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on Sun Jul 24, 2016 7:41 am
Name: Ventriloqism
Rank: D-Rank
Cost: 10 Chakra
Upkeep: 5 Chakra
Type: Fuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70m
Speed: N/A
Power: N/A.
Handseals: Monkey
Description: This is a very special trick that can mostly be used for entertaining. To activate the ability the user will first create the monkey handseal then touch a specific surface. Whatever the user touches will develop a small fuin seal that can project the voice of the user, or any other voice the user wants. This seal is mostly used to make inanimate objects speak as though they are real. As long as the user is within 100 meters of the seal the seal will always work.


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on Sun Jul 24, 2016 7:58 am
Please bump to D and add an upkeep cost. Its also a D rank Jutsu so please reduce the range.
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on Sun Jul 24, 2016 8:04 am
Changed to D rank, gave an upkeep of 5 chakra, and I would like not lower the range since the minimum stats for D rank are 100 meters, if that's alright with you.
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on Sun Jul 24, 2016 9:34 am
What does stats have to do with the range here? I will let you have 70 meters here in range ^_^
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on Sun Jul 24, 2016 9:39 am
Changed to 70m
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on Sun Jul 24, 2016 10:16 am
When creating a new jutsu, you split the stats for the jutsu into three areas; Speed, Power, and Range. Speed is how fast it goes, power is how hard it hits in whatever way it hits, and range is obviously the distance it affects. As you can see below, there are ranges in which the technique may fall, this is to show the variations in jutsu'. However, the description can also be a factor, some jutsu that have potent abilities/power or such may have their specifications limited. A spear of ice that is incredible powerful and fast, will have a very short range, and vice versa, something that moves very fast and can go very far, obviously will be pretty weak. Also, staff have the right to request additional stipulations on such jutsu's.

P.S. The fact that stats are ranged does not mean that common sense should never be used. Not every S rank is 750, and we reserve the right to limit your tech if we read and feel it is not as strong as you are describing. Be mature and responsible please, it adds to artistic integrity.

Just for your information and this is nothing against you. But yeah, I asked for a reduction of range, due to the rank of the Jutsu. Yes, ventriloquism might seem a minor feat, but it is also very unique. And placing a seal and having it active within a 100 meter range at only D-rank made no sense. Just because you get 100-200 stats to put towards the Jutsu. Doesn't mean it will be approved, if you completely disregard one stat and place it in another.

In any case.

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on Wed Jul 27, 2016 3:12 pm
Name: Fire Release: Scattering Smoke From The Flame
Rank: A
Cost: 40 Chakra
Upkeep: 20 Chakra
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire Release
Range: 3 Meters
Speed: 497
Power: N/A
Handseals: 1/2 Tiger Seal
Description: This jutsu was solely made to escape the dangers of combat. First, the user must make a tiger seal with only one hand. After, they will feel a sudden rise in body temperature. This is because their body will be engulfed in flames, then morphed into a cloud of smoke. At a speed of 497, this smoke cloud will move forward to where the user was facing until it reaches 3 meters. While in smoke form, nothing solid will be allowed to hit the user, as it would pass through the user's body, and the user will not be able to attack or prepare an attack. This technique is a great way to dodge physical attacks, however, any attack coated with chakra, and any wind attack, will manage to hit the user, and will force the user back to their original form. Once the user creates the tiger seal they will instantly transform, but will be forced to change back after they reached their max range. The user can transform back to their original form at any moment they wish.


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on Sun Jul 31, 2016 3:44 am
1. Can you attack while in this smoke form? If so I would have to deny the technique's approval.

2. Needs an upkeep cost of at least 10 Chakra please.

3. Interesting.
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on Sun Jul 31, 2016 8:52 am
1. Didn't think about that before, lol. Nope, the user cannot attack while in smoke form. They also cannot prepare an attack by performing handseals. They basically cannot do anything except deactivate the jutsu.

2. This jutsu has no upkeep cost because it's destination is absolute. Once the user turns to smoke, within the same post, they should reach their destination of 3 meters. They cannot go any further than that or else the jutsu will force them back to their original form. I figure'd having this stipulation would make things more fair for my opponents.
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on Sun Jul 31, 2016 9:45 am
Point 1 is okay.

2nd point is a no unfortunately. And I shall explain the reason for an upkeep. If the Jutsu remains active for multiple turns then it needs an upkeep cost. Now, if your saying its only for one turn then thats no problem. Maybe you should add an upkeep just in case. Try to anticipate future circumstances.
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on Sun Jul 31, 2016 10:24 am
Alright, I see your point. Added an Upkeep cost of 20.
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on Fri Aug 12, 2016 12:18 pm
Name: Death Arrow
Rank: B Rank
Cost: 30 Chakra per arrow
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Power: 400
Handseals: N/A
Description: This technique can only be used with the demon bow: Swift. Death's arrow is activated by the user tugging the string of Swift back and adding their chakra. Almost magically, a white arrow will begin to form on the bow. If released, the arrow will fly towards a target location, dealing 400 damage to anyone or anything it touches. This arrow is said to be so powerful that it can leave craters in the earth and completely destroy nearby buildings.
Additional information: For more information about Swift, the demon's bow, see here
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on Sat Aug 13, 2016 12:58 pm
Bumping.
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on Tue Aug 16, 2016 5:13 pm
Gonna bump this 1 more time.
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on Tue Aug 16, 2016 9:58 pm
Sarah Uchiha wrote:Name: Death Arrow
Rank: B Rank
Cost: 30 Chakra per arrow
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Power: 400
Handseals: N/A
Description: This technique can only be used with the demon bow: Swift. Death's arrow is activated by the user tugging the string of Swift back and adding their chakra. Almost magically, a white arrow will begin to form on the bow. If released, the arrow will fly towards a target location, dealing 400 damage to anyone or anything it touches. This arrow is said to be so powerful that it can leave craters in the earth and completely destroy nearby buildings.
Additional information: For more information about Swift, the demon's bow, see here

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on Wed Aug 17, 2016 12:34 am
Sarah Uchiha wrote:Name: Fire Release: Scattering Smoke From The Flame
Rank: A
Cost: 40 Chakra
Upkeep: 20 Chakra
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire Release
Range: 3 Meters
Speed: 497
Power: N/A
Handseals: 1/2 Tiger Seal
Description: This jutsu was solely made to escape the dangers of combat. First, the user must make a tiger seal with only one hand. After, they will feel a sudden rise in body temperature. This is because their body will be engulfed in flames, then morphed into a cloud of smoke. At a speed of 497, this smoke cloud will move forward to where the user was facing until it reaches 3 meters. While in smoke form, nothing solid will be allowed to hit the user, as it would pass through the user's body, and the user will not be able to attack or prepare an attack. This technique is a great way to dodge physical attacks, however, any attack coated with chakra, and any wind attack, will manage to hit the user, and will force the user back to their original form. Once the user creates the tiger seal they will instantly transform, but will be forced to change back after they reached their max range. The user can transform back to their original form at any moment they wish.

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on Fri Sep 02, 2016 12:39 pm
Name: Lightning Release: Resurgence.
Rank: A Rank
Cost: 50 Chakra
Upkeep: 40 Chakra
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning Release
Range: Self
Speed: +300
Power: +200
Handseals: None.
Description: The user charges lightning chakra through their body. This will cause an effect where their heart will begin to pump increasingly fast, causing adrenaline to race through the body with incredible speed. This will give the user a +300 rise in speed. Outside, tiny charges of electrical energy will stream through the users body, giving off a sense that they are electrically charged. Because this jutsu places a great stress on the user's heart, the user can only use this technique once. If the user releases the jutsu, the second time they use it they will experience a fatal heart attack and will die within the next post.
Additional Information: While in this form any jutsu created by the user will also be affected. They will experience a rise in speed by 300 and a rise in power by 200. They will also be given an added lightning element, thus a fire style technique will be both a fire and lightning style.

Name: Lightning Release: Lightning Needle.
Rank: S Rank
Cost: 60 Chakra
Upkeep: 50 Chakra
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning Release
Range: 100
Speed: 200
Power: 450
Handseals: One handed lightning seal.
Description: The user summons an electrical needle that extends from their pointy finger to a range of 100 meters. This electrical needle will have a cutting power of 450; although, it's deadliness will not be in its strength. The lightning needle is named so because of how incredibly thin it is. In any area with proper lighting, the needle will be so narrow that the human eye will not be able to pick it up, and so silent that an enemy will not be able to here it unless they are 1 meter close to it. Only in an area of complete darkness, or night time, will the user's foes see this devastating needle coming. However, those that can see chakra, or sense it, will be able to see this jutsu clearly.

Name: Reaper Style: Soul Taking Technique
Rank: S Rank
Cost: 60 Chakra
Upkeep: 0 Chakra
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Length of the weapon.
Speed: +750
Power: N/A
Handseals: N/A
Description: The very pinnacle of sword execution, this technique seeks to reap a targets soul without disturbing their vessel. To perform the technique, the user breathes in deeply, then sends their weapon to a targets body at a blinding speed. If the user reaches the targets body, they will be able to create a cut so clean that the targets body will not even know that it were cut. This means that, even if the user slices through a targets arm, the target's arm will still be attached to the user's body for a brief period, but the target will be unable to use that arm. This technique can be used with any weapon, or jutsu that has a cutting power, as long as it is being held with the user's hand. This technique's power will also rely on the cutting power of the weapon. Although, this technique does have a drawback. After the user uses this, their arms will dislocate, and parts of the bones of their body will begin to crack. Unless seen by a medical shinobi, the arms they used for this technique will be unusable.


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Sarah Uchiha wrote:Name: Lightning Release: Resurgence.
Rank: A Rank
Cost: 50 Chakra
Upkeep: 40 Chakra
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning Release
Range: Self
Speed: +300
Power: +200
Handseals: None.
Description: The user charges lightning chakra through their body. This will cause an effect where their heart will begin to pump increasingly fast, causing adrenaline to race through the body with incredible speed. This will give the user a +300 rise in speed. Outside, tiny charges of electrical energy will stream through the users body, giving off a sense that they are electrically charged. Because this jutsu places a great stress on the user's heart, the user can only use this technique once. If the user releases the jutsu, the second time they use it they will experience a fatal heart attack and will die within the next post.
Additional Information: While in this form any jutsu created by the user will also be affected. They will experience a rise in speed by 300 and a rise in power by 200. They will also be given an added lightning element, thus a fire style technique will be both a fire and lightning style.

Denied. Similarities between this and LRA, except no lightning shroud etc. If you had LRA or something like that, then a "form" of variation would be acceptable.

Name: Lightning Release: Lightning Needle.
Rank: S Rank
Cost: 60 Chakra
Upkeep: 50 Chakra
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning Release
Range: 100
Speed: 200
Power: 450
Handseals: Finger Snap
Description: The user summons an electrical needle that extends from their pointy finger to a range of 100 meters. This electrical needle will have a cutting power of 450; although, it's deadliness will not be in its strength. The lightning needle is named so because of how incredibly thin it is. In any area with proper lighting, the needle will be so narrow that the human eye will not be able to pick it up, and so silent that an enemy will not be able to here it unless they are 1 meter close to it. Only in an area of complete darkness, or night time, will the user's foes see this devastating needle coming. However, those that can see chakra, or sense it, will be able to see this jutsu clearly.

Hmm. Only issue I have with this is Lightning becoming silent. Too noisy of an element for that to work. And without something else as a factor to say why its silent. I am also requesting some hand seals please.

Name: Reaper Style: Soul Taking Technique
Rank: S Rank
Cost: 60 Chakra
Upkeep: 0 Chakra
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Length of the weapon.
Speed: +750
Power: N/A
Handseals: N/A
Description: The very pinnacle of sword execution, this technique seeks to reap a targets soul without disturbing their vessel. To perform the technique, the user breathes in deeply, then sends their weapon to a targets body at a blinding speed. If the user reaches the targets body, they will be able to create a cut so clean that the targets body will not even know that it were cut. This means that, even if the user slices through a targets arm, the target's arm will still be attached to the user's body, but the target will be unable to use that arm again until they seek a medical shinobi's help. This technique is especially fatal if the user cuts through an opponents neck, this is because briefly separating a head from a body will still cause death; albeit, the death will be very painless. This technique can be used with any weapon, or jutsu that has a cutting power, as long as it is being held with the user's hand. This technique's power will also rely on the power of the weapon.


1. Reap a target's soul without disturbing their vessel? Please explain.

2. Is there like a preparation beside's breathing in? We're talking about 750+ Speed here. Is this your whole body moving at such speed or just your hand? Then I gotta ask, how much stress is this putting on the body? I like the idea of the technique, a swift death. But it needs some explanation on certain parts.

3. How do we determine a weapon's power here? Are you saying that a basic Kunai with hardly any cutting power can still achieve the same feat? And you do realize that 750+ puts this down as a Limited Jutsu right?
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on Sun Sep 04, 2016 9:47 am
Lightning Release: Resurgence:

I'm sorry Kuro, I have much respect for you and your grading but I am going to have to make an argument about this.

  • A. You are denying me on the grounds that this is similar to LRA. I can understand that on this site you do not want people making water-down versions of limited jutsu's, but with a jutsu such as LRA which uses a nature perfectly fit for speed increase, it is VERY easy to make a jutsu similar to LRA. You cannot deny a technique just because it uses the property of its nature the same way another technique does. My technique increases the user's speed through lightning, Chidori is a technique that increases the user's speed through lightning, lightning is a nature that can generally increase the user's speed. Granted, Chidori does not cover itself in lightning coating; which brings me to point B.

  • B. The only way this technique is similar to LRA is in its speed increase. The user does not coat himself in lightning armor which grants endurance or power. It is very simple, speed increase. In fact, if I used chakra instead of lightning, then I am sure that you would not turn your head to lightning release armour if you read my jutsu. I repeat, this technique does not shock people when it touches them, increase endurance, or grant the user more power.

  • C. What it does, however, is grant the user's jutsu's, any jutsu that may be, a lightning nature and a power and speed boost, which is still very different from lightning release. Instead of increasing the user's speed and power, this increases the user's jutsu's speed and power. This, I am sure, a person could do with the lightning release armour as well, but no where in the rules of creating limited jutsu's does it say that I cannot copy a variation of a limited technique. In fact, this isn't even a variation of a single canon lightning release armour technique, unless you count a custom lightning release variation, which I will then point back to the rules and state that I do not see a rule saying that I cannot create a jutsu with the similarity of a custom variation for a limited technique.

  • D. Yes, I understand you are only following the rules, and yes I know that there are few similarities between my technique and lightning release armour, but you CANNOT instantly deny my technique because you see those few similarities. If I were to maybe create a jutsu similar to lightning release in that it would give a power increase, speed increase, and an endurance increase and used chakra instead of lightning, you still would have no basis to deny that jutsu because its difference and uniqueness will be its nature, completely branching it away from Lighting Release. The thing about Naruto forums is that we all have creative minds, and our creative minds will clash with the original creators creative mind. As a mod or admin that are trying to follow the rules you created, you cannot instantly deny a technique unless there is a complete similarity to the jutsu. It is your duty to make sure that a limited jutsu is not copied, not to make sure that a jutsu is not created because it appears to copy another jutsu.  

  • Like I said, I respect you decisions Kuro, and I think you are a genius when it comes to creating jutsu's, but I really want to keep this jutsu the way it is and will argue you down if I have to.


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  • It is not completely silent, I just added a radius to where people can hear it. If you are a meter away then you can hear it. I can add more meters to make it more realistic if you want, but my limit is 10. It's an assassination technique and I would like for it to remain an assassination technique. Being loud is not how I perform my assassinations.

  • Added the one handed lightning release handsign as a handsign.


Reaper Style: Soul Taking Technique:

  • 1. It's a stupid saying to match the name. It's basically a cut so fast that the body is not disturbed by the cut but the person is dead. If I cut your head, it'll take a short while before your body shows that you are dead but you will already be dead before your body shows anything. It's confusing, I know, I confused myself, which is why I am editing it a little.

  • 2. It's just your hands that you move at a speed of +750. Although, after reading the limited tech rules, I forgot that it has to have a drawback. So, I put that using this tech will dislocate the arm that you used from its joint, and parts of the bones from the fingers, hand, and arm will crack, making them unusable. Good enough drawback, don't you think? If you wanna add some drawback of your own that you think is greater than this then I'll be happy to hear it.

  • 3. If the weapon can cut through an opponents skin then it is usable for this technique, no matter if it cannot cut through an opponents bone. The thing about kunais and weapons similar to them is that they do not have a determined cutting power. All we know is that its powerful enough to slit a throat or be sent through a person's body. The only reason I applied the cutting power rule is because if I use this technique with a weapon or jutsu that is incredibly weak against a person with an endurance stronger than the weapon and it were to successfully cut through an opponent, then it would start an argument about how this technique is unfair. At least with this rule, its success does not rely on it alone, but the weapon being used. Meaning, if I had a weapon with a power of 200 and I used this technique on someone with an endurance of 600, this technique will not work. If you want, however, I could always get rid of this rule and let the flame wars start, lol.

  • I didn't know it was going to be considered a limited until I read the limited rules. My thoughts on it? I don't care. I can't get any other limited anyway, lol. All the oldies are taking the ones I want.
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on Sun Sep 04, 2016 1:31 pm
Lightning Release: Lightning Needle:

1. I don't know what the Lightning hand seal is. So pretty please add in the actual name?

2. That ten meter limit things sounds good. Please add that.

Reaper Style: Soul Taking Technique:

Weapon Power and general strength becomes a factor here. For one, if someone with higher endurance gets hit. I wouldn't expect you to slice through them, simply based on speed. I will leave you with this, apply the strength vs endurance factor etc. This technique will become situational at times.

With that said the drawback is also sufficient.

I can approve of it as a limited Jutsu.

Lightning Release: Resurgence:

Still Denied. Don't argue with me Missy, because I like you. I really don't feel like budging on this one. And I say that with the greatest of respects for yourself. But here is what I might consider.

+195 to user Speed.
+150 to Power
+150 to Jutsu Speed.








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