and then it is plausible. Or you can use this in conjunction with an already activated sage mode.




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