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on Tue Sep 06, 2016 1:40 pm
The Jutsus posted in white font still awaits approval. I'm posting them here to get it all over and done with. So please check away.

Name: Odori no Bara→ Senzai no Chuuka-Garden of the Middle Kingdom
Rank: S
Cost:  60+18→78 Chakra
Upkeep: 20
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Bone Pulse
Range: From 20 Meters Away
Speed: 300
Power: 200+200(Otsu Bonus)
Handseals: Tiger→Rat→Dragon→Ram
Description: Senzai no Chuuka allows the user to manifest bones from any surface shaped like roses riddled with thorns all over them. At full emergence, the bones are 5 meters and a half in width, and grows up to 50 meters in height, while covering a 55 meters radius all around. The thorns are typically two foot long, and ten inches thick. The bones are of course controlled and manipulated by the user. As such they can strip smaller segments of the bone stems away. And use these attack to attack smaller targets to suit their needs. They are quite flexible, able to seize someone in their thorned embraced, meanwhile subduing them. Or otherwise can be used to attack without mercy at the user's choosing. The tip of each bone that makes up the garden is shaped like a rose no doubt. The Jutsu itself can be combined with the All Ash Killing Bones Jutsus just like other bone pulse Jutsus.  The bones are no doubt very durable, which makes it a truly effective Jutsu when dealing with multiple foes. The user can also fuse with the bones and move through them undetected, much like the Seeding Fern Jutsu allows the user to do. The user can be detected by conventional means. I.E Chakra sensory, and obviously seeing the user move from one bone to another.
Combination:Other Otsu Jutsus


Name: Odori no Bara→Nobara Jinsei→Wild Rose Instinct
Rank: S
Cost: 50+18→68
Upkeep: 20 Chakra
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Bone Pulse
Range: 70 Meters
Speed: 400
Power: 200+200(Otsu)→
Handseals: Monkey→Dragon→Rat
Description:  After Forming the required hand seals for the technique. The user will cause a giant single thorned Rose to manifest from the desired surface that the Jutsu is cast upon. The single thorned rose made of bones rise up to 70 meters in height, while being ten meters in width/girth. The rose is riddled with thorns, and the whole rose itself is manipulated by the user. As such, the user can control and manipulate the movements of the rose. However, what truly makes the jutsu special, is the roses ability to release continious barrages of bone spikes. The bone spikes being 3 meters long and one foot wide are also sharp and very durable as is the rose itself. As a consequence can be used to cause piercing damage. And to also break through defenses when released as a barrage. Up to twenty bone spikes can be released in a single burst, and without warning. The bone petals of the rose tends to form themselves around the ovule of the rose, thus creating a barrel. This barrel can then be manipulated to change directions, performing a full 360 rotation where necessary. The user can use the Byakugan to properly pinpoint their target enhancing the probability of landing a strike. Can be used in conjunction with the All Ash Killing Bones technique to further increase its lethality.
Combination: Various Bone Pulse Jutsus


Name: Odori no Bara→Hana Toku→Flower Petal Shield
Rank: A-rank
Cost: 50+18→68
Upkeep: 15
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Bone Pulse
Range: 0→
Speed: 500
Endurance: 800(Otsu Bones)
Handseals: Dog→Rat→Moneky→Ram
Description: Hana Toku takes advantage of the durable bones that the Otsutsuki possesses. The technique causes bone petals to emerge from the desired surface and form around the user. The petals are designed to defend, and so creates a spherical enclosure around the user. Which makes it difficult to get to the user through the use of physical attacks or otherwise. The Jutsu sees even then ground beneath the user's feet be covered with a bone platform that matches the size of the petals in terms of width. This means the user is protected from above, below and the sides. Through the use of the Byakugan the Otsutsuki can launch attacks from cover, based on the Jutsus that they possess, and those that are capable of doing so. The flower petals rises up to twenty meters in height, and with a width of twelve meters all around. There are no gaps for a possible breach. However, the user can manipulate the petals at their discretion.
Combination: Bone Pulse Jutsus


Name: Nobara no Kotsu Shishou→Wild Rose Bone Stabbing
Rank: A-rank
Cost: 40+18=58
Upkeep: 10
Type: Nintaijutsu
Element: Bone Pulse
Range: 0-15 Meters
Speed:  300
Power: 150+200(Otsu)→
Handseals: N/A
Description:  



Nobara no Kotsu Shishou is very similar to dance of the larch. Whereby whenever the user is engaged in battle they're able to manifest bones from their body that then attacks the opponent. The bones while not limited to the hands only, tends to manifest from their. The user can have 15+ bones erupt and attack the opponent, aiming to pierce, or to even manipulate the bones to seize the opponent, before proceeding to stab them with the bones. In close combat, the user can be especially dangerous, as their attack pattern becomes unpredictable. The bones can extend up to fifteen meters, and are also quite durable. They can be combined with the All Ash Killing Bones style to further enhance the Jutsus lethality when in use. A versed user in this art can have bones erupt from other parts of their body, to cover for blind sided attacks. The bones are quite slender, but also strong. In reality though, the bones tend to be used as a relentless assault on the opponent as they aim to stab without mercy. The length of the bones are also at the discretion of the user. Who is able to extend and retract them as the see fit.
Combination:Bone Pulse Jutsus



Name: Hakkeshou no Kujo→Eight Trigrams Palm Destruction
Rank: S-rank
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 15
Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Range: 0-20 Meters
Speed: 300
Power: 400→
Handseals: N/A
Description:  Hakkeshou no Kujo  tends to be utilized as a combination technique. Taking advantage of their ability to control Chakra with great precision. The Ootsutsuki are able to manifest Chakra limbs from their bodies and use as weapons during combat. The chakra limbs numbers up to eight total at any time, with a variety of different limbs in play. The eight also includes the user's own.  Meaning it is up to the user to decide how many limbs of what kind they require to use. Typically there are either 4 legs or four arms of varying combinations. Which will number up to four Chakra climbs, plus the user's own natural limbs. The limbs can be used as an extension of the user, making them more formidable during close and mid range combat. The limbs can manifest from the user's back, adding to their unpredictable and other places. They can be used to grip things etc. And also carry quite a bit of power behind their attacks. The arms are used for Hand to hand combat, gripping, climbing and not to perform Jutsus.

Combination: Gentle Fist Techniques


Name:  Hakke no Tobatsu→Eight Trigrams Subjugation
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Juuinjutsu Barrier Technique
Element: None
Range:  0-40 Meters
Speed: 300
Power: 400→
Handseals:  Rat→Rabbit→Dog→Snake
Description:  Hakke no Tobatsu sees the user combine their Eight Trigrams divination style, and incorporate it with Juuinjutsu. The user will first  perform the necessary seals, and send their Chakra out in the area. The range of this divination field is 40 meters. However, the user's own Chakra places a curse within the confines of the divination field. The end result is the immobilization of the targets through paralysis. Their body(s) will go numb having suffered the immediate effects of the technique itself. What this does is leave the opponent open and vulnerable to attack, as they're unable to move a single muscle.



  • With 100 Less Endurance than the power of the Technique you are caught.
  • Can pay a Chakra cost of 100 to escape the Jutsu. Its Juuinjutsu, and curse marks are not easily removed.
  • With 100 more Strength than the Jutsu, you can wrestle out, by also paying 50 Chakra.
  • With 100 more Endurance than the Jutsu power, you can wrestle out. Must pay 50 Chakra also.
  • There are no Chakra discounts when wrestling away




Combination: Gentle Fist Techniques.



Name: Hyakuken no Genba-Hundred Swords Death Scene
Rank: S-rank
Cost: 80
Upkeep:  N/A
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 Meters
Speed: 300
Power: 350
Handseals:  Dragon→Tiger
Description: Hyakuken no Genga is a vicious Bukijutsu Jutsu that is used to merciless pulverize an opponent. The user will use their sword (Mu-Onna) as a catalyst to call forth as the name suggests a collection of one hundred blades. The blades are all twelves meters in height and two meters wide. The Jutsu is usually executed from above the target, causing the blades to rain down and cause devastation with the target area. The blades cover up a range of seventy meters, and can be manipulated during the initiation of the attack. This simply means the user can have the blades fall down in a straight line. Or to simply have them form more of a circle in either to cut off the escape route of the target(s). The formation of the blades and the manner in which they fall, makes the jutsu most formidable. However, while its best to have the Jutsu executed from above, the user can use the Jutsu at ground level. However, the amount of blades released are instead halved.
Combination: Sword Techniques, Elements etc


Name:  Gentle Fist Art One Blow Body→Canon Jutsu
Rank: B-rank
Cost: 30
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 0-5 Meters
Speed: 195
Power: 200→
Handseals: N/A
Description: A technique born from their innate ability to expel chakra from every tenketsu on their body, a member of the Otsutsuki clan can hit their opponent with a blast of chakra that will send them flying away from the user. It was also shown that this technique can be used with pin-point accuracy to target the weak point of a technique exemplified when Neji Hyūga was trapped by Kisame Hoshigaki's Water Prison Technique, and was able to dispel it. The chakra expelled from the body can be released in a 360 degree motion. Making the technique especially useful in situations where the user is trapped.
Combination: Gentle Fist Techniques!


Name:  Tool Creation Technique→Canon Jutsu
Rank: S-rank
Cost: 50
Upkeep: 20+10(When changing over)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range:  0-70 Meters
Speed: 300
Power: 350→
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user has the ability to manifest special red glowing malleable chakra, which, when on standby, floats in a chakram-like formation behind their back. The user is able to manipulate it to form various makeshift tools and weapons. The tools created were powerful enough to create craters when struck against the ground and, when used by Kinshiki, cleanly bisect his planet's God Tree. Not only can the user manifest a multiple of tools and weapons at once, but they can also manipulate the tools telekinetically. When dispelling the technique or otherwise, the user is able to disintegrate the tools like shattered glass and reshape them. The malleable Chakra is however not restricted to tools only. The typical tools may result in different variations in order to suit a particular purpose. There are claws, trench knives, chains, kanabo, axes, stakes and other such things. Can create up to 10 weapons at a time.
Combination: Tool Creation to create other variants!


Name: Hakkeshō Kaiten no Touben→Eight Trigrams Palms Revolving Heaven Defence
Rank: S-Rank
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 15
Type: Nintaijutsu
Element: N/A
Range:  Self→0-12 Meters
Speed:  300
Power:  400→
Handseals: None
Description: Revolving Heaven Defence is a much advanced version of the revolving heaven technique. The user instead of physically rotating/spinning, can evoke the same effect even while motionless. This of course grants them great tactical advantage. Through the use of masterful Chakra control, by expelling Chakra through their Tenketsu. The Otsutsuki clan member can have the Chakra rotate/spin violenty to parry and at the same time cause damage to the foe in contact with the shield. It is not unheard of for an Otsutsuki clan member to maintain the Chakra rotation even while airborne. This sees them protected by a revolving sphere of Chakra. The Chakra can be manipulate during its release for more minor instances. The sphere expands out to twelve meters when called upon.  
Combination: Gentle Fist Techniques, Elements & Other creative means!


Name: Jubaku Souken no Jutsu→Curse Creation Technique
Rank: S-rank
Cost: 60
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Juuinjutsu→Medical Jutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Contact
Speed: 200
Power: 500→700 Stats
Handseals: Contact
Description: Jubaku Souken allows the practitioner of the Jutsu the ability to grant another person a curse seal. The technique comes about from a combination of medical jutsu, Juuinjutsu and an understanding of Senjutsu Chakra. With these ingredients, the user can create curse seals and apply them to others. The types of curse seals may differ and must be specified. It is also rather helpful if the user has access to another curse seal. This way, they can properly gain an understanding in the way it works and how to apply it. With this ability the user is able to replicate and modify a curse seal to their liking. By manipulating the properties, the user is capable of giving it different effects.

1. You don't have to create a technique to create cursed seals boss. You can just do it if you have the seal and use it on others.


Requirements: Juuinjutsu Skill→5 in Medical Skill and or Knowledge of Senjutsu Chakra.


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on Tue Sep 06, 2016 5:17 pm
Odori no Bara→ Senzai no Chuuka-Garden of the Middle Kingdom
- The range says 100 M, obviously that's not a radius, thus you need to give a reasonable width no more than 10 M
- Bump the chakra up to 60, so 60 + 18 = 78 (Reasoning: It's a miniature version of the Dance of the Seeding Fern)
- Bump the up keep to 20
- Power: 200+200(Otsu Bonus)+600 Stats | What is this +600 for? It should be removed.
- "The user can also fuse with the bones and move through them undetected, much like the Seeding Fern Jutsu allows the user to do. " | Seeding Fern doesn't allow you to go undetected, unnoticed as in unable to be seen while hiding in it. Moving Will have you seen and chakra detection is still plausible. Please make that edit.
- The 100 M height, please cut that down to 50 M.

Odori no Bara→Nobara Jinsei→Wild Rose
- Bump the upkeep to 20
- 200+200(Otsu)→670 Stats | Where did you get the extra +270 stats? This would be 400. Please edit.


Odori no Bara→Hana Toku→Flower Petal Shield
- Bump this to 50 chakra since you are using +500 stats
- Bump the upkeep to 15
- You've used to +20 more stats than allowed for an A Rank, please edit.
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on Tue Sep 06, 2016 5:47 pm
*Bones have +200 power to them; have a static endurance of 800.
*Ootsutsuki get a +50 boost to their endurance because of their strong skeletal structure.
*Are able to fly freely, but not at speeds higher than speed stat. This costs them 10 chakra to activate, and five to maintain.
*They have 110 life force naturally.
*Get +2 skill points in taijutsu.
*Start with no elements; do not get +1 skill points for starting with no elements.
*Byakugan costs 5 chakra per turn to have active.
Level four byakugan costs 10 chakra per post to maintain.

Taken from the clan page.

Odori no Bara→ Senzai no Chuuka-Garden of the Middle Kingdom

It's not suppose to say +600 the + was suppose to be an arrow →just loss of concentration. Height cut to 50 meters as requested. Before I make the final edit on the range/radius stuff. Yes, it was meant to say radius. But am I correct in saying you're requesting that the radius for bones growth being 10 meters all around?

Odori no Bara→Nobara Jinsei→Wild Rose

Upkeep bumped.
I don't get an extra 270 stats. I'm making it clear that Otsu bone techs benefits from +200 to power. The stats without this clan bonus=670. Well within the allowed limit for S-ranks which is 750.

Odori no Bara→Hana Toku→Flower Petal Shield

Chakra bumped.
Upkeep bumped.
Those 20 stats for range is suppose to define the height and width of the Jutsu. That is however irrelevant now, so removed the 20 stats.

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on Thu Sep 08, 2016 9:17 am
Odori no Bara→ Senzai no Chuuka-Garden of the Middle Kingdom
Kurotsuchi wrote:Power: 200+200(Otsu Bonus)+600 Stats

I understand the bonus, you've labeled it.

Range: 70 Meters
Speed: 400
Power: 200

= 670 total stats which is wIthin the S-Rank, yes. But the  +200(Otsu) only applies to the Power stat thus Power: 200+200(Otsu Bonus) = 400.
- please remove +600 or → 600 from the power stat line


Kurotsuchi wrote:But am I correct in saying you're requesting that the radius  for bones growth being 10 meters all around?

No, the radius of 100 M is 50 M per the rules. I'm saying give a WIDTH across since it can be used at  a length of 100 M. It should be no more than 10 M




Osori no Bara→Nobara Jinsei→Wild Rose

= 670 total stats which is wIthin the S-Rank, yes. But the  +200(Otsu) only applies to the Power stat thus Power: 200+200(Otsu Bonus) = 400.
- please remove +670 or → 670 from the Power Stat line




Odori Bara→Hana Toku→Flower Petal Shield
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Name: Odori no Bara→Hana Toku→Flower Petal Shield
Rank: A-rank
Cost: 50+18→68
Upkeep: 15
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Bone Pulse
Range: 0→
Speed: 500
Endurance: 800(Otsu Bones)
Handseals: Dog→Rat→Moneky→Ram
Description: Hana Toku takes advantage of the durable bones that the Otsutsuki possesses. The technique causes bone petals to emerge from the desired surface and form around the user. The petals are designed to defend, and so creates a spherical enclosure around the user. Which makes it difficult to get to the user through the use of physical attacks or otherwise. The Jutsu sees even then ground beneath the user's feet be covered with a bone platform that matches the size of the petals in terms of width. This means the user is protected from above, below and the sides. Through the use of the Byakugan the Otsutsuki can launch attacks from cover, based on the Jutsus that they possess, and those that are capable of doing so. The flower petals rises up to twenty meters in height, and with a width of twelve meters all around. There are no gaps for a possible breach. However, the user can manipulate the petals at their discretion.
Combination: Bone Pulse Jutsus

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on Thu Sep 08, 2016 10:54 am
Odori no Bara→ Senzai no Chuuka-Garden of the Middle Kingdom---Its suppose to create a garden of bones, not a row of spikes. As such, I have reduced the radius that it covers all around to 55 meters. Meaning if you walk around it, its 55 meters corner to corner. That 10 meter WIDTH is pretty useless to me. And makes it so that the Jutsu is turned into something else.

= 670 total stats which is wIthin the S-Rank, yes. But the +200(Otsu) only applies to the Power stat thus Power: 200+200(Otsu Bonus) = 400.
- please remove +600 or → 600 from the power stat line

I didn't put it there to add to power. I put it there to show the total number of stats being used. But sure, I can remove it if its causing confusion.

Anyways Edited.
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Kurotsuchi wrote:Name: Odori no Bara→ Senzai no Chuuka-Garden of the Middle Kingdom
Rank: S
Cost:  60+18→78 Chakra
Upkeep: 20
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Bone Pulse
Range: From 20 Meters Away
Speed: 300
Power: 200+200(Otsu Bonus)
Handseals: Tiger→Rat→Dragon→Ram
Description: Senzai no Chuuka allows the user to manifest bones from any surface shaped like roses riddled with thorns all over them. At full emergence, the bones are 5 meters and a half in width, and grows up to 50 meters in height, while covering a 55 meters radius all around. The thorns are typically two foot long, and ten inches thick. The bones are of course controlled and manipulated by the user. As such they can strip smaller segments of the bone stems away. And use these attack to attack smaller targets to suit their needs. They are quite flexible, able to seize someone in their thorned embraced, meanwhile subduing them. Or otherwise can be used to attack without mercy at the user's choosing. The tip of each bone that makes up the garden is shaped like a rose no doubt. The Jutsu itself can be combined with the All Ash Killing Bones Jutsus just like other bone pulse Jutsus.  The bones are no doubt very durable, which makes it a truly effective Jutsu when dealing with multiple foes. The user can also fuse with the bones and move through them undetected, much like the Seeding Fern Jutsu allows the user to do. The user can be detected by conventional means. I.E Chakra sensory, and obviously seeing the user move from one bone to another.
Combination:Other Otsu Jutsus

Name: Odori no Bara→Nobara Jinsei→Wild Rose Instinct
Rank: S
Cost: 50+18→68
Upkeep: 20 Chakra
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Bone Pulse
Range: 70 Meters
Speed: 400
Power: 200+200(Otsu)→
Handseals: Monkey→Dragon→Rat
Description:  After Forming the required hand seals for the technique. The user will cause a giant single thorned Rose to manifest from the desired surface that the Jutsu is cast upon. The single thorned rose made of bones rise up to 70 meters in height, while being ten meters in width/girth. The rose is riddled with thorns, and the whole rose itself is manipulated by the user. As such, the user can control and manipulate the movements of the rose. However, what truly makes the jutsu special, is the roses ability to release continious barrages of bone spikes. The bone spikes being 3 meters long and one foot wide are also sharp and very durable as is the rose itself. As a consequence can be used to cause piercing damage. And to also break through defenses when released as a barrage. Up to twenty bone spikes can be released in a single burst, and without warning. The bone petals of the rose tends to form themselves around the ovule of the rose, thus creating a barrel. This barrel can then be manipulated to change directions, performing a full 360 rotation where necessary. The user can use the Byakugan to properly pinpoint their target enhancing the probability of landing a strike. Can be used in conjunction with the All Ash Killing Bones technique to further increase its lethality.
Combination: Various Bone Pulse Jutsus

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Name: Nobara no Kotsu Shishou→Wild Rose Bone Stabbing
Rank: A-rank
Cost: 40+18=58
Upkeep: 10
Type: Nintaijutsu
Element: Bone Pulse
Range:  25 Meters
Speed:  300
Power: 150+200(Otsu)→475 Stats
Handseals: N/A
Description:  Nobara no Kotsu Shishou is very similar to dance of the larch. Whereby whenever the user is engaged in battle they're able to manifest bones from their body that then attacks the opponent. The bones while not limited to the hands only, tends to manifest from their. The user can have 15+ bones erupt and attack the opponent, aiming to pierce, or to even manipulate the bones to seize the opponent, before proceeding to stab them with the bones. In close combat, the user can be especially dangerous, as their attack pattern becomes unpredictable. The bones can extend up to twenty five meters, and are also quite durable. The can be combined with the All Ash Killing Bones style to further enhance the Jutsus lethality when in use. A versed user in this art can have bones erupt from other parts of their body, to cover for blind sided attacks. The bones are quite slender, but also strong. In reality though, the bones tend to be used as a relentless assault on the opponent as they aim to stab without mercy. The length of the bones are also at the discretion of the user. Who is able to extend and retract them as the see fit.
Combination:Bone Pulse Jutsus

1. I'm going to mail you a calculator. "150+200(Otsu)→475 Stats" Please change that to 350 stats.

2. So basically, you can produce fifteen plus long bones from anywhere on your body and they can be thrown at people at 300 speed? I just want to be sure I am reading this correctly.


Name: Hakkeshou no Kujo→Eight Trigrams Palm Destruction
Rank: S-rank
Cost: 60+18→78
Upkeep: 15
Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Range: 0-20 Meters
Speed: 300
Power: 400→
Handseals: N/A
Description:  Hakkeshou no Kujo  tends to be utilized as a combination technique. Taking advantage of their ability to control Chakra with great precision. The Ootsutsuki are able to manifest Chakra limbs from their bodies and use as weapons during combat. The chakra limbs numbers up to eight total at any time, with a variety of different limbs in play. Meaning it is up to the user to decide how many limbs of what kind they require to use. The limbs can be used as an extension of the user, making them more formidable during close and mid range combat. The limbs can manifest from the user's back, adding to their unpredictable and other places. They can be used to grip things etc. And also carry quite a bit of power behind their attacks.
Combination: Gentle Fist Techniques

1. "The chakra limbs numbers up to eight total at any time, with a variety of different limbs in play. Meaning it is up to the user to decide how many limbs of what kind they require to use. "

^I don't like charging people for limbs etc. but just be a bit more clear about what you mean by different limbs in play I..e what kind? Meaning you can create chakra arms and legs off of your original eight? I don't mind embellishing the use of limbs in techs per say, I just want to be clear.


Name:  Hakke no Tobatsu→Eight Trigrams Subjugation
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 15
Type: Juuinjutsu Barrier Technique
Element: None
Range:  40 Meters
Speed: 300
Power: 400→
Handseals:  Rat→Rabbit→Dog→Snake
Description:  Hakke no Tobatsu sees the user combine their Eight Trigrams divination style, and incorporate it with Juuinjutsu. The user will first  perform the necessary seals, and send their Chakra out in the area. As far as the level of their Byakugan allows the Eight Trigrams platform to expand. However, the user's own Chakra places a curse within the confines of the divination field. The end result is the immobilization of the targets through paralysis. Their body(s) will go numb having suffered the immediate effects of the technique itself. What this does is leave the opponent open and vulnerable to attack, as they're unable to move a single muscle.
Combination: Gentle Fist Techniques.

1. Lol this is the smartest tech I've seen from you. However, include the range that this is allotted per your byakugan - or is it 40 meters like you say? Just so I can determine if it is limited or not.

2. Upkeep needs to be 20.

3. I need the juuinjutsu affect to be reversible somehow, please state how. Just so people do not magically get out of this for a reason you do not deem fit. You don't have to state every imaginable way this can be gotten out of, just the basic premise of how to get out of it or a range of its affect. Include examples. Does this affect everyone the same regardless of their endurance or strength for example?

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on Thu Sep 08, 2016 2:55 pm
Everlasting wrote:Name: Nobara no Kotsu Shishou→Wild Rose Bone Stabbing
Rank: A-rank
Cost: 40+18=58
Upkeep: 10
Type: Nintaijutsu
Element: Bone Pulse
Range:  25 Meters
Speed:  300
Power: 150+200(Otsu)→475 Stats
Handseals: N/A
Description:  Nobara no Kotsu Shishou is very similar to dance of the larch. Whereby whenever the user is engaged in battle they're able to manifest bones from their body that then attacks the opponent. The bones while not limited to the hands only, tends to manifest from their. The user can have 15+ bones erupt and attack the opponent, aiming to pierce, or to even manipulate the bones to seize the opponent, before proceeding to stab them with the bones. In close combat, the user can be especially dangerous, as their attack pattern becomes unpredictable. The bones can extend up to twenty five meters, and are also quite durable. The can be combined with the All Ash Killing Bones style to further enhance the Jutsus lethality when in use. A versed user in this art can have bones erupt from other parts of their body, to cover for blind sided attacks. The bones are quite slender, but also strong. In reality though, the bones tend to be used as a relentless assault on the opponent as they aim to stab without mercy. The length of the bones are also at the discretion of the user. Who is able to extend and retract them as the see fit.
Combination:Bone Pulse Jutsus

1. I'm going to mail you a calculator. "150+200(Otsu)→475 Stats" Please change that to 350 stats.

2. So basically, you can produce fifteen plus long bones from anywhere on your body and they can be thrown at people at 300 speed? I just want to be sure I am reading this correctly.


↑↑→The 475 was me combining the range(25), Speed(300) and Power(150) to make it 475 lol. I didn't include the +200. But I can see how it causes confusion. In any case, this is what the Jutsu does..



Albeit I already have that Jutsu as a canon tech from the clan page. This time round, the Jutsu is a bit faster, and bones extend a bit further. The Jutsu range was edited to make it 15 instead od 25. The bones doesn't get thrown, just protrudes from the body.



Name: Hakkeshou no Kujo→Eight Trigrams Palm Destruction
Rank: S-rank
Cost: 60+18→78
Upkeep: 15
Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Range: 0-20 Meters
Speed: 300
Power: 400→
Handseals: N/A
Description:  Hakkeshou no Kujo  tends to be utilized as a combination technique. Taking advantage of their ability to control Chakra with great precision. The Ootsutsuki are able to manifest Chakra limbs from their bodies and use as weapons during combat. The chakra limbs numbers up to eight total at any time, with a variety of different limbs in play. Meaning it is up to the user to decide how many limbs of what kind they require to use. The limbs can be used as an extension of the user, making them more formidable during close and mid range combat. The limbs can manifest from the user's back, adding to their unpredictable and other places. They can be used to grip things etc. And also carry quite a bit of power behind their attacks.
Combination: Gentle Fist Techniques

1. "The chakra limbs numbers up to eight total at any time, with a variety of different limbs in play. Meaning it is up to the user to decide how many limbs of what kind they require to use. "

^I don't like charging people for limbs etc. but just be a bit more clear about what you mean by different limbs in play I..e what kind? Meaning you can create chakra arms and legs off of your original eight? I don't mind embellishing the use of limbs in techs per say, I just want to be clear.


↑↑→Clarity given. Total 8 limbs. 4 Chakra, and four human limbs. In a manner of speaking I could create a Chakra arm from an existing one. But that totals to two. So either way, when you count, it totals four extra limbs in play. Edited to reflect that.

Name:  Hakke no Tobatsu→Eight Trigrams Subjugation
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 15
Type: Juuinjutsu Barrier Technique
Element: None
Range:  40 Meters
Speed: 300
Power: 400→
Handseals:  Rat→Rabbit→Dog→Snake
Description:  Hakke no Tobatsu sees the user combine their Eight Trigrams divination style, and incorporate it with Juuinjutsu. The user will first  perform the necessary seals, and send their Chakra out in the area. As far as the level of their Byakugan allows the Eight Trigrams platform to expand. However, the user's own Chakra places a curse within the confines of the divination field. The end result is the immobilization of the targets through paralysis. Their body(s) will go numb having suffered the immediate effects of the technique itself. What this does is leave the opponent open and vulnerable to attack, as they're unable to move a single muscle.
Combination: Gentle Fist Techniques.

1. Lol this is  the smartest tech I've seen from you. However, include the range that this is allotted per your byakugan - or is it 40 meters like you say? Just so I can determine if it is limited or not.

2. Upkeep needs to be 20.

3. I need the juuinjutsu affect to be reversible somehow, please state how. Just so people do not magically get out of this for a reason you do not deem fit. You don't have to state every imaginable way this can be gotten out of, just the basic premise of how to get out of it or a range of its affect. Include examples. Does this affect everyone the same regardless of their endurance or strength for example?


1. Upkeep edited.
2. The range is 40 meters. Full level 4 field is 50 meters. So 10 meters less.
3. Escape Routes added. Its gets tricky with Juuinjutsu.


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on Thu Sep 08, 2016 3:03 pm
Name: Nobara no Kotsu Shishou→Wild Rose Bone Stabbing
Rank: A-rank
Cost: 40+18=58
Upkeep: 10
Type: Nintaijutsu
Element: Bone Pulse
Range: 0-15 Meters
Speed:  300
Power: 150+200(Otsu)→
Handseals: N/A
Description:  



Nobara no Kotsu Shishou is very similar to dance of the larch. Whereby whenever the user is engaged in battle they're able to manifest bones from their body that then attacks the opponent. The bones while not limited to the hands only, tends to manifest from their. The user can have 15+ bones erupt and attack the opponent, aiming to pierce, or to even manipulate the bones to seize the opponent, before proceeding to stab them with the bones. In close combat, the user can be especially dangerous, as their attack pattern becomes unpredictable. The bones can extend up to fifteen meters, and are also quite durable. They can be combined with the All Ash Killing Bones style to further enhance the Jutsus lethality when in use. A versed user in this art can have bones erupt from other parts of their body, to cover for blind sided attacks. The bones are quite slender, but also strong. In reality though, the bones tend to be used as a relentless assault on the opponent as they aim to stab without mercy. The length of the bones are also at the discretion of the user. Who is able to extend and retract them as the see fit.
Combination:Bone Pulse Jutsus


Approved.


Name: Hakkeshou no Kujo→Eight Trigrams Palm Destruction
Rank: S-rank
Cost: 60+18→78
Upkeep: 15
Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Range: 0-20 Meters
Speed: 300
Power: 400→
Handseals: N/A
Description:  Hakkeshou no Kujo  tends to be utilized as a combination technique. Taking advantage of their ability to control Chakra with great precision. The Ootsutsuki are able to manifest Chakra limbs from their bodies and use as weapons during combat. The chakra limbs numbers up to eight total at any time, with a variety of different limbs in play. The eight also includes the user's own.  Meaning it is up to the user to decide how many limbs of what kind they require to use. Typically there are either 4 legs or four arms of varying combinations. Which will number up to four Chakra climbs, plus the user's own natural limbs. The limbs can be used as an extension of the user, making them more formidable during close and mid range combat. The limbs can manifest from the user's back, adding to their unpredictable and other places. They can be used to grip things etc. And also carry quite a bit of power behind their attacks.
Combination: Gentle Fist Techniques


Approved.

Name:  Hakke no Tobatsu→Eight Trigrams Subjugation
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 20
Type: Juuinjutsu Barrier Technique
Element: None
Range:  0-40 Meters
Speed: 300
Power: 400→
Handseals:  Rat→Rabbit→Dog→Snake
Description:  Hakke no Tobatsu sees the user combine their Eight Trigrams divination style, and incorporate it with Juuinjutsu. The user will first  perform the necessary seals, and send their Chakra out in the area. The range of this divination field is 40 meters. However, the user's own Chakra places a curse within the confines of the divination field. The end result is the immobilization of the targets through paralysis. Their body(s) will go numb having suffered the immediate effects of the technique itself. What this does is leave the opponent open and vulnerable to attack, as they're unable to move a single muscle.



  • With 100 Less Endurance than the power of the Technique you are caught.
  • Can pay a Chakra cost of 100 to escape the Jutsu. Its Juuinjutsu, and curse marks are not easily removed.
  • With 100 more Strength than the Jutsu, you can wrestle out, by also paying 70 Chakra.
  • With 100 more Endurance than the Jutsu power, you can wrestle out. Must pay 70 Chakra also.
  • There are no Chakra discounts when wrestling away




Combination: Gentle Fist Techniques.


^If you have 100 more strength or endurance than this jutsu, please lower it to a cost of 50 chakra you pay.
Please note that since the jutsu has a speed of 300, it can be escaped by speed.
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on Thu Sep 08, 2016 7:44 pm
Consider those three approved now.
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on Thu Sep 08, 2016 10:09 pm
Name: Hakkeshou no Kujo→Eight Trigrams Palm Destruction
Rank: S-rank
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 15
Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Range: 0-30 Meters
Speed: 300
Power: 400→
Handseals: N/A
Description: Hakkeshou no Kujo tends to be utilized as a combination technique. Taking advantage of their ability to control Chakra with great precision. The Ootsutsuki are able to manifest Chakra limbs from their bodies and use as weapons during combat. The chakra limbs numbers up to eight total at any time, with a variety of different limbs in play. Meaning it is up to the user to decide how many limbs of what kind they require to use. The limbs can be used as an extension of the user, making them more formidable during close and mid range combat. The limbs can manifest from the user's back, adding to their unpredictable and other places. They can be used to grip things etc. And also carry quite a bit of power behind their attacks.
Combination: Gentle Fist Techniques

These will need to be specified exactly what they are for, you can either use them for hand to hand combat and gripping things, Or jutsu's (which can include the gentle fists), and if you limited it to ONLY Gentle fist techs can be used with this, then i will not ask for this to be made limited, as growing limbs is a rather ardous task.

Name: Sentouken no Genba-One Thousand Swords Death Scene
Rank: S-Limited
Cost: 90
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70 Meters
Speed: 300
Power: 500
Handseals: Dragon→Tiger
Description: Sentouken no Genga is a vicious Bukijutsu Jutsu that is used to merciless pulverize an opponent. The user will use their sword (Mu-Onna) as a catalyst to call forth as the name suggests a collection of one thousand blades. The blades are all twelves meters in height and two meters wide. The Jutsu is usually executed from above the target, causing the blades to rain down and cause devastation with the target area. The blades cover up a range of seventy meters, and can be manipulated during the initiation of the attack. This simply means the user can have the blades fall down in a straight line. Or to simply have them form more of a circle in either to cut off the escape route of the target(s). The formation of the blades and the manner in which they fall, makes the jutsu most formidable. However, while its best to have the Jutsu executed from above, the user can use the Jutsu at ground level. However, the amount of blades released are instead halved.
Combination: Sword Techniques, Elements etc

This one is not all that bad I Suppose, other then having 800 Stats, which Technically would be allowed for a Limited, if it wasn't for all the swords you wish to control, I must request either 125 chakra for this payment or lower the totaling stats to 750 please, or half the number of blades, your choice.

Name: Gentle Fist Art One Blow Body→Canon Jutsu
Rank: S-rank
Cost: 50
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 0-20 Meters
Speed: 300
Power: 400→
Handseals: N/A
Description: A technique born from their innate ability to expel chakra from every tenketsu on their body, a member of the Otsutsuki clan can hit their opponent with a blast of chakra that will send them flying away from the user. It was also shown that this technique can be used with pin-point accuracy to target the weak point of a technique exemplified when Neji Hyūga was trapped by Kisame Hoshigaki's Water Prison Technique, and was able to dispel it. The chakra expelled from the body can be released in a 360 degree motion. Making the technique especially useful in situations where the user is trapped.
Combination: Gentle Fist Techniques!

Honestly I would say that this technique is at best B-rank, its main thing it broke away from was a C-rank technique, and did very little damage

Please Adjust accordingly, also the Range would be much shorter then 20 meters, Self I think is much better range on this one.
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on Fri Sep 09, 2016 11:29 am
1. Hakkeshou no Kujo→Eight Trigrams Palm Destruction→↓

Someone could have told me I posted the same Jutsu twice...
In any case, Jutsu edited to reflect that its more for hand to hand, climbing, gripping. Its not for Jutsus.

2. Sentouken no Genba-One Thousand Swords Death Scene-- Is Now →Hyakuken no Genba-Hundred Swords Death Scene. Changed to 100 blades instead of 1k. So there are now far less blades in play. 720 Stats total.

3. Gentle Fist Art One Blow Body→Canon Jutsu→Edited to B-rank, stats lowered and range lowered to 5 meters.
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on Fri Sep 09, 2016 3:20 pm
Thank you much, those three are approved in my book
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Name: Hakkeshō Kaiten no Touben→Eight Trigrams Palms Revolving Heaven Defence
Rank: S-Rank
Cost: 50
Upkeep: 15
Type: Nintaijutsu
Element: N/A
Range:  Self→0-12 Meters
Speed:  300
Power:  400→
Handseals: None
Description: Revolving Heaven Defence is a much advanced version of the revolving heaven technique. The user instead of physically rotating/spinning, can evoke the same effect even while motionless. This of course grants them great tactical advantage. Through the use of masterful Chakra control, by expelling Chakra through their Tenketsu. The Otsutsuki clan member can have the Chakra rotate/spin violenty to parry and at the same time cause damage to the foe in contact with the shield. It is not unheard of for an Otsutsuki clan member to maintain the Chakra rotation even while airborne. This sees them protected by a revolving sphere of Chakra. The Chakra can be manipulate during its release for more minor instances. The sphere expands out to twelve meters when called upon.  
Combination: Gentle Fist Techniques, Elements & Other creative means!


1. Make the cost 60 please.
2. Keeping in mind that this can be summoned at 300 speed only; and it can defend against 400 power and lower.



Name:  Inkoku Boushi no Jutsu→Seal Engraving Eye Technique
Rank: A
Cost: 45
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range:   90 Meters
Speed:  300
Power: 100
Handseals: None
Description: Inkoku Boushi is a technique utilized by those proficient with the use of the flying thunder god technique. The user of the Jutsu will use their eyes(Byakugan) in order to place their seals in different locations. However, the Jutsu has a range of up to 90 meters. Whereby the user focuses on their target in order to place their flying thunder god seal. Seals placed in this way has a time/post limit of up to 6 posts. The counterpart that requires physical contact follows the manga/anime principles. Once the time limit is up, the seals disappear from whereever they were placed.
Combination: Flying Thunder God Technique!


1. Denied. The byakugan cannot cast seals naturally, and I am not seeing why on earth this is all of a sudden doing this. Given the type of seals that can potentially be made, you understand why letting you simply cast one is problematic.

Name:  Hiraishin Kage Toho→Flying Thunder God Shadow Walking Technique
Rank: S-Rank
Cost: 50
Upkeep: 20
Type: Ninjutsu→Space Time Technique
Element: N/A
Range: 300 Meters
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A
Handseals: N/A
Description: Hiraishin Kage Toho incorporates the Hiraishin technique, and expand on its elements. The user creates a space time field, using shadows wherever they're cast as a means of travel. The Jutsu in this form naturally has itself a limit on its rage. Unlike the flying thunder god original jutsus that can take teleport the user over long distances. The user will step into their own shadow, and emerge from another one instantaneously or at their own leisure. The way in which the technique is utilized, gives no indication that the user uses shadows. Instead it would appear as though the user teleported away through normal means. The jutsu is suitable for deceiving the opponent. The user can step or merge into any shadow(s) within the range of the Jutsu. However, they do not manipulate the shadows themselves.  
Combination:Flying Thunder God Techniques!


Denied. If you want to use shadows get something Nara related and then we can talk. Using shadows for you to teleport in is obviously very wide open so I will need some shadow-related abilities from you first. Smart idea though.
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on Sat Sep 10, 2016 1:17 pm
[color=#ffffff]Name: Jubaku Souken no Jutsu→Curse Creation Technique
Rank: S-rank
Cost: 60
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Juuinjutsu→Medical Jutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Contact
Speed: 200
Power: 500→700 Stats
Handseals: Contact
Description: Jubaku Souken allows the practitioner of the Jutsu the ability to grant another person a curse seal. The technique comes about from a combination of medical jutsu, Juuinjutsu and an understanding of Senjutsu Chakra. With these ingredients, the user can create curse seals and apply them to others. The types of curse seals may differ and must be specified. It is also rather helpful if the user has access to another curse seal. This way, they can properly gain an understanding in the way it works and how to apply it. With this ability the user is able to replicate and modify a curse seal to their liking. By manipulating the properties, the user is capable of giving it different effects.

^I still do not understand the difference between this and simply creating a cursed seal and applying it to someone like you already can do. If you are trying to do something extra, please explain.
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on Sat Sep 10, 2016 1:53 pm
Lets see.

One cant do a thing without others complaining about why is this like that, and why is that like this. Basically, I would feel better knowing that I have Jutsu that allows me to be able to create, examine or replicate a seal. For instance, while I have the capability to give out seals. How do I explain where it comes from? If you're happy with me simply being able to conjure up say the Heaven or Earth seal etc. Then no problem, otherwise I need a way to say this is how its done. Savvy?
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on Sat Sep 10, 2016 2:04 pm
Kurotsuchi wrote:Lets see.

One cant do a thing without others complaining about why is this like that, and why is that like this. Basically, I would feel better knowing that I have Jutsu that allows me to be able to create, examine or replicate a seal. For instance, while I have the capability to give out seals. How do I explain where it comes from? If you're happy with me simply being able to conjure up say the Heaven or Earth seal etc. Then no problem, otherwise I need a way to say this is how its done. Savvy?


Lol I'll hold my tongue. I will wait to see exactly what you do with this since it is more of a tech to create other techs. As I understand it, it does not create an specified seal; but rather can potentially let you do xyz - which will need to be approved.

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on Thu Sep 15, 2016 3:53 pm
Name: Tool Creation Technique→Canon Jutsu
Rank: S-rank
Cost: 60
Upkeep: 10 → Can we add to this 10 when you change the Weapon shape?
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 0-70 Meters
Speed: 300
Power: 350→
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user has the ability to manifest special red glowing malleable chakra, which, when on standby, floats in a chakram-like formation behind their back. The user is able to manipulate it to form various makeshift tools and weapons. The tools created were powerful enough to create craters when struck against the ground and, when used by Kinshiki, cleanly bisect his planet's God Tree. Not only can the user manifest a multiple of tools and weapons at once, but they can also manipulate the tools telekinetically. When dispelling the technique or otherwise, the user is able to disintegrate the tools like shattered glass and reshape them. The malleable Chakra is however not restricted to tools only. The typical tools may result in different variations in order to suit a particular purpose. There are claws, trench knives, chains, kanabo, axes, stakes and other such things.
Combination: Too Creation to create other variants!
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